This is the remastered version of To Be Chosen By Primus Himself.
The story will have the same basic layout but I've been wanting to redo the story for a while as I've improved my writing over the last year and now I'm finally getting round to doing it.
Important: Vala's name is now Nora which is Arabic means 'Light' and in Latin it means 'the bright one' but in American it means 'bright torch' which is why I picked it and also I like that name XD.
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Prologue
Outside a house stood young girl and boy both with dark brown hair but the boy had earth brown eyes while the girl had forst green. The siblings were at the age of six. The twins were playing with a red plastic football; throwing it to one another
The boy, Sam, went after the ball as his sister, Nora, had thrown it over his head and had rolled onto the road. Sam instead of looking both ways walked straight out into the road after the ball. Nora frowned at her brothers lack of safety for himself and looked both ways to see if a car was coming down. She paled when she saw a car turn onto their road and looked like they hadn't seen Sam.
Nora then made a life changing decision; she ran as fast as her small legs could carry her towards her brother, successfully pushing Sam out the way. Sam fell on the ground with a yelp and quickly turned from his spot on the pavement towards Vala.
His earth brown eyes met her forest green ones. Sam's eyes widen "Nora!" The little girl looked at him with a sad smile only to be smashed into with the car; her body went over and crashed the ground with a THUMP as Sam screamed her name again, crying as he ran over to her.
With the yelling of their daughters name coming from their son, Ron and Judy rushed out the home only to be met with a bloody sight. Judy cried out, her hand over her mouth crying she ran to her children. While the father called and ambulance.
Nora whimpered as she bled badly from her head and stomach and other places, two ribs stuck out from her body broken and grazes lined her body. She opened her eyes halfway and locked them with Sam, who chocked out a sob at the sight. Nora forced her lips into a small smile, ignoring the pain and the numbness that was spreading across her body as she heard sirens in the distance. She then welcomes the darkness that was clouding her vision in hopes of making the pain go away.
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In a large desert like land stood fourteen very tall Robots, however one stood out from the rest, the Robot that stood in front of the other thirteen. He was also the tallest, his purple optics full of wisdom and knowledge. He also boar beautiful blue armour. In his hand there was a glowing orb that was playing a video of Nora saving Sam and took the hit instead. The cybertronians had been searching for a human that was worthy of his vast power.
"I believe we have found the human we are looking for Primus," One of the thirteen said, his voice deep and rough but soft and caring.
"Yes, she would gladly die for someone she loves." The purple eyed cybertronian turned to the others, he gave a nod, and they started to disintegrate into dust.
"Now, to visit this young girl before her spark gives out!" a beautiful portal, that would remain anyone of the Northern lights, opened and he walked through into the girls in a way mind.
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Nora was her knees, her arms wrapped round small frame as tears fell from her eyes. Nora, although in serve pain, looked normal as if she was never hit by the car.
She flinched when she heard an unfamiliar noise. Her forest green eyes widened when she gazed upwards towards the large cybertronian.
To her it was the most beautiful thing she'd ever had the chance to lay her eyes on, his soft purple optics flicked about her small frame before he knelt down so the cybertronian was on his knees. He slowly and gently picked Nora up within his hands bringing her close to his face.
"Young sparkling, I have chosen you as carrier of my powers. You have proven your self that you are willing to die for someone you love!"
Nora looked up, locking eyes with him and nodded before speaking: "What will happen to me, I was just hit by a c-car?" Nora then frowned as she wondered what his name was "and what should I call y-you?"
The cybertronian smiled, "My names is Primus, and do not worry with my powers your small body will heal in time. The only side effects will be your eyes will become blue with a slightly red in the middle I believe and also your hair will be come a blue like my armour. Another thing will be you'll gain a birthmark like my symbol." He pointed to said mark that was on his chest.
Primus then moved, placing two of his fingers on her, one on her head and the other on her heart. There was a bright white glow, before where went black for the Nora again.
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I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of the remake! Please don't forget to tell me what you think of it. It'll help me greatly when writing the next chapters.