hi guys. this is my first fanfic.
if u dont like it, no problem. im not a good writer.
so just say what i have to improve on.
i own nothing, exept for the story and leon.
and no, not chameleon leon. just a random villan i made up.
but, if there is a villan guy just named leon, just tell me.
anyway, enjoy!
LEE'S P.O.V.
it was just me, marc and tony. megan was out shopping with mom and was unaware of what was going on. we were all huddled under a bridge, trying to stay hidden from leon, who was destroying everything in sight to find us. we would usually fight back back, but we were all really tired from getting out of that cave.
after a few minutes, all was quiet exept for the heavy footsteps above us. when they stopped, i heard clicking. then the footsteps, quickly running off the bridge.
"is h-he gone?" tony asked, a lot of fear in his voice.
"i think so... i dont hear anything." marc replied. i heard a bit of fear in his voice, too.
suddenly, i heard a beep. then another. the beeps kept going, more and more rapid each time. then i knew what it was!
"GET OUT OF...!" and before i could finish, i head a loud BOOM. and everything around us just exploded and fell apart.
...
...
"lee."
...
"lee!"
i opened my eyes, feeling a little dazed. i saw marc kneeling at my side. i was lying on my back on the rubble,and saw mounds of concrete and broken bricks three of us were... wait, 3?
i looked around frantically, but i didnt see tony.
marc knew what i was thinking and looked down. "i couldnt find him, either..."
just then i saw a flash of yellow. it was tony's spy suit! i quickly got up and rushed over, and marc and i tried to dig him out of the rubble.
he wasnt moving...
marc looked at him, tears starting to form in his eyes.
my heart raced. i looked for a pulse. a heartbeat. anything.
i put my head on his chest. finally, i heard a very faint, very slow heartbeat. i picked him up as gently as i could. "we have to get him to the hospital or something!" i said. i was so scared. was he going to make it?
we were all sitting in the hospital, including megan. mom or dad didnt know about this yet. i was leaning my head on my arm, stroking my little brother's hair.
i felt his head move. i looked at him, and his eyes fluttered open.
he smiled, and i knew he was gonna be okay.
i know, i know, i suck at endings...
well, just review and tell me what i have to improve on.
