Hey, this is my first fanfic. I need reviews so I can write more. Please
review even if you think it was bad. Finally I got it up onto the site!
School sucks, I have had so much homework! And my mom made me sweep out our
garage and clean the whole house. You know how mothers are. LOL
GinOhami
P.S. I do not own the Chipmunks, Chipettes, Dave, or Miss Miller but I do own all of the other characters.
*~Chapter One: The Day Before The First Day of High School~*
It was a sunny afternoon at the Chipmunk house. Alvin and Brittany were out in the backyard by the pool. "Come on Brittany," Alvin coaxed, leaning on the wall of the pool. "It's the last day of summer. This is our last chance to splash around in the pool until next summer."
Brittany glared at Alvin from under her umbrella and beach chair. "Alvin, I refuse to get into the water. I haven't gotten a tan all summer! It's horrible! If I don't get one today, what will all the girls at school think? Besides, my nails haven't even dried yet." Brittany stuck her tongue out at Alvin and quickly started back to reading her Teen Fashion magazine.
Alvin sighed and continued to play around with the water basketball hoop. I don't see what the deal is with girls. After knowing Brittany for a long time I still don't know how her mind works, Alvin thought. Then, suddenly he gave a wicked grin. I bet she's too sucked into that stupid magazine to notice if I get out of the pool and sneak up on her.
Alvin quietly stepped out of the pool and approached Britney on tiptoe. He smiled and then in a flash grabbed Brittany.. thrusting her towards the pool. "Alvin, no!" Britney squealed. "Don't you dare or I swear." But her sentence was cut short when she was pushed into the water. Alvin started to laugh. As soon as Brittany's head reached the surface of the water, she looked up at Alvin and said, "Now look what you've done! My clothes are soaked and I just did my hair today!"
Alvin immediately felt bad that Brittany was yelling at him. "I'm sorry, Brittany. Let me help you." He reached out his hand. Brittany grabbed onto his hand, smiled, and then pulled him into the water. Both of them splashed at each other and laughed.
"What's going on back here?" Simon asked, followed closely by Theodore, Jeanette, and Eleanor. They had ran out of the house while hearing all of Brittany and Alvin's commotion. "We thought you two were in trouble."
Brittany laughed, "Oh no, we're not in trouble. We were just having a bit of fun, that's all."
"Fun?" Jeanette asked. "Since when do you have this kind of fun, Brittany? I thought you didn't want your hair or clothes to go wet."
"Yeah". Eleanor agreed
"I was pulled into the water by Alvin. Of course I was mad at first. My hair was ruined and these clothes can only be dry cleaned. But how can I get mad at this face?" and Brittany pointed to Alvin. Alvin blushed a bright red.
"Well, since this was settled, me and Eleanor are going to go bake a yellow cake," Theodore exclaimed.
"That's Eleanor and I," Simon and Jeanette said at once. Everyone started to laugh. This was the best afternoon ever! TO BE CONTINUED.. I know this was short but I wanted you guys to get a feel of my writing technique. If I get some reviews, I may or may not make a second chapter, depending on the reviews. GinOhami
GinOhami
P.S. I do not own the Chipmunks, Chipettes, Dave, or Miss Miller but I do own all of the other characters.
*~Chapter One: The Day Before The First Day of High School~*
It was a sunny afternoon at the Chipmunk house. Alvin and Brittany were out in the backyard by the pool. "Come on Brittany," Alvin coaxed, leaning on the wall of the pool. "It's the last day of summer. This is our last chance to splash around in the pool until next summer."
Brittany glared at Alvin from under her umbrella and beach chair. "Alvin, I refuse to get into the water. I haven't gotten a tan all summer! It's horrible! If I don't get one today, what will all the girls at school think? Besides, my nails haven't even dried yet." Brittany stuck her tongue out at Alvin and quickly started back to reading her Teen Fashion magazine.
Alvin sighed and continued to play around with the water basketball hoop. I don't see what the deal is with girls. After knowing Brittany for a long time I still don't know how her mind works, Alvin thought. Then, suddenly he gave a wicked grin. I bet she's too sucked into that stupid magazine to notice if I get out of the pool and sneak up on her.
Alvin quietly stepped out of the pool and approached Britney on tiptoe. He smiled and then in a flash grabbed Brittany.. thrusting her towards the pool. "Alvin, no!" Britney squealed. "Don't you dare or I swear." But her sentence was cut short when she was pushed into the water. Alvin started to laugh. As soon as Brittany's head reached the surface of the water, she looked up at Alvin and said, "Now look what you've done! My clothes are soaked and I just did my hair today!"
Alvin immediately felt bad that Brittany was yelling at him. "I'm sorry, Brittany. Let me help you." He reached out his hand. Brittany grabbed onto his hand, smiled, and then pulled him into the water. Both of them splashed at each other and laughed.
"What's going on back here?" Simon asked, followed closely by Theodore, Jeanette, and Eleanor. They had ran out of the house while hearing all of Brittany and Alvin's commotion. "We thought you two were in trouble."
Brittany laughed, "Oh no, we're not in trouble. We were just having a bit of fun, that's all."
"Fun?" Jeanette asked. "Since when do you have this kind of fun, Brittany? I thought you didn't want your hair or clothes to go wet."
"Yeah". Eleanor agreed
"I was pulled into the water by Alvin. Of course I was mad at first. My hair was ruined and these clothes can only be dry cleaned. But how can I get mad at this face?" and Brittany pointed to Alvin. Alvin blushed a bright red.
"Well, since this was settled, me and Eleanor are going to go bake a yellow cake," Theodore exclaimed.
"That's Eleanor and I," Simon and Jeanette said at once. Everyone started to laugh. This was the best afternoon ever! TO BE CONTINUED.. I know this was short but I wanted you guys to get a feel of my writing technique. If I get some reviews, I may or may not make a second chapter, depending on the reviews. GinOhami