Chapter 1: End of Initiation

Tris POV

I wake up hearing banging from the door of where us initiates sleep. "GET UP OR YOUR FACTIONLESS." I hear Eric yell. Says him. He's late everyday. I'm so glad that he won't be able to boss me around from this point on, since I will be a member of Dauntless. I hope. I've struggled for the 1st and 2nd rounds of initiation, but I hope that I brought myself back up during the 3rd round, or I'll be factionless. I hear that some factionless say that they'd rather be dead.

I finally get up and go to brush my teeth. When I finish, I go back to my bunk and see that Christina is still sleeping, and we only have ten minutes left. I slowly walk towards her ear and yell, " OH NO, IT'S THE MOTHS, IT'S THE MOTHS, THERE GOING TO KILL ME!" She jumps off the top bunk and starts screaming her head off. I try to keep from laughing but I can't, it's just too funny. I burst out laughing and Christina glares down at me. When I see her eyes I know I'm in trouble. She is SO mad at me. She'll be even more mad when I tell her we only have eight more minutes to get to the training room. "...Christina?" I say.

"WHAT DO YOU WANT?!" she retorts. Whoa.

"...Uh we kind of have to be at the training room in eight minutes, or-"

"Or what?" She says, getting ticked at me.

"Eric said we would be factionless if we don't" I tell her.

"I hate that piece of crap" she says. I'm glad she back to her normal mood.

"Tris...Tris... TRIS!" Christina yells.

"WHAT?" I yell back.

"We only have three minutes so, let's get dressed. " She says.

" K, but we have to hurry or else we'll be kicked out. " I tell her.

We go to the dressers at the back of the transfers room to find our clothes, then put our clothes on. Today we are matching, because we are finding out our rankings. We are both wearing tight black T-shirts with V-necks, tight black jeans, black leather jackets, and combat boots. We both look great.

Christina, Will, and I are the only ones that haven't left. We have two minutes left and if we hurry we can make it. We all look at each other, and without a word we burst out sprinting as fast as we can and get there in a little under a minute. We are panting so hard from all of the running and dodging people in the Pit, but at least we made it. I see Four, Max, and Eric writing the rankings on the chalkboard, so they didn't notice us running in. Well...Four did, but he doesn't care. He looks so hot right now. I wish it was just the two of us, so that we could go to the Navy Pier again. Capture the flag was AMAZING. Especially after he caught me after I almost fell of the Ferris Wheel. The only time better than that was when he kissed me at the Chasm. that was when I knew he loved me just like I loved him. I haven't told him that I love him, because I'm still waiting for the right time to tell him. I still haven't told Christina and I know she'll freak out when I do. Oh well. I'm so glad I met Four. He is the reason that I kept going in initiation. I saw him in Abnegation, but I never really saw him like I do now. Now I really see him. No one else knows his real name or old faction that wasn't in his initiation class except for me. He looks just like he's always been Dauntless, so most people think he's a Dauntless born. "LISTEN UP, INITIATES." yells Eric. I hope I never have to hear his voice after today. "TODAY IS THE DAY THAT WILL DETERMINE THE REST OF YOUR LIFE, SO TAKE IT SERIOUSLY."

He turns the chalk board around so that we can see our rankings. I look at the board and see my name at one and just seeing my name there made my feel AMAZING. I was finally a member! I had a home! I saw Peter and he had a scowl on his ugly face. He gave a look that could kill. After thinking about what happened to Edward my smile faltered. I look at Four, and my smile comes right back. He comes up to me and before he can say anything I kiss him. I don't care about anything else but us. When I take my lips from his. I remember that we are in a room full of other initiates, and I have a blush that puts a tomato to shame. Christina's mouth is agape, and after a full two minutes of silence, she screams, "WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME TRIS!?" I walk up to her and say, " I didn't want anyone to think that I got in because of him." I tell her, pointing to Four. " Well I'm still mad at you, " she says, " but if I were in your position I would do the same. "

"LET'S GO", I hear Uriah yell. He's a dauntless born, and we sit with each other at lunch. He's hilarious. He is a mirror image of his older brother, Zeke, who is Four's best friend. Me, Four, Christina, and Will walk to the cafeteria chatting about nothing. When all of us new members walk in, all of Dauntless starts hollering and lifting up on their shoulders. I'm on Four's shoulders, and I shutter at his gentle touch. Life in Dauntless will be awesome. I just know it.

A/N: Thank for reading my first chapter of my first FanFic guys! I'm only 11 (12 in 2 months!), but I tried my hardest to write this. I have a 13.0 reading level (first year of college), so my readings pretty advanced, and I LOVE READING SO FREAKING MUCH! I love Divergent, obviously, Percy Jackson, Hunger Games, and a LOT of other fandom, but especially Divergent and Percy Jackson! You should read, A Different Divergent, which is my all-time favorite FanFiction, and it has 4 stories, so it's a series, basically, and it is SOOOO GOOD! Leave suggestions and reviews! The next chapter will most likely be up tomorrow, because I have so many ideas! I know this was just like in Divergent but the rest of my chapters will be different. I just had to have this for the beginning of the story. I wish I did, but I don't own Divergent.

Thanks, LOVE YA'LL, EVEN THE HATERS BECAUSE YOU SPENT TIME TO READ THIS! HAVE A GREAT DAY!