First fic so please its ok to do flames, but if you do could you leave a suggestion on how to make it better?
Rose's POV
I waved goodbye to mum and dad as the train left the platform, I went to find a compartment dragging my trunk behind me. It was my first year so I was nervous. suddenly somebody grabbed me from behind, and I yelped but then saw it was my cousin James so I went hit him on the back of the head but found my cousin Dominique had done it for me, they asked me if I wanted to sit with them in their compartment so I said yes. quickly finding out that was not a wise decision, and so I left to find a different compartment. And after about half an hour of looking when I'm nearing the end of the train a boy pops out of a compartment and asks if I want to sit with him, so I obviously say yes.
Scorpius' POV
I decided to be nice so I ask the girl who has been wandering the train for the past 45 minutes if she wants to sit with me, and she surprised me by saying yes. everybody has been avoiding me like I have the plague just because I'm a Malfoy. And judging by her hair she might be a Weasly, this ought to be fun. I know once she finds out I'm a Malfoy she will hate my guts, but she looks like a nice person to have as a friend. maybe she will look at my personality instead of my last name. that would be nice, alas that is wishful thinking.
Sorry this is short but I need inspiration and time so please review with ideas! if you don't feel like it or don't have time to review that is fine... you will just crush my soul.