AN: this was originally going to be a submission to Jayeliwood's sexy Edward contest but then a problem occurred. It was too damn long to be a one-shot. So instead I decided to split the one extremely long chapter into two parts (maybe three or I might even extend this into its own story. I'm not to sure yet but it depends on you my reader. I already know where I want to leave the story but it's kinda a cliff hanger and it will leave you hungry for more.) The only thing that I ask is for people to review. How do I know if you like my story or not if you dint tell me? So please review I don't think that I can ask that enough. So I give you my story 'one last time'
WARNING: I actually have plot before the lemon so if you just want a lemon and no plot then save yourself some time and don't read. Also this is my first lemon and I thought that this contest would be a good way for me to try it out so if it doest work for you let me know. Reviewing helps! PLEASE be patient with my spelling. I do have a learning disorder and it makes it rather hard to be able to spell correctly.
EVEN BIGER WARNING: You might not like my Edward. OOC doesn't begin to describe him. But I think that this is how Edward would be if he was a pirate and was born about three to four hundred years sooner so if you don't like him at least you have my sad excuse to why he acts the way that he does.
The sun was going down and I was finally able to go up on deck. The vampire crew was restless, waiting below deck while the humans that we use during the day time to sail and for food was up above controlling where we went. Even if we only used the humans when we were near other ships we still didn't like giving that much power to a lesser species. Other wise they were in the holding cells below deck not knowing when they would be brought above and not knowing when their last day would be alive.
But of course, I knew all of this, because I was the captain of the ship. I was in charge of all of these maggots and it was I who ruled the seas. I was a vampire and the only vampire pirate. Any ship that we see and that sees us we take. My kind is persecuted on land and they hide is sewers; I take the sea and freedom. Nothing and no one stands in my way.
I exit out of the captain's courtiers. The humans that were around quickly scurry below deck, like the worthless rodents that they are. They were starting to get week, tonight will be the night that they are replaced.
My first mate comes up from below deck. Emmett was his name. I viewed him as a brother, and in many ways he was my brother. We were created by the same vampire. We were taught how to control our urges together, and just like boys learning trades, out father figure taught us how to sail so after he decided to retire a new generation would take to the seas and we would rule.
"We need to make port tonight," I whispered to him so the other vampires wouldn't start the fun yet. We didn't kill the old humans until we got new ones. We put on a show for the new ones so they knew to fear and respect us. "Tie up the prey."
"Yes captain." He said and started to walk off he didn't get two feet before I placed my hand on his shoulder.
"Bring Jasper with you." I added. He was the only other vampire on this ship that I could trust (excluding Emmett and myself.). He nodded his head and continued on.
By now all of the vampires were on deck and I noticed a lot of black eyes. This was going to be difficult; if they couldn't control themselves then we were in trouble. The humans weren't that smart but they would notice if and entire town was killed, and we would never be able to capture everyone before at least one snuck off and told. But I also needed some new crew members to so I could always just "punish" some if necessary.
I walked towards the wheal. "Go" I told the man who was at it; he gave a little nod of the head and backed away from the wheal and went to go do some other work. I didn't need any maps. All I did was fallow my nose toward the nearest strongest smell of humans. And speed wasn't a problem either because if I ever wanted to get anywhere fast I just got some men to get out and push.
All I knew that was tonight I was going to treat my self. I think that a nice Governor's daughter would do. We vampires have other needs than blood and a woman's touch is something that is very rare. Who knows? If she pleases me I could always keep her as my mate.
It didn't take long before I found the strongest smell of human. And it wasn't long after that the crew noticed that we were heading towards that sweet aroma. This changed the mood on the ship drastically everyone was harder at work and without being told two men jumped off the deck and started to swim behind us pushing the ship along. Soon we were moving 5x as fast we were with the humans manning our ship.
Emmett was soon standing behind me on the right and Jasper was on my left. With a nod of my head they came forward. "I have a special mission for you two." I whispered so the others won't hear. "I want you to go to the Governor's house and bring me his daughter. I want her alive and unharmed. If you complete this mission successfully you could go and bring back any girl that you want from the town and do what ever you please to her."
The reward that I offered was a big one. I had a strict rule that any woman that came aboard the ship was mine and mine only. If the men wanted to have fun they had to do it when we made port and we hardly stayed long enough for them to have their way with a girl.
"Yes sir." They said together in unison.
I saw the land coming I larger and larger by the second. Maybe I should also reward the two that jumped off to push. Laurent and James were good pirates, and decent enough allies; they would stay that way longer if I gave them rewards often.
"Gentlemen" I spook loud enough to catch the attention of all of the vampires who were onboard. "Tonight we feast." This was greeted with sounds of applause from every vampire aboard the ship. "Let no man who sees you live! But bring as many back on board as possible alive. Oh and Gentlemen, treat yourself to a Girl while we are here." Cheers were loud now and I knew that the humans that were under our feet were becoming worried.
We sailed up to the dock and tied the ship up. We dropped our planks and the men left the ship. I never left the ship. I had no purpose to. The men knew their duties and they were about to have some fun.
I went back into my room to prepare. I wanted the girl to have no question in her mind of what was going to happen to her tonight. I lit candles. I wanted to be able to see her fully, and I made sure that the bed was made properly. The only thing that I knew was that she won't die from this act maybe in a week if she angers me, or maybe in a month when I bore of her and decide to get a new girl. It wasn't five minuets after they had left I herd footsteps coming towards the ship.
I knew Emmett was one of them because he shuffles his feet slightly with his steep. I was waiting in my cabin for them to bring her to me. I walked over to my desk; I knew that this would be the best place for me to be sitting for when she was brought into the room. I put my feet on top of the desk and leaned back in my chair.
They were on deck of the ship now; I could hear her heart beat now it was rapid; I knew that she was scared. The foot steps came towards my cabin door. It seamed to open too slowly but I knew that it was just my anticipation that made it seam that way.
The door was suddenly thrown open. Being held up between Emmett and Jasper was the most beautiful young girl that I had ever laid my eyes on. She had the most beautiful deep chocolate eyes; and with matching brow hair. She was wearing a blue dress that showed her off in all the right ways and the colour with her skin tone was something that would have made me fall over if I wasn't already sitting. She looked up at me with her beautiful eyes and then she fainted.
I leaped off my chair and ran to the other side of the room and seeped the girl up into my arms. I didn't notice her sent before. It was perfectly sweet and it made my mouth fill with venom, I knew that I would have to feed before I had me way with this girl.
I looked up at Emmett and jasper to thank them and tell them to go and find who they wanted to spend their night with and take aboard with us when I noticed two girls bound together behind them. On was lean and tall with blond hair and the other was short and skinny with hair so dark I wouldn't have been able to see it if I wasn't a vampire. "Have fun." I told them instead.
"No problem." Emmett said and started to walk off to where his and Jaspers girls where. But Jasper interrupted his plans."
"When are we going to eat?" he asked. I didn't know why he asked, we fallowed the same pattern that we always had. The crew came back with our new food supply and then we feasted in front of them. Except me I always took my meals in my rooms. That way there would be no surprise if I accidentally killed her, she knew that it was coming.
"Soon." I answered.
They walked off and brought the girls with them. They would put them in the rooms that they shared together. Since Emmett was the first mate he had his own two rooms and he decided to share them with jasper after he joined our coven.
I placed the beautiful girl in my arms on my bed and went back to close the door. I took my set again and looked at the girl. I let everything about her sink into my mind, memorizing it.
Her skin was too pail for someone who lived in one of the hottest places in the world, but it was flawless none the less. Her hair was tied back in a tight bun. And her corset looked as if it was suffocating her and not trying to helper in any way.
Well that wasn't going to do. It couldn't me to comfortable for her. I had the pins out of her hair and it loose around her face with in seconds. I preferred her hair down. it made her seem more wild and daring, for some reason that gave me strange fluttering in the pit of my stomach. Now for the corset, to loosen it I would have to take off her bodice first. Once that was loosened I ripped the string on her corset off completely.
As soon as the changes were made I her take a sharp intake of breath; No wonder she fainted, she couldn't breath in the first place! Now that oxygen was coming to her brain colour started to appear her cheeks again. All of this was good sings, I knew that she was strong enough to survive the night (if she can live for eighteen years with suffocating herself everyday I was sure that she would be able to have sex with a vampire and live to tell the tail.) And for some strange reason I wanted her to. I wanted her to be able to live. Maybe it was time for me to retire and maybe I could chouse this girl to retire with, just like how Carlisle chose Esmee? Would I choose her?
I looked at her. She appeared to be sleeping now and I didn't blame her. The sun was starting to rise on the horizon and she looked like she had about as much seep all night as what I did. That's fine; I would let her sleep for now. I will have to do something all day while the sun was up.
I exited out of the cabin. The rest of the crew had arrived back aboard the ship. They were becoming restless being this close to land and with the sun rising. "lets hit the open water and then feast." I called to he men who just climbed aboard the ship. I looked over the men and I noticed that Laurent and James had brought a little treat with them to share. She was a redhead spit ball. They had to bind her and they had their hands full trying to get her below deck.
The rest of the crew was securing the newcomers below deck and they were bringing the old ones above. That was when I noticed Tanya. She was the last girl that was brought aboard the ship for me. I jumped from where I was over looking the crew and landed in front of her. "Where do you think that you are going?" I asked her. She was extremely nervous and she was showing it. She knew what was coming.
"Where everyone else is going." She said not looking up at me.
"Oh no, you get privet treatment." I told her and then picked her up and ran her to my room.
She was whimpering when she entered my room. It was a shame; she was going to wake up the angle that currently occupied my bed. But that didn't matter, she was going to have to wake up some time and it was important for her to witness what I was about to do to Tanya.
Tears were now dripping down Tanya's face. I hated it when they cried and I didn't want the girl who was in my bed to have her first impression of me that I was a monster but in order to make sure that she was going to obey me I needed to have that fear established.
"P-plea-se" Tanya was now begging for me to spare her life. Really I was giving her mercy. If I let the crew have her who knew what would come of her but with me her death would be quick and painless while the crew liked to place venom into their victims suck it out and place it in again in a different part of their body. "d-do-n't let me d-die here."
I crouched down beside her and whispered "You know to much. There is no turning back for you. The only choice that you have left is to die by my hand or by theirs." The timing was perfect with my words because as soon as they left my lips the screams of the men erupted from out side the door. "Do you really want to go out there?" I asked her.
She quickly shook her head no. I was so concentrated on my victim that I didn't here the girl behind me wake up.
AN: I know I left an insanely long authors note at the beginning of this chapter so I'm not expecting you to read this one to. But I had to get this out. THIS IS NOT THE END. THERE IS MORE TO COME. IF YOU LIKED IT EVEN ALITTLE PLEASE REVIEW AND THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL COME OUT A LOT FASTER!!
Thank you to everyone who read my chapter and please read more. Also if you liked this read my other one that I have started I haven't abandoned it but I felt that I needed to take a brake from I basically because lots of really bad and sad stuff were about to happen to the charters and in after the chapter that I'm currently working on for it I don't know where it is going to go (I do have a basic outline but I don't know little things :P)
Any way of you like my work pleas continue to read if not tell me what I need to work on (other than spelling I know that I cant spell its called dyslexia and it sux) so yea I'm going to stop now because I know that half the readers don't read the authors notes.