I know Spelling Grammer and all that stuff but im finish wth the first chap
which since im slow took me like 2 and a half hours..Well Enjoy though it's
probally stupid oh well....enjoy!!!
ok......First Off It's 3:00 am...So I may mess up writing it's my first time on the site.....so ya.....Anyways I'll Start Off With The Human Characters then The Other Characters and blahhh(and I added 7 new ghost or more...ok!!!
Human Characters::::Susan Taylor---Slightly Tan Typical Blonde Perfect girl.......Kayla Anderson---Tan Brunette Short hair not very smart but she's the comedian of the group....Jack Darlin:Half Mexican Hot Pop. Guy with Spikey Black Hair (a real live version of Son Gohan) Gaz Thompson-- Pale White Goth. Chick always has an insult gets P.Oed easily...Tucker---- Geeky Black Boy with Glasses and a cap Genius of the group....Jake Dimwit--- annoying kinda stupid skinny white boy(Im White 2..) who likes Susan...
Ghosts:ALL Including Dennis Rafkin.....and a few I added.. :)
13 Ghosts:Evil Shall Never Die!!!
YAYYYYYYYYY I"TS HALLOWEEEENNN!!!!! "Kayla Screamed at her Friend Susan who didn't seem to be paying attention to a word she even said........Suddenly Two Guys came by smirking and Susan then said........
Susan--What are you Idiots Smirking at?
Jack--oh nothin.....
Jake--ya what he said.....
Kayla---Hey!!I have a Killer idea!!! How about we skip Tuckers Party tonight!!!!
Susan---Sure Fine by Me...I wouldnt want to blow my reputation hangin at some geeks party.....
Jake--i yie Miss Sue!!(MarySuehehe)
Susan--Screw Off DimWit!!!!
Jake--Really???
Kayla rolled her eyes as they began thinking of how to excape the party..because first they had to show up and pretend their having fun...
Jack Smirked and Said---ok heres the plan......
AT The Party
Tucker was dressed as a hippie and there was a big disco ball hangin from the ceiling...and about 60 kids chillin and chattin..When the door slammed open and in walked 4 weird looking people...
Susan--OMG!! why does it suddenly feel like I walked back into the 70's?
Jake--oh i know It could be the disco ball and tuckers oufit...!!
Kayla Laughed..as Susan simply replied
Susan--No Shit Sherlock!!! I was being Sarcastic which apparently you have never heard before!!!
Their Oufits were weird Susan---was dressed as a bloody ballerina...Kayla--- a witch...what more to say?? Jack--a Jock as usual....(kinda like Royce) Jake---a newsie...? Go Figure!!!!
Tucker--Great Costumes Great yar all here!! didnt think yad show......
Susan mumbling--didnt want 2....
Tucker--what?
Kayla--umm..nothin..she said great oufit!!!
Tucker-Thanks!!!
They were partying when susan was flirting with a guy and talking to her friend Latiffany and their conversation went on and on.....until.............
Kayla came in screaming Jacks dead!!!!!!!!
All--what!!!!??
Kayla--HE"S IN THE BASEMENT!!!!!!!!
All run to the basement eager to see the dead body of jack that they couldnt hear the laughter up stairs
Kayla--what Dumbasses!!!
"Soon all 4 started to leave while Kayla was singing I put a spell on you and now your mine..I cant stop the things I do I lieee..and so on.. While Jake sang Jeepers Creepers!!
Susan wasnt paying attention when something touched her back and she turned around and screamed only to see Tucker with a Goth Chick Gaz.....
Susan--damn it tucker!!! what are you doing here?!?
Kayla-ya ur supposed to check out the dead body.."she said before bursting out laughing"
Tucker--haha reaalll funny!! Now were are u guys going?
Jack--aww..just checking to see if theres any haunted houses around....
Gaz--ooohhh ....I know a perfect one..It's not far from here It's made of Glass...
Kayla--a haunted glass house?
Gaz--yes and theres a story that says 20 ghosts haunt it....I heard their names and Personallity are.... (NOT IN ORDER OK)
1.The First Bourn Son--this kid may seem nothin...but don't act all cuddly near him...he may seem to be cute but behind that innocent smile there lives a dark past..just awaiting to be reopen...he was killed while playing a simple childs game until he didnt see the arrow come down until it was too late...he's one creepy lil. kid..and you sure as hell dont want to play a game that consist of metal or pointy object with Billy Michaels...aka Billy The Brat!!!
2.TheAngryPrincess--You sure as hell don't want to mess with this chick..sure to you's guys she seems innocent being naked with gashes and all but she carries a butcher knife...and will rip you a new one if you piss her off..oe she'll just do it for fun...her names Dana she commited suicide for not thinking of herself to be pretty like most girls..it was a road of deppressionn...to her end....but make sure to stay away from the bathroom girls and be careful about standing to close to the tub..DONT WAH YOUR FACE OR DRINK THE WATER FROM THE BATH TUB..ok...don't know where it's been....I call her Dana the Chick..
3.TheTornPrince---ok..ladies like the last one dont go falling for this guy sure he may look like a James Dean wannabe and all and may be cute in one perspective...But they say he played alot of baseball..soo wouldnt want to get to close to him...he's like a good boy gone bad...it seems his baseball bat and his Tuff car are his pride in joy..so I suggest stay away from him..if you piss him off your head will be the baseball..and girls he'll try to get you to trust him....but dont he may end up killing you afterwars or do som innapropiate things to you's....so stay away..It's said he was in a race with a local Greaser(greasers kick ass..watch Outsiders) when he crashed over a hill and got burned on one side...so he gets angry easily dont you think him and A.P. should get 2-gether?? Royce Clayton...the soc.?
4.TheWitheredLover--This Lady ghost is nice she died saving her family in a fire...She has a kind soul..and I envy her for that....She seems like a ghost YOU CAN Trust...she'll try her best to help you..if she can..not much about her I can Say but that she's a great Mother of a ghost Jean Critacose(wonderful mom)
5.Hammer--Don't Trust this Moron...besides he needs a face lift and a miracle..(just kiddin) he's tough he's like a damn bull all he sees is red and we'll ram you the first chance he gets..he has a tendentcy to scare pple when they at least exspect it(Dennis..lol) So I stay awayumm..He used to be a blacksmith who the crowd framed him of somethin(sorry cant remember) and he snapped killing pple and the town pple killed him.in a viloent way by jabbing nails into him...u get the picture I call him The JackHammer!!!
6.TheBoundWoman---Sure..she may of seemed innocent everyone liked her looks mainly her b/f..and it was prom night the fateful day he caught her in the arms of another man and thats when he dragged her away..and bound her hands..killed her after yelling calling her a trampy bitch stuff like that...and threw her either under or near the football field(gee I would of just Broke up with her not bloody murder her!!) and the peeps..fuzz..whoever found her Im guessin a few days after the inncedent...But she may seem like your average Mary Sue..but she can trick you maily if your a dumb little kid named Bobby(lol) to come down to see her..it says that she haunted the prom pratically and if she caught a girl with a man she grabbed the guy and killed him....So I'd stay away from this Jezzabelle(Ap might be one more of it) maybey she should of turned Lez. if she hated guys that much or broke up with b/f since he was really abusive...no...he'd still probally kill her ass..n/m.....I cal, her Sue the Man Hater!!
7.ThePilgrimless--Not much to say about this one except she lived in the olden days and towns people thought her to be an evil witch so they killed her..sure she may be old but i'd stay away from her old wrinkly ass..hell...If she was a witch I wouldnt want to get close to her heelll No! I call her The Witch Sorecerress
8.TheGreatChild--Now this is one big Tommy Pickles you wouldnt want to mess around with...he carries a freakin axe and is extremly largeeee!! I kinda feel sorry for his mummy who has to change his damn diaper!!(shudder) anyways..His mom and him go to a freak show and some tall man rapes the mum and she got her pride and joy the big kid!! and after she gets killed he snaps and tries to kill the townfolk(or whoever) but ends up getting killed as well...I'd stay away from him mainly if ur a midgit Hobbit any person...at all because if hes close to you and he trips Im saying that his fat ass body will squash you!! and thats one way to die.. so stay awayyy..from Tommy Pickles..I say It's Tommy Pickles Gone Mad!!!
9.TheDireMother--kinda like above she gets raped has the fat kid her pride and joy doesnt want him to grow up so he stays like that his whole life...she gets killed and she wears doll clothes..(weird) and she creeps me out when she smiles....I call her My size Barbie....Barbie gone Ghost...
10.TheTorso--Some guy that looks like he's been in a blender a few times...he was a gambler and I guessed he cheated because some pple. (more like the Italian Mofia) come and beat the hell out of him and throw him itto that thingy...He's not real harmful..The only thing he can do is moan and scream and cry..but when you see him you attend to scream.....Just be careful wouldnt want to step on his head or slip on his blood.. oh ya they wrapped him in something that looks plastic or somethic his superhero name shall be ..wait The Adventures Of Blender Boy!!!! or as I call him TaterSalad....
11.TheJackal---OMG..Now heres a character you surely as heellll dont want to mess with he may look funny with a cage on his head...but remember his hiddious laugh..that can send chills up your spine and make you shiver...he has claws and is not afraid to use him..sure he is EXTREMLEY harmful..mainly to girld he has a nasty life or fantasy of raping every girl you see..so be careful girl!! to him every girl is a whore prostatute hooker skank slut..whatever....But you cant really blame him since he was born to one...and he was back in the day where girls prance around like that....soo..I'd cry and scream if I were trapped in a cage house closet room anywhere with The Jackal...He seems to take everything you say or do as a joke...(???) and laughs even more when the girls screaming in pain or cries he's soo sadistic....I wonder if he has ever found love in a girl without havin to force himself on her? But he's always lookin for fun and stuff when a girl comes around...sure he may be the sign as Hells Winter....but if u try to stand up to him you die stand down..you die..Inyway it dont matter unless you have spped of a bullet like SuperMan or a anime dude..or can shoot web like Spider-Man...then you may have a chance but if u dont.You have No chance In Hell!!! sure Jackal May seem cool to you if this was a movie..shux he may even be ur fav. ghost but this is real life not a Fantasy world!!!!!!!!To you this may seem far fetched like a Fantacy world and that ghosts dont exist but Ghosts are real!! there not jusat dreams lil kids have ..Not ALL ghosts are as friendly as Casper or as silly as The Ghostly Trio.....Ghosts Like The Jackal are Dandreous and could kill you without a second thought..There all out for revenge......I call TheJackal Ryan Kuhn....Satan Himself..it said he proudly or no choice but walked into the fire at the mental place he put himself at....cya I call him Doc.Satan....
12.Juggernaut---Now This is one crazy ass Mo-Fo you wouldnt want to have a tea party with...since he's a 7 foot tall serial killer....that likes to pick up people and smash them....his real names Breaker and dang..he surely loves to kill people it said whiles he was killing someone the Fuzz came and shot him down..That explains all the bullot holes...But Breaker and The Jackal are the most feared Ghosts since they seem to like killing people more than anybody....but all I can Say he was one of the ghosts that died Violently...I call him The Breaker!!!! P.S. If he catches you je'll grin and chase after you and try to break ur back or slam you and the jackal will help with shedding ur blood all over the house...while...The First Bourne Son Paints a pretty picture with ur blood as his paint....and A.P. can take another BloodBath...while the rest of the ghosts go swimming....or have a party while ur body is decapitated ur head well be the The disco ball and the only date you'll get will be the Torso....
(MORE GHOSTS?!? OKKK)
13.Dennis Rafkin (The Lost Soul)--Sure this guy may of seemed like an idiot at times but you hafta admit you loved him since he was the only smart one at that glass house when he was hurt by the Hammer and killed by The Juggernaut....but lucky he came back as a ghost in the end and said that arthur could help his kids and it wasnt over...Denny here is a ghost I and other girls wouldnt mind dating who cares about if he has a pulse he's still cute and funny as well as protective and strong this is a ghost that will try to help you through ur troubles....I call him Dennis The Great!!!
14.TheBraveKnight--A knight that tries to flirt with girls so girls u can probally trick him into helping you he hates the guys if u dudes look at him the wrong way his Sword will be place somewhere unpleasant....He's back in the 1700's killef and betrayed by the one princess he loved she sent assasins after him when she told him to go run an arin....He died with 2 knifes stuck in his chest...He carries a sword...that hes not afraid to use...Lets just hope ur a pretty girl he'll like...His names Timothy Randall the 2nd(weirdnameiknow)
15--The Suicidal Teenager(My lil. Cousin came up with it so I used it)--Is about a 18 yr old girl in the eighties who hated her life so she simply jumped into the river and drowned herself...she's an ok ghost she may help you if shes in a good mood.....her names Jana Anne Watson..Her Best Driend Is Sarah Daniells(youll find out who)nothin much to say about her except she was so depressed and talked about killing herself from the age she was 8 so about 10 yrs. (I know yad think her parents would of done somethin about it but her mom smoked way to many of those funny ciggarettes and Her dad got drunk way to much to care about what she thought) I call her Jana The Sweet!!
16--The Burnt Child(Ok Thanks Se Hinton Cuz Imborrowing ur characters Dally and Johnny to be 2 of my ghosts thank u consider this a minature crossover) --Is about a cute 16 yr old Greaser boy who died in a hospital his back was didnt look to good it was broken...and he was burnt all over...Hes called the burnt Child because He looked younger than he already was......he looked more like someone lil. brother..He's a good ghost he'll try to help you the best he can...His Name Johnny Cade :he died while him and his friend Ponyboy saved kids from a church fire they may of caused while stayin there smokin.....so Johnny and Ponyboy blame themselves and go and save them and while Their Tuff friend Dallas pulls Ponyboy out it kinda claps on Johnny and Dally pulls him out..but later Sadly Johnny dies.....Johnny The Brave!!!
17--The Greazer Punk--(lame I couldnt think of one...) A boy Name Dally Winston who was friends to Johnny and Dally couldnt take it that Johnny died so he robbed a store and got shot down by the Fuzz(which I think he wanted) and Now he's a ghost along with Johnny..Dally may scare you he may be good looking but his shirts soaked in blood...and he carries some switchblades with him...cant really tell if hes a good ghost..he flirts with you if ur a gurl..but tries to start sumthin if ur a guy that looks a little socy to him... but hes ok....I Call him Dally The HERO!!!!!
18.The Breakthrough Queen---It's weird this may be the nicest ghost there is though she looks to have an arrow sticking out of her head chest and shoulder....but she seems happy to have humand around..since she's surrounded by ghosts all the time she's 14 yrsold her best frind is Jana..her names Sarah Daniells..and she tries to protect the humans Mainly girls from the ghosts.....She's My Fav.Creation!!! since she looks kinda like me(lol) she has short messy blonde hair brown eyes(me 2!! but my names different) I call her Sarah the Gift from God!!!
19.(borrowed another u can guess who he is im not tellin tell me who he is and i'll say if your right its real easy since hes a tall skellington ok he's not a ghost but who cares who likes to sing who is he?
20--Bloody Mary--a slightly diff. story youve heard of this is about a red head popular girl who had everything she could ever want until her friends played a nasty trick that theyll one day regret...they killed her younger brother age:11 on accident bye scaring him not thinking he'll somehow trip on a rollerskate and break his neck....or a trick where they sent her mom in a coma...finally the day came when they got 2 far by killing off her b/f by shooting him 2 death so at s surprise party...she murdered all her friends stabbed them to death with a knife or axe or shooting them..she made some torture but its ok if u were her close or best friend she made it easy bye killing you fast bye shooting you in the head or heart...hehe....soon the Fuzz showed up and thought she was crazy they put her in a staightjacket and the next day they found out the room they put her in was the one of the victims sister and poor Maryanne was covered in blood her whole straightjacket and pants were soaked it was weird....she had a smirk on when she was dead so if u chant Bloody Mary.....she'll come out and kill you the same way she did her friends if she sences ur innocent she'll kill u fast if ur a bratt or bully shell make u suffer...try Bloody Lary her b/f i think he'll grin at you and flirt and say ur name over and try to scare you....or hell say ur name until u say bloody lary go away 5 times fast.. try Bloody Sari Marys lil. sister she'll just play a game with you....and play hide and go seek she's not harmful until she finds a knife and says oooo whas this? hey (you) I have a better game 2 play!!(she's 7 yrsold) or try Bloody Darry her brother he'll just stare at u and cry or call you his moomy or sis...or brother friend or dad..he's a good ghost..but sadly he's not in the story...well BLOODY MARY!!!!!
As Gaz Finished smiling proudly, Everyone stared at her in shock then Susan asked How the hell do you know about all this stuff...then Gaz replied oh I've been around there a few time she said as she hid a secret smile..Then Jack said all right kets go to that place..Susan--ARE YOU OUT OF UR MIND?!? THERES ALOT OF GHOSTS LIVIN THERE AND SOME OF THEM I DONT WANT TO GET TO KNOW!!! Jack--well go home than susan!!! Kayla--NOOOO..Susan stay!! Jack--why do u want her to stay? Kayla--because i dont want to be the only girl here...Jack--what do u mean?? Gaz is a girl...Kayla--not the kind im used to!!! susan--fine i'll stay but if we see one ghost im getting my ass outta there ok? All--agreed..
Soon all the 6 teens were on their way to their doom as Susan would put it or hell House ...as they reached the house and looked up at it Kayla thought she heard noises...and when they all sucked in their breath nervously or at least Susan did kayla just looks sorda scared Jake had wide eyes Tucked tried to look calm but look a little pale....Gaz showed know emmotion you couldnt really tell since she always looked pale..Jack looked excited they walked closer with kayla and susan holding on to eachother Kayla still heard noises but the others couldnt Susan and the others thought Kayla was messin around for right when they opened the door and stepped in Im sure They werent exspecting to see what they saw..what they saw was............
ok......First Off It's 3:00 am...So I may mess up writing it's my first time on the site.....so ya.....Anyways I'll Start Off With The Human Characters then The Other Characters and blahhh(and I added 7 new ghost or more...ok!!!
Human Characters::::Susan Taylor---Slightly Tan Typical Blonde Perfect girl.......Kayla Anderson---Tan Brunette Short hair not very smart but she's the comedian of the group....Jack Darlin:Half Mexican Hot Pop. Guy with Spikey Black Hair (a real live version of Son Gohan) Gaz Thompson-- Pale White Goth. Chick always has an insult gets P.Oed easily...Tucker---- Geeky Black Boy with Glasses and a cap Genius of the group....Jake Dimwit--- annoying kinda stupid skinny white boy(Im White 2..) who likes Susan...
Ghosts:ALL Including Dennis Rafkin.....and a few I added.. :)
13 Ghosts:Evil Shall Never Die!!!
YAYYYYYYYYY I"TS HALLOWEEEENNN!!!!! "Kayla Screamed at her Friend Susan who didn't seem to be paying attention to a word she even said........Suddenly Two Guys came by smirking and Susan then said........
Susan--What are you Idiots Smirking at?
Jack--oh nothin.....
Jake--ya what he said.....
Kayla---Hey!!I have a Killer idea!!! How about we skip Tuckers Party tonight!!!!
Susan---Sure Fine by Me...I wouldnt want to blow my reputation hangin at some geeks party.....
Jake--i yie Miss Sue!!(MarySuehehe)
Susan--Screw Off DimWit!!!!
Jake--Really???
Kayla rolled her eyes as they began thinking of how to excape the party..because first they had to show up and pretend their having fun...
Jack Smirked and Said---ok heres the plan......
AT The Party
Tucker was dressed as a hippie and there was a big disco ball hangin from the ceiling...and about 60 kids chillin and chattin..When the door slammed open and in walked 4 weird looking people...
Susan--OMG!! why does it suddenly feel like I walked back into the 70's?
Jake--oh i know It could be the disco ball and tuckers oufit...!!
Kayla Laughed..as Susan simply replied
Susan--No Shit Sherlock!!! I was being Sarcastic which apparently you have never heard before!!!
Their Oufits were weird Susan---was dressed as a bloody ballerina...Kayla--- a witch...what more to say?? Jack--a Jock as usual....(kinda like Royce) Jake---a newsie...? Go Figure!!!!
Tucker--Great Costumes Great yar all here!! didnt think yad show......
Susan mumbling--didnt want 2....
Tucker--what?
Kayla--umm..nothin..she said great oufit!!!
Tucker-Thanks!!!
They were partying when susan was flirting with a guy and talking to her friend Latiffany and their conversation went on and on.....until.............
Kayla came in screaming Jacks dead!!!!!!!!
All--what!!!!??
Kayla--HE"S IN THE BASEMENT!!!!!!!!
All run to the basement eager to see the dead body of jack that they couldnt hear the laughter up stairs
Kayla--what Dumbasses!!!
"Soon all 4 started to leave while Kayla was singing I put a spell on you and now your mine..I cant stop the things I do I lieee..and so on.. While Jake sang Jeepers Creepers!!
Susan wasnt paying attention when something touched her back and she turned around and screamed only to see Tucker with a Goth Chick Gaz.....
Susan--damn it tucker!!! what are you doing here?!?
Kayla-ya ur supposed to check out the dead body.."she said before bursting out laughing"
Tucker--haha reaalll funny!! Now were are u guys going?
Jack--aww..just checking to see if theres any haunted houses around....
Gaz--ooohhh ....I know a perfect one..It's not far from here It's made of Glass...
Kayla--a haunted glass house?
Gaz--yes and theres a story that says 20 ghosts haunt it....I heard their names and Personallity are.... (NOT IN ORDER OK)
1.The First Bourn Son--this kid may seem nothin...but don't act all cuddly near him...he may seem to be cute but behind that innocent smile there lives a dark past..just awaiting to be reopen...he was killed while playing a simple childs game until he didnt see the arrow come down until it was too late...he's one creepy lil. kid..and you sure as hell dont want to play a game that consist of metal or pointy object with Billy Michaels...aka Billy The Brat!!!
2.TheAngryPrincess--You sure as hell don't want to mess with this chick..sure to you's guys she seems innocent being naked with gashes and all but she carries a butcher knife...and will rip you a new one if you piss her off..oe she'll just do it for fun...her names Dana she commited suicide for not thinking of herself to be pretty like most girls..it was a road of deppressionn...to her end....but make sure to stay away from the bathroom girls and be careful about standing to close to the tub..DONT WAH YOUR FACE OR DRINK THE WATER FROM THE BATH TUB..ok...don't know where it's been....I call her Dana the Chick..
3.TheTornPrince---ok..ladies like the last one dont go falling for this guy sure he may look like a James Dean wannabe and all and may be cute in one perspective...But they say he played alot of baseball..soo wouldnt want to get to close to him...he's like a good boy gone bad...it seems his baseball bat and his Tuff car are his pride in joy..so I suggest stay away from him..if you piss him off your head will be the baseball..and girls he'll try to get you to trust him....but dont he may end up killing you afterwars or do som innapropiate things to you's....so stay away..It's said he was in a race with a local Greaser(greasers kick ass..watch Outsiders) when he crashed over a hill and got burned on one side...so he gets angry easily dont you think him and A.P. should get 2-gether?? Royce Clayton...the soc.?
4.TheWitheredLover--This Lady ghost is nice she died saving her family in a fire...She has a kind soul..and I envy her for that....She seems like a ghost YOU CAN Trust...she'll try her best to help you..if she can..not much about her I can Say but that she's a great Mother of a ghost Jean Critacose(wonderful mom)
5.Hammer--Don't Trust this Moron...besides he needs a face lift and a miracle..(just kiddin) he's tough he's like a damn bull all he sees is red and we'll ram you the first chance he gets..he has a tendentcy to scare pple when they at least exspect it(Dennis..lol) So I stay awayumm..He used to be a blacksmith who the crowd framed him of somethin(sorry cant remember) and he snapped killing pple and the town pple killed him.in a viloent way by jabbing nails into him...u get the picture I call him The JackHammer!!!
6.TheBoundWoman---Sure..she may of seemed innocent everyone liked her looks mainly her b/f..and it was prom night the fateful day he caught her in the arms of another man and thats when he dragged her away..and bound her hands..killed her after yelling calling her a trampy bitch stuff like that...and threw her either under or near the football field(gee I would of just Broke up with her not bloody murder her!!) and the peeps..fuzz..whoever found her Im guessin a few days after the inncedent...But she may seem like your average Mary Sue..but she can trick you maily if your a dumb little kid named Bobby(lol) to come down to see her..it says that she haunted the prom pratically and if she caught a girl with a man she grabbed the guy and killed him....So I'd stay away from this Jezzabelle(Ap might be one more of it) maybey she should of turned Lez. if she hated guys that much or broke up with b/f since he was really abusive...no...he'd still probally kill her ass..n/m.....I cal, her Sue the Man Hater!!
7.ThePilgrimless--Not much to say about this one except she lived in the olden days and towns people thought her to be an evil witch so they killed her..sure she may be old but i'd stay away from her old wrinkly ass..hell...If she was a witch I wouldnt want to get close to her heelll No! I call her The Witch Sorecerress
8.TheGreatChild--Now this is one big Tommy Pickles you wouldnt want to mess around with...he carries a freakin axe and is extremly largeeee!! I kinda feel sorry for his mummy who has to change his damn diaper!!(shudder) anyways..His mom and him go to a freak show and some tall man rapes the mum and she got her pride and joy the big kid!! and after she gets killed he snaps and tries to kill the townfolk(or whoever) but ends up getting killed as well...I'd stay away from him mainly if ur a midgit Hobbit any person...at all because if hes close to you and he trips Im saying that his fat ass body will squash you!! and thats one way to die.. so stay awayyy..from Tommy Pickles..I say It's Tommy Pickles Gone Mad!!!
9.TheDireMother--kinda like above she gets raped has the fat kid her pride and joy doesnt want him to grow up so he stays like that his whole life...she gets killed and she wears doll clothes..(weird) and she creeps me out when she smiles....I call her My size Barbie....Barbie gone Ghost...
10.TheTorso--Some guy that looks like he's been in a blender a few times...he was a gambler and I guessed he cheated because some pple. (more like the Italian Mofia) come and beat the hell out of him and throw him itto that thingy...He's not real harmful..The only thing he can do is moan and scream and cry..but when you see him you attend to scream.....Just be careful wouldnt want to step on his head or slip on his blood.. oh ya they wrapped him in something that looks plastic or somethic his superhero name shall be ..wait The Adventures Of Blender Boy!!!! or as I call him TaterSalad....
11.TheJackal---OMG..Now heres a character you surely as heellll dont want to mess with he may look funny with a cage on his head...but remember his hiddious laugh..that can send chills up your spine and make you shiver...he has claws and is not afraid to use him..sure he is EXTREMLEY harmful..mainly to girld he has a nasty life or fantasy of raping every girl you see..so be careful girl!! to him every girl is a whore prostatute hooker skank slut..whatever....But you cant really blame him since he was born to one...and he was back in the day where girls prance around like that....soo..I'd cry and scream if I were trapped in a cage house closet room anywhere with The Jackal...He seems to take everything you say or do as a joke...(???) and laughs even more when the girls screaming in pain or cries he's soo sadistic....I wonder if he has ever found love in a girl without havin to force himself on her? But he's always lookin for fun and stuff when a girl comes around...sure he may be the sign as Hells Winter....but if u try to stand up to him you die stand down..you die..Inyway it dont matter unless you have spped of a bullet like SuperMan or a anime dude..or can shoot web like Spider-Man...then you may have a chance but if u dont.You have No chance In Hell!!! sure Jackal May seem cool to you if this was a movie..shux he may even be ur fav. ghost but this is real life not a Fantasy world!!!!!!!!To you this may seem far fetched like a Fantacy world and that ghosts dont exist but Ghosts are real!! there not jusat dreams lil kids have ..Not ALL ghosts are as friendly as Casper or as silly as The Ghostly Trio.....Ghosts Like The Jackal are Dandreous and could kill you without a second thought..There all out for revenge......I call TheJackal Ryan Kuhn....Satan Himself..it said he proudly or no choice but walked into the fire at the mental place he put himself at....cya I call him Doc.Satan....
12.Juggernaut---Now This is one crazy ass Mo-Fo you wouldnt want to have a tea party with...since he's a 7 foot tall serial killer....that likes to pick up people and smash them....his real names Breaker and dang..he surely loves to kill people it said whiles he was killing someone the Fuzz came and shot him down..That explains all the bullot holes...But Breaker and The Jackal are the most feared Ghosts since they seem to like killing people more than anybody....but all I can Say he was one of the ghosts that died Violently...I call him The Breaker!!!! P.S. If he catches you je'll grin and chase after you and try to break ur back or slam you and the jackal will help with shedding ur blood all over the house...while...The First Bourne Son Paints a pretty picture with ur blood as his paint....and A.P. can take another BloodBath...while the rest of the ghosts go swimming....or have a party while ur body is decapitated ur head well be the The disco ball and the only date you'll get will be the Torso....
(MORE GHOSTS?!? OKKK)
13.Dennis Rafkin (The Lost Soul)--Sure this guy may of seemed like an idiot at times but you hafta admit you loved him since he was the only smart one at that glass house when he was hurt by the Hammer and killed by The Juggernaut....but lucky he came back as a ghost in the end and said that arthur could help his kids and it wasnt over...Denny here is a ghost I and other girls wouldnt mind dating who cares about if he has a pulse he's still cute and funny as well as protective and strong this is a ghost that will try to help you through ur troubles....I call him Dennis The Great!!!
14.TheBraveKnight--A knight that tries to flirt with girls so girls u can probally trick him into helping you he hates the guys if u dudes look at him the wrong way his Sword will be place somewhere unpleasant....He's back in the 1700's killef and betrayed by the one princess he loved she sent assasins after him when she told him to go run an arin....He died with 2 knifes stuck in his chest...He carries a sword...that hes not afraid to use...Lets just hope ur a pretty girl he'll like...His names Timothy Randall the 2nd(weirdnameiknow)
15--The Suicidal Teenager(My lil. Cousin came up with it so I used it)--Is about a 18 yr old girl in the eighties who hated her life so she simply jumped into the river and drowned herself...she's an ok ghost she may help you if shes in a good mood.....her names Jana Anne Watson..Her Best Driend Is Sarah Daniells(youll find out who)nothin much to say about her except she was so depressed and talked about killing herself from the age she was 8 so about 10 yrs. (I know yad think her parents would of done somethin about it but her mom smoked way to many of those funny ciggarettes and Her dad got drunk way to much to care about what she thought) I call her Jana The Sweet!!
16--The Burnt Child(Ok Thanks Se Hinton Cuz Imborrowing ur characters Dally and Johnny to be 2 of my ghosts thank u consider this a minature crossover) --Is about a cute 16 yr old Greaser boy who died in a hospital his back was didnt look to good it was broken...and he was burnt all over...Hes called the burnt Child because He looked younger than he already was......he looked more like someone lil. brother..He's a good ghost he'll try to help you the best he can...His Name Johnny Cade :he died while him and his friend Ponyboy saved kids from a church fire they may of caused while stayin there smokin.....so Johnny and Ponyboy blame themselves and go and save them and while Their Tuff friend Dallas pulls Ponyboy out it kinda claps on Johnny and Dally pulls him out..but later Sadly Johnny dies.....Johnny The Brave!!!
17--The Greazer Punk--(lame I couldnt think of one...) A boy Name Dally Winston who was friends to Johnny and Dally couldnt take it that Johnny died so he robbed a store and got shot down by the Fuzz(which I think he wanted) and Now he's a ghost along with Johnny..Dally may scare you he may be good looking but his shirts soaked in blood...and he carries some switchblades with him...cant really tell if hes a good ghost..he flirts with you if ur a gurl..but tries to start sumthin if ur a guy that looks a little socy to him... but hes ok....I Call him Dally The HERO!!!!!
18.The Breakthrough Queen---It's weird this may be the nicest ghost there is though she looks to have an arrow sticking out of her head chest and shoulder....but she seems happy to have humand around..since she's surrounded by ghosts all the time she's 14 yrsold her best frind is Jana..her names Sarah Daniells..and she tries to protect the humans Mainly girls from the ghosts.....She's My Fav.Creation!!! since she looks kinda like me(lol) she has short messy blonde hair brown eyes(me 2!! but my names different) I call her Sarah the Gift from God!!!
19.(borrowed another u can guess who he is im not tellin tell me who he is and i'll say if your right its real easy since hes a tall skellington ok he's not a ghost but who cares who likes to sing who is he?
20--Bloody Mary--a slightly diff. story youve heard of this is about a red head popular girl who had everything she could ever want until her friends played a nasty trick that theyll one day regret...they killed her younger brother age:11 on accident bye scaring him not thinking he'll somehow trip on a rollerskate and break his neck....or a trick where they sent her mom in a coma...finally the day came when they got 2 far by killing off her b/f by shooting him 2 death so at s surprise party...she murdered all her friends stabbed them to death with a knife or axe or shooting them..she made some torture but its ok if u were her close or best friend she made it easy bye killing you fast bye shooting you in the head or heart...hehe....soon the Fuzz showed up and thought she was crazy they put her in a staightjacket and the next day they found out the room they put her in was the one of the victims sister and poor Maryanne was covered in blood her whole straightjacket and pants were soaked it was weird....she had a smirk on when she was dead so if u chant Bloody Mary.....she'll come out and kill you the same way she did her friends if she sences ur innocent she'll kill u fast if ur a bratt or bully shell make u suffer...try Bloody Lary her b/f i think he'll grin at you and flirt and say ur name over and try to scare you....or hell say ur name until u say bloody lary go away 5 times fast.. try Bloody Sari Marys lil. sister she'll just play a game with you....and play hide and go seek she's not harmful until she finds a knife and says oooo whas this? hey (you) I have a better game 2 play!!(she's 7 yrsold) or try Bloody Darry her brother he'll just stare at u and cry or call you his moomy or sis...or brother friend or dad..he's a good ghost..but sadly he's not in the story...well BLOODY MARY!!!!!
As Gaz Finished smiling proudly, Everyone stared at her in shock then Susan asked How the hell do you know about all this stuff...then Gaz replied oh I've been around there a few time she said as she hid a secret smile..Then Jack said all right kets go to that place..Susan--ARE YOU OUT OF UR MIND?!? THERES ALOT OF GHOSTS LIVIN THERE AND SOME OF THEM I DONT WANT TO GET TO KNOW!!! Jack--well go home than susan!!! Kayla--NOOOO..Susan stay!! Jack--why do u want her to stay? Kayla--because i dont want to be the only girl here...Jack--what do u mean?? Gaz is a girl...Kayla--not the kind im used to!!! susan--fine i'll stay but if we see one ghost im getting my ass outta there ok? All--agreed..
Soon all the 6 teens were on their way to their doom as Susan would put it or hell House ...as they reached the house and looked up at it Kayla thought she heard noises...and when they all sucked in their breath nervously or at least Susan did kayla just looks sorda scared Jake had wide eyes Tucked tried to look calm but look a little pale....Gaz showed know emmotion you couldnt really tell since she always looked pale..Jack looked excited they walked closer with kayla and susan holding on to eachother Kayla still heard noises but the others couldnt Susan and the others thought Kayla was messin around for right when they opened the door and stepped in Im sure They werent exspecting to see what they saw..what they saw was............