Okay.. im new here and this is my first fanfic
and also, if you saw grammars mistakes its because of my english arent that good since english is not my native
soooo i dont know what you guys think about this , enjoy
Grizz woke up and got up from the bed. He yawned then walked up to the kitchen "Morning Guys, ugh man what a hot morning" Says Grizz, he sit in his chair beside panda who's playing with his phone "The news says that this week is going to be a sunny week" Answered Panda. grizz looked back to his other bro "Sooo whats cooking Lil bro?" Grizz asked to his little brother who called himself ice bear "Ice bear cooked this for grizz and panda" He puts the foods on table then he sit in his chair "Ice bear hope you enjoyed" Grizz and Panda smiles at ice bear foods.
"This is Great Little Bro, This is indeed delicious" Panda chew his salad slowly. Grizz who chewed his food Quite Faster nodded saying that he's agreed with panda "Oh man, your cooking are alwa- uh dude, you okay?" pointed grizz, he looked at his little brother pale face "You seems tired, get enough sleep last night?" grizz asked worried. "ice bear fine, no need to worry" ice bear says shortly, he got up from his chair and pick his flower apron but all the sudden ice bear stopped and leaned him self with a wall.
"wow there bro, how about you skip the chores today?" Grizz became more worried he tried to stop ice bear for doing todays chores "yeah, just cool your self in your fridge. no need to worried about the chores" Panda says. Grizz came to his little bro who still leaned with a wall, he put his hand to ice bear forehead. "Dude, i think you have fever. come on, lets get you into the fridge" Grizz and panda helped ice bear walked to the fridge, but ice bear refuse to do what his brothers want him to do "Ice bear is fine" "No your not, come on bro... at least rest for a couple minutes" panda's open the fridge "Wait, What happen to the fridge? why is it so many waters leaked all over it?" "Dude, what happen?" grizz asked ice bear, he sighed "Ice bear slept fine last night but then the fridge goes off" explained ice bear "and thats why you got a fever. man, not to mention about the sun today. you need cold for some reason right? lets just asked chloe if she have any ice cubes.
Yes its short
should i continued it?
i tried really hard to make this good