Son Gohan, Saiyan on Earth
Prologue
The light emanating from Shenron's summoning illuminated the otherwise dark and cloudy sky.
"L-Lord Beerus," fumbling words as he sweatdropped, "I'll be taking my leave; farewell."
"Wait!"
Shenron stopped to eye Piccolo. "What is it, former Kami?"
"We may need a wish in the near future." Piccolo did not understand why, but he had a gut instinct that their plan to create the Super Saiyan God would not exactly go perfectly.
Shenron's eyes squinted at Piccolo, as if to wonder if Piccolo had the right to order him any longer; perhaps he might comply soley in respect of the power gap between them.
"…Very well. I will remain so long as Lord Beerus is in the solar system." Having said this, Shenron went silent as the Saiyans proceeded with their ritual attempt.
"Woah, Dad's amazing!" Goten yelled.
"Yeah," Gohan agreed, "So this is the power of a Super Saiyan God…" as Goku charged towards Beerus relentlessly.
Yet, over time, Goku began to tire in his antics, and it quickly began to show as Beerus got more hits in. Soon, Goku was helpless to Beerus' barrage and continued to take major damage, and was slammed downwards into the ocean, as Beerus floated over in the sky, peering down at the ripple where Goku had fallen.
Damn, it's not enough! Gohan thought. I feel so helpless… Just watching Dad get thrown around like this…
Reading Gohan's mind, Piccolo said, "I know how you feel. But you can't do anything to help. Their power is almost incomprehensible to us right now, not to mention the fact you've slacked on your training for years."
Gohan clenched his fists.
"I wish I was in Dad's shoes. I wish I could go back in time, be like Dad. If I'd trained, I might've been able to – "
"Your wish is granted."
"… Wait. What?"
A shining light blinded Gohan.
Author's notes will be listed at the bottom as such. Possible Q&As in the future?
How does this story look? It's my first fic attempt, so I would really appreciate all feedback.
If anyone's confused, basically, the plotline is;
In DBZ Timeline, Gohan replaces Goku. Gohan is sent as Bardock's son, has the Dragon Ball adventures,
and eventually has a son. Who happens to be Goku.
I'm planning on breezing through Dragon Ball; don't really know it too well, I haven't read all of the manga yet, but most of it.
Gohan's probably gonna be amnesiac as a result of the head collision, but will receive "premonitions" from his canon experiences.
Thoughts?
I'll see you all next chapter!