A/N: Hey. This is my first ever fanfiction, so sorry if it sucks. (Not my first one ever written, just my first one posted on here.) I would like to apologize in advance for not updating frequently, as I know I will not do, because I am working on writing a novel.
I want to be original with this idea, but I know someone has most likely already done this. I offer my deepest and sincerest apologies for my unoriginality and lack of creativity.
Also, whilst I was revising, I noticed that I said "eh" a few times in the story. As you most likely do not know, I am Canadian, so I cannot help my speaking habits. I say "eh" because I am Canadian. I SEE YOU WHISPERING STERIOTYPES ABOUT CANADIANS OVER THERE! DON'T YOU MAKE ME GET MY HOCKEY STICK!
I would like to say that this story contains MAJOR ALLEGAINT SPOILERS. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
Now, before this author's note gets too long, I will begin the story.
Summary: We all know (well, hopefully) what happens at the end of Allegiant by Veronica Roth. But do we know what happens after? Follow Tris—yes, Tris—and Tobias as they overcome obstacles and struggle to obtain a "perfect" life. Contains BUCKETS of fluff, drama, and action.
Disclaimer: I am not, in any shape, size, or form, earning profit from this story, nor do I own any of recognizable characters or settings. Any recognizable characters and/or settings belong to Veronica Roth. I am merely a girl and all I own is my laptop (well, and the plot).
Chapter One
Tobias POV
It's been two weeks since Tris died, and I'm learning to get over it slowly. It's still really hard at times, but Christina helps me. After all, she did lose a best friend.
"Four, man, you gotta eat something."
I look up from the muffin I was picking at. Zeke and Christina and... No, that's it. There's no one else. Just Zeke, Christina, and I are left.
I open my mouth to reply to Zeke's comment about my eating habits, but I'm cut off by a manly scream.
A blue sort of... hole thing opens up out of the ceiling and out falls... Uriah? He lands on his butt, and then winces. He rubs his head.
"Ouch. Hey guys! Good to be back! Wassup, big bro?" He ruffle Zeke's hair whilst the latter sits still, too shocked to respond to his little brother that has been supposedly dead for the past two weeks.
Uriah laughs and calls up the hole, "Come on down, Will! The water's fine!" Christina perks up.
There's another scream, and Will falls out of the hole (God that sounded dirty). He also rubs his head. "You could have warned me, Uri," he says. Uriah laughs and hugs Will in a bro-hug type of thing.
"Tris! Come on!" Will yells.
I freeze. Every muscle in my body is stuck in one place, and I probably couldn't move even if I wanted to.
Another scream, this time high-pitched, and a blur of blonde hair falls from the ceiling and onto the ground. Tris also rubs her head.
"Uriah, you idiot," she says and slaps Uriah's arm. Uriah squeals.
"Ow, Tris! That hurt real bad!" Tris rolls her eyes and looks up, into the hole on the ceiling.
"Marlene! Don't stay up there all day!"
"I can't do it!" a voice calls from seemingly nowhere.
"Yes you can! It doesn't hurt that bad, honest. Uri is just being a dork."
A squeal fills the Pit as Marlene falls from the hole-thing. Tris, Will, and Uriah cheer. Marlene smiles and stretches her arms. "It's so good to be out of there," she says.
"Tell me about it." Tris cracks her neck and sighs. Then she notices Will.
"Uh... hi, Will." She looks at the ground.
"Tris, it's fine. I know you had to kill me." Tris smiles gratefully and sighs out of relief.
"I really am sorry though." Will ruffles her hair like she's his little sister.
Uriah turns to Marlene. "Hey, Mar. Long time no see, eh?" Marlene rolls her eyes.
"You really are a dummie, Uri." And they kiss. They kiss like they haven't seen each other in months which, now that I think about it, they really haven't.
"Will?" Christina whispers. "Is it really you?" Will nods.
"The one and only." Christina kisses him, too.
"Hey," tris says and looks at me.
"Hi," I say. Zeke laughs.
"She's been dead for two weeks and all you say is 'hi'?" I laugh and stand up. I look down at Tris and then capture her lips with mine. I kiss her like there's no tomorrow, and she kisses me back hard. And this is the moment I realize that I cannot live without Beatrice Prior.
"God, I missed you," I say when we pull apart. She grins.
"You're so dorky." I smile.
"Not as dorky as Uri, though," I retaliate. She laughs. Her laugh is so beautiful. I've missed her laugh so much.
"No, you're definitely dorkier than Uri." She turns and hugs Christina. "I missed you, girl!" Christina holds her at arm's length.
"So, Tris. You never did tell me when you and Four got together." Tris laughs her beautiful laugh again.
"Later," she says and sits down at the table. "You guys hungry?" she asks Will, Uri, and Marlene. They all nod and start eating.
"The food up there was terrible," says Marlene, and the other three nod in agreement.
"They could have at least given us some hamburgers or something. Like what was that gray slosh?" asks Tris.
"I don't know, but it was nasty," says Uri.
"How?" Zeke says, breaking out of his stupor.
"What?"
"How?" he repeats. Tris smiles.
"Uri figured out how to bring us back. He's an idiot, but he does come in handy sometimes." She ruffles his hair. Everyone laughs, including me.
"Four? Are you... laughing? Oh, my God, Four is laughing! Four hasn't laughed in weeks!" Zeke jumps up and shouts, "It's a miracle!" I roll my eyes at him.
"What was it like?" Christina asks.
"Terrible," says Uriah. "There wasn't a single hamburger anywhere. And we couldn't even see each other. We were secluded in our own rooms! In heaven! Can you believe that?"
I sit down next to Tris and wrap my arm around her waist.
"Hey guys!" a voice shouts from above us. We all look up to see Al falling from the hole-thing. He grunts and massages the back of his head. I look over at Tris; she looks over at me. "Oh, hey Tris," Al says when he sees her. Tris scowls at him. "Still mad at me, eh?" She rolls her eyes but doesn't say anything. Al's gaze drift down toward my arm around her waist. He frowns.
And then someone screams again.
"Lynn!" Tris shouts gleefully. "You're back!" Lynn stands up and brushes dirt off her pants.
"Hey, Tris," says Lynn. She plops down next to Uriah and starts eating a muffin. "How was your stay in heaven?" Lynn asks Will, Uriah, Marlene, Al, and Tris.
"Sucked," they all say at once.
"It's not all it's cracked up to be, eh?"
"You were dead?" says Al. Lynn and Marlene look quizzically at Tris too.
"Yep," says Tris, popping the 'p'.
"I'm tired," Uriah says, yawning. Those who were dead stand up, and Christina follows Will while I follow Tris.
"Get some!" Zeke yells after me. I turn around, walking backwards, and promptly flip him off. He laughs.
PPPPAAAAGGGGEEEE BBBBRRRREEEEAAAAKKKK
"I love you," I say once we're back in my apartment.
"I love you too," she says.
"I love you three."
"I love you Four."
"I know," I smirk. She laughs.
"Maybe Zeke was right for once," she says.
"What?"
She grins. "You should get some."
And then we're kissing. And so much is conveyed through the kiss. All the hurt, the grief, the happiness, the love. God, I love her so much. So, so much.
"I love you," I say into her mouth. "I love you, I love you, I love you."
She snakes her petite around my neck and I grab her waist. Her hands move down my back and under my shirt, making me shiver. I slide my hands lower until they cup her butt.
"I love you so much," she breathes.
I pull my hands off her bottom and frame her face with my fingers. She wraps her tiny arms around my torso.
I slide my tongue over her bottom lip and she opens her mouth slightly. I dart my tongue inside and feel around her mouth.
She starts walking backwards toward the bed, so I pick her up bridal style and drop her gently on the bed. I crawl on top of her and she wraps her legs around me.
"I missed this, Tobias. I can't live without you."
And then she's asleep. I guess dying must be tiring.
I kiss between her brows and lay next to her. She unconsciously wraps her arms around me. I smile, and for the first time in two weeks, I'm sure everything will be just fine.
A/N: OH MY GOD. THAT TOOK FOREVER. But Fourtris is so cute. I just couldn't help dumping that bucket of fluff on you. FOURTRIS IS MY OTP YO.
So I saw another author do this thing with house points, so I'm stealing it. *manacle laugh*
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