Yay it's my first fic with some actually action. All my other fics have been all cute and no details and stuff. Wait this fic is cute! Err well I actually putted some detail in. plz don't kill me. Its my first time doing something that isn't rater K+, well other than one if my stories but I haven't gotten there yet (Ask the Yaoi Couples). Plz review and send me some good comments.
Something Wrong Danna?
Deidara was happily in his room doing something. The door opened and Sasori come into the room he and Deidara shared.
Deidara noticed the new arrival and looked at him.
"Hey Dan...na?" he saw that his partner had his hair over his eyes and that he didn't look too happy either.
"Is something wrong Danna?" he asked confused. Sasori didn't respond, he just walked up to Deidara.
"Ehh...Danna?" Deidara was confused. He never saw his Danna like this before. Was Sasori mad at him? Did he do something wrong?
Deidara was getting even more scared as Sasori continued walking up to him.
Sasori finally got in front of Deidara and Deidara got really scared now.
Suddenly Sasori smacked his palm into the wall Deidara got cornered to. "Danna?" Deidara was so confused and even more scared.
Sasori got closer and closer to his face. "Danna..." was all he could say until Sasori smacked his lips into Deidara's.
Deidara was way confused. Not the he didn't like it. Truth was, Deidara had a little crush on his Danna. And by little I mean huge, and by crush I mean head over heels in love with Sasori.
Sasori then pocked his tongue against Deidara's bottom lip and Deidara gasped. Sasori tocked this chance and stucked his tongue inside Deidara mouth. He began to touch everything he could find with his tongue and let's just say it was addicting.
Deidara was moaning so much. It was just sooo good. Sasori was excellent with his tongue to say the least. It was like a drug. He tasted so good, and god if he kept doing that with his tongue he was going to explode!
They continued in a battle of tongues. Then Sasori guided Deidara's tongue into his mouth and Deidara explored every inch he could find.
Of course they need air (well Deidara does) so they had to part. Sasori was panting slightly while Deidara was panting a lot. Sasori noticed Deidara had a little bit of saliva on his chin.
He tocked Deidara's hair, the one over his left eye, and brushed it away and tocked hold of his check and licked his chin. Deidara blushed madly.
"Danna...I..." Deidara began. "Shh" Sasori told him. He tocked hold of his shoulder and his arm. He began to slip the Akatsuki cloak off him. Deidara gasped lightly.
Sasori guided them to his bed. He got on top of Deidara and started kissing him again. Deidara responded and then began another battle of tongues.
Deidara and Sasori were both cuddled up on the bed smiling lightly.
"Deidara" said Sasori. "Yes Danna?" asked Deidara. "I love you" Sasori said.
Deidara smiled at his, and only his, Danna and said "I love you too, un!"
Well how do u like it? Send me some reviews and tell me. I got the idea from where i always get them. Pictures! Plz don't kill me. It was my first time doing something like this. Hope u enjoy it and look out for more of them!