Title: One Moment

Author: xXAquiliusDraconisXx

Rating: T

Category: Beyblade

Type: Alternate Universe

Summary: She was always told that she could never achieve it. He always looked down on her. She was hopeless and couldn't even control her bit beast. He was the captain and hated her for being on the team. She was ignored and unappreciated by the entire team. How can one moment change everything between two bladers?


One Moment


The ice blue haired girl sat quietly and stared at her teammates. She sniffed loudly and wiped the tear that was sliding down her cheek with her sleeve. Bringing her knees up to her chest, she wrapped her arms around them and leaned against the wall.

She buried her face within her arms and cried softly. She had everything. That's what people said. Touring the world with the Russian Champions, being free and as some of the fan girls put it, living alone with two of the hottest guys.

Of course, there weren't just three of them. There were five. But fan girls said only two of them were hot. They don't know what happened behind the scenes. They never lived one moment with them. They didn't know how she felt.

Whenever they were in front of public, she would put on a fake smile that never reached her eyes. She would pretend to be cheerful and act like everything was dandy.

Well it wasn't.

No matter what she did, it was never enough to please her team. They expected her to be like them. They expected her to control her bit beast and be powerful and perfect.

Heck, the only reason she was even on the team was because the BBA had put out a new rule saying that every single team must have a girl. They had picked her hoping that since her brother was one of the World Champions, she would be equally strong. But once they had seen that she couldn't even control her bit beast, they never even looked twice at her.

They didn't care if she lived or died. They didn't care of she starved or ate. Heck, they just didn't care, no matter what.

She raised her head and sadly gazed at everybody else in front of her. The children running around the park were so childish. Oh how she wished she had her childhood back.

Her gaze fell towards the ground again and she took out her blade from her pocket. It was a black and crimson colored blade with a little picture of a black dragon on the bit chip.

Her tear drops fell on the bit chip and she held it close to her chest. No matter how much she tried, her bit beast just wouldn't listen to her. He refused to obey her commands. He wouldn't even show up when she called out to him. She was utterly vulnerable.

Her father had said that Aquilius was the heirloom. That Aquilius would always obey her. He said everything would be alright.

Well, nothing ever was. Nothing would be alright again.

Unlike her brother, she was weak.

Unlike her teammates, she wasn't powerful and strong.

She was imperfect.

She was Skye Hiwatari.


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