OK, everyone! This is my very first post ever. I would just love to know what people thought of my first try at dark, morbid poetry. Sorry it's so short, but it is a poem. I hope you like it and please, please, please, remember to review!!! You can start reading the poem now...
EVILLIFE
From this wonderful place I use to know
is now dark and evil .
I lay here and wonder why
and cry, and Cry, And cry.
I sleep while my life
has been destroyed.
By my brother, Itachi.
My life is gone.
So, this wonderful place of a home
is now gone dark and evil.
My life is gone
…..
so, as I lay here,
I cry and die inside.
So...? How was it? I hope you enjoyed reading this...I put alot of work into these stanzas even though it may not seem like it. I'm only 10, what do you expect? My big sister, Lizzy, (You may know her as Tekii no aru tenshi) helped me to type this and post it. So, yeah. Thanks alot for reading! And review!
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-Trinity