An experimental story I want to do. This is a little scene from it. I want to make sure that people would want to read it. So let me know what you think.
Text from: KG
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KG: Hey
NM: Hey, what's up?
KG: Nothing much..
NM: You never text me for nothing. What's up?
KG: Like I said, nothing.
NM: Kate. What is it.
KG: ...
NM: Is it him again?
*No reply*
NM: KATE, IS IT?
KG: yes
NM: call the cops
KG: I can't
NM: WHY NOT!?
KG: he's got a knife this time, and he's still really drunk
NM: Sneak out your window, you can hide at my house
KG: I can't
NM: WHY?!
KG: ..my mom, she's locked in the bedroom with him
NM: ...
KG: ohgod, nicki he's trying to get in
NM: RUN
KG: I cant, my mom's still locked in
NM: THEN HIDE!
*No reply*
*No reply*
*No reply*
NM: Kate?
*No reply*
NM: KATE
*No reply*
NM: KATE, ANSWER THE PHONE!
KG: ...
NM: kate?
KG: :)
NM: uh, katie?
KG: :):):)
NM: ...this isn't funny
KG: ... :(
NM: ...what did you do to her
KG: ...
NM: WHAT DID YOU DO?!
KG: ... x_x
NM: HEY
*No reply*
NM: NO
*No reply*
NM: NO, NONONO. SHES STILL THERE! I KNOW SHE IS! WHERE IS SHE YOU DRUNK PIECE OF CRAP?!
KG: nicki
NM: kate?
KG: he left, and went after mom, I cant move my body, please
NM: KATE, HOLD ON, IM CALLING THE POLICE
KG: mom, shes screaming, help, please
NM: KATE, YOU HOLD ON, YOURE GONNA BE OK
*No reply*
NM: kate?
KG: help
INTENSENESS! So, how was it. Let me know ;)