Hi everybody! I am writing a story about the adventures of Jaypaw (Jayfeather) ! He is a blind cat that has a brother named Lionpaw and a sister named Holly paw. I have read warriors power of three book 1. Please review if possible! :)

Introduction ( you can skip it if u already know the story) : "Hi I am Jaypaw! I am an appretience of Leafpool, thunderclans medicine cat! Although I am blind, I think I can be a warrior as great as my brother and sister! Anyway, this story is featuring me !"

~CHAPTER 1 - LOST IN THE FOREST!~

" Hey , Jaypaw ! come a nd look at this ! I caught a big rat ! Lionpaw told Jaypaw proudly after coming back from hunting.

"Like I care !" Jaypaw snapped to his brother.

Jaypaw was angry and jealous of his brother as he kept on boasting about his abilities to hunt as a anppritience of Ashfur... " Being a medicine cat is no fun at all! All I get is to smell all the herbs and stuff... I want to be a warrior as great as his brother and sister! I just wish I wasn't blind! I just wish I wasn't born at all ! "Jaypaw grumbled to himself...

" Jaypaw, come and help me to arrange these herbs, hurry up! " Leafpool called from the medicine den.

" CComming... Leafpool " Jaypaw mumbled in a bored voice.

Jaypaw went into the medicine den...grumpilly

"Come, on ! Dont be such a wimp... always sad and grumpy. Being blind doesn't mean you are useless!"Leafpool said

"Well, everyone sure thinks I am! Jaypaw said while helping Leafpool...

Jaypaw went to the den to rest after helping Leafpool... " Life is just not fair, not fair at all ! Why can't I be a warrior? Just like Lionpaw and Hollypaw! Jaypaw soon fell to sleep...

He had a vision.. he saw himself as a grand warrior-JayStar!

All the other cats were bowing to him... Jaypaw awoke suddenly feeling grand and mighty! " I wonder what that dream meant. Does it mean that I am going to be ThunderClan's next leader? "Jaypaw thought to himself " I better go and see StarClan and ask them ! " Jaypaw thought... Hë wäited till midnight before he crept out of the camp.

It was cold but Jaypaw wasn't in the least bothered... The thought of him becoming a leader made him cheerful..

He smelled his way there. His paws were running as fast as he could. He smelled a tree in front of him and he quickly turned left. He kept running.. until he smelt something wierd. " I know this smell " he said to himself... ITS A ... ITS A FOX! Jaypaw ran and ran. He could hear the fox chasing after him... Faster and faster he ran.. he jumped over a river and climbed a nearby tree... Digging his claws on the tree he was happy that he survived after all!

After a while, his triumph became sadness as he realised that he was LOST!

He quickly scramble down the tree. All he could smell was the unfamiliar smell of this place... This is the end of chapter 1. Read the next chapter for more excitement . Please review this chapter. I'll update as soon as I can.