I am revising This Time and hopefuly it will turn out better this time as i kinda lost myself in the middle Sorry to those who really enjoyed it.
Prologue
Sora wanders slowly through the cemetery searching for a paticular grave site. As he rounds the corner a red headed girl in a dark hoodie strides past with tears running down her face. Sora notices there are some yellow roses on the tomb stone beside the one he had been seaching for. As he aproaches the stones he reads the inscription.
Takuki Swanda
Loving Father and Husband
1979-2004
"This was probably her father" Sora mutters confidently as he continues onward to his real reason for coming to the cemetary. The next grave was fairly new but already had vines growing up the face of it. The vines covered some of the writing but Sora could recite what is said from memory.
Haruko Hurahara
Loving Mother
1976-2000
"Hi mom, I think I will call you that, even if I am just an adopted annoyance.I don't know what I should to do anymore. I started cutting a couple of months ago, I don't know why but it just seemed to make me feel better. Today in gym my sweat bands got ripped of while fighting with my sparring partner and now the whole school knows. The Sakura-sensai and Syaoran-sensai siad they were going to inform father about it. The group is also worried about me allot. I know this is not what I should be doing but I feel the need to repent for what I I better get home before dad gets angry. Here are the roses I picked out for you." I say with a small smile. As I turn to walk away I set a small vase filled with black and red roses beside the Grave.
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Please Reveiw
The hidden grave