Hello readers of fanfiction! Yes, I deleted my other story but I was sick of the flames I was getting and I knew if I continued I would just get more. I understand that people are trying to help me when they leave their never-ending reviews of why my story sucks but it does more bad than good. And again, you flamers may think that that's not reasonable or that I'm blowing it out of proportion, but think about it, when was the last time YOU got one of those reviews? You didn't want to take the reviewers advice, you wanted to pound the reviewers face in and tell them where they can go. So, I've decided to try writing a story WITHOUT an OC as a main character because apparently, I suck at writing them. As always, R&R and please try to be nice when giving criticism. Now, enjoy the story!

P.S. Saying a bunch of bad things and then calling me a good writer does not make it a constructive review, that's STILL a flame.

Chapter 1

If people could read her mind, they'd think she was crazy. And honestly, she wouldn't be surprised if she was.

Her life belonged in a fiction piece. Not only was she one of 5 people chosen to save the world from total catastrophe, now, she was inside the dungeon to a castle just outside Neo Domino City. Oh yeah, the castle belongs to vampires.

She had been kidnapped on the way to school by a really tall, pale guy and knocked unconscious. When she woke up, she was here.

She had kept telling herself out loud and in her head that she was probably in a coma again and dreaming all of this. Or that she had a break down and was put in a mental hospital and the medication was giving her hallucinations. One way or another, this couldn't be real.

She was being kept by 4 vampires. Andre, Alaina, Adam, and Ava. They were all tall, pale and had dark red hair. They were probably all related somehow. Siblings and cousins maybe?

Adam had been the one that kidnapped her. He seemed to have this liking for her. He was always the one to bring her food or new clothes. Even though she was a prisoner, they gave her amazing food and beautiful dresses to wear. At the moment, she was wearing a black, strapless dress that was floor length and embroidered with shiny, black beads. She was still wearing her usual red choker but she was bare-foot.

Adam would come and talk to her everyday. At least she thought it was everyday. She had lost track of time and couldn't tell how much time was passing. With no windows or clocks, you could expect just as much.

Adam would tell her about his life before becoming a vampire and how he fell inlove with a woman who looked very similar to her. This was a long time ago, back in the 14th century, so he's pretty old.

Sometimes he'll come to her cell in the worst mood and start throwing things. Apparently, his vampire friends were trying to get him to kill her or turn her. He discussed it with her and she said she would rather die than be a vampire.

She was reviewing it all in her head as Adam stormed down the stone staircase to her cell. She greeted him as usual but he didn't respond. He opened her cell and gestured her out.

"We must leave." He informed.

"Why?"

"There isn't time for that, we must leave! Now!" He demanded.

She was so confused. She started following him. "What's going on?" she demanded as she followed him up the staircase.

He turned and grabbed her wrists, stopping her in her tracks.

"We're under attack." He turned and started dragging her with him.

"By who?" she yelled as her feet dragged along the velvet carpets that were laid on the stone floor.

"Were-wolves."

She gasped. Were-wolves? Yeah, she was definitely dreaming.

Adam rounded the corner right into Ava. Ava looked at the girl in Adams hands and rolled her eyes.

"You're really bringing her?"

Adam's face grew a tad pink, showing his anger was extreme. "Yes."

Ava rolled her eyes again. "There's no need to get all fussy, I just don't see the point if you're not going to turn her."

He sighed and calmed, returning to his pale self again. "Let's just get out of here before we're slaughtered too."

Too?

Ava voiced her thoughts exactly.

"Too? Who was-"

"Andre. He was always too brave."

Ava was silent. Adam started dragging her too but she shrugged him off.

"We need to go, Ava. We need to find Alaina and get out of here."

Ava slowly nodded and started to follow him.

The were what looked like the front entrance room when they came across some mangled bodies, including Andre's body.

"Oh my god." Ava whispered.

Adam tugged on her shoulder.

"C'mon. Before we join them."

Ava nodded and started walking toward the door with Adam until she froze. Adam turned to look at her, his impatience growing. Ava turned to the right and attacked a now-visible were-wolf. She was beating the wolf, but more had entered the room and had started attacking both of them. Adam shouted at her to run out the door and leave. She nodded and started running. Before she exited she gave Adam one last glance and mouthed a good-bye.

Akiza started running towards a car. She opened the door and found the key in the starter. She breathed a sighed of relief and stepped inside the car. A moment later, she was tugged out and thrown against the car. Alaina was now pressed against her with her teeth right at the base of her neck. Akiza was breathing heavily, preparing for the pain she was about to endure.

But something caught Alaina's attention before she bit Akiza.

Adam was in the doorway of the castle. He was bleeding a bit and had many scratches all over his body. Alaina smirked and bit Akiza's neck. Adam yelled as he ripped Alaina off of her and told her to get in the car and go. Akiza complied and sped away.

She was free.

END

So that was chapter one. Hope you enjoyed it! Please review!