Well the old intro was not good. It didn't catch the reader's attention (not even mine!). So I wrote a new one. This is a proper prologue in my opinion. And it does seem to catch my attention. Maybe now more people will read to the second chapter!
Prologue
Moonspirit sat in the clearing with Midnightstar. The LightClan leader turned to look at her. Moonspirit didn't see her. She was looking at the starry sky as though she could see something no other cat could. She blinked her eyes suddenly, looking at the black she-cat with a smile.
"Did you see something? Was it a message? A prophecy?" Midnightstar asked urgently.
Moonspirit nodded. "It is a tough time for LightClan at the moment. However, StarClan have assured me things will get better."
Midnightstar smiled at the wise old medicine cat. "What did StarClan show you?" she asked, resting her bushy tail on her paws.
"For a moment the stars formed a young she-cat." Moonspirit explained. "She was running alongside her clanmates. Cats from other Clans ran behind her as well. She looked determined, like she was going into battle, or possibly trying to save the other cats from some sort of danger." she paused, gazing back up at Silverpelt. "The strange thing was that she was the only one with stars in her pelt. They disappeared under all of the others."
"What does this mean?" Midnightstar asked, her amber eyes clouded with comfusion.
"Only the cat with stars in her pelt can save the Clans."
Short Prologue! The next chapter is a lot longer! This is just to introduce the prophecy which probably follows the whole way through to the last story (I have four planned, but if no one wants that many I'll just leave it after the sequel to this one).