This is my first story so reviews would be great. Could you tell me the good parts and the bad parts of my story? No flaming please.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.
Saskue is panting right now, he is against Itachi. Itachi isn't even sweating. Juugo, Karin, and Suigestu are not watching him. As well as Kisame. (a/n they finished the fight wtih Kisame and everything)
"Foolish brother, you are not strong enough to defeat me. You have troubled me for the last time. Your eyes aren't even worth taking, for now anyway. But for now, I think I'll put your arms on hold" Itachi said. Then he did an Amaterasu with a seal that doesn't burn you, but immobilizes the part on where you got hit.
"Agggghhhhhhh!" Saskue screamed.
"Saskue!" Karin shouted.
"We are leaving, Kisame" Itachi said.
"Right" They took off
Saskue was in pain, he now knew how Orochimaru felt when his hands were sealed. He needed to fine a medical ninja and fast. He couldn't possibly kill Itachi with his arms like this.
"Karin, Suigestu, Juugo, we are going to Konoha" he said.
"Why" they all screamed.
"Because there are a lot of good medical ninja in Konoha and I need my arms healed. Plus, I could carry the med. Ninja along with me in case we are injured by Itachi or any other ninja."
"All right, but who do you have in mind?" asked Karin.
"The Land of Fire's Hokage, Tsunade"
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In the Hokage's office:
"Achoo" Tsunade sneezed.
"Are you all right, Tsunade-shishou" asked a concerned Sakura, her parents have died from a ninja that invaded Konoha, it was a sound ninja.
"I'm fine, someone must be talking about me, anyway, Sakura, I am going to teach you a new jutsu."
"Hai, arigato, Tsunade-shisou"
"Your welcome"
In forest:
"Okay, Sakura, I'm going to teach you how to summon Katsuya."
"Okay, but what type of animal is Katsuya?"
Tsunade smirked and bit her thumb, with blood coming out (just a little) puts it on arm and does hand signs and summons Katsuya (I think this is how the process is done).
"Sakura, this is Katsuya, she is a slug"
"Hello"
"Hi"
"Anyway, to be able to summon her you must sign this contract with the blood you want to summon her with"
"Hai" Sakura bites her right thumb and signs contract.
"Okay, Katsuya, disappear, sorry for disturbing you."
"Yes, Tsunade-sama" and disappears
"Sakura, I showed you the hand signs and you try to do it."
"Okay" Does it and nothing comes out
"It takes time, I got to go back to my office, Sakura you keep practicing"
"Hai, of course Tsunade-shisou"
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Saskue and the gang (to lazy to right other names) head out and are now in Konoha forest. They all suddenly stop when there is a big puff of smoke.
"Lets rest for a while some place else. I am to tired to fight and my arms are useless so lets rest for a while"
They nodded in agreement and set up camp somewhere.
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It has been 2 hours and Sakura only summons little slugs and she is completely wiped out.
"Can't pant rest, have to be strong pant for my team. I don't want to be left behind. You can do it!"
Does it one more time and finally "summoning jutsu" and Katsuya appears out of a huge puff of smoke.
"Congratulations, Sakura, for summoning me"
"Thanks"
"But, I won't let a complete stranger ride on me without my master's say so and I need to know more about you, so"
"I'm Haruno Sakura and I-" (appostraphy not working)
"Wait, you're a Haruno" Sakura nods
"So, you know about you kekkai genkai, right" Sakura shakes her head.
"Okay, your family has an inner self. It can help guide you in battle and give you strength. It can also take over for you in battle, if you want. You can also use any kekkai gengaki you see. Though, it is very rare. Anyway, I now accept you as my master because we have talked a lot and the closest way to know you is to battle with you, so, congratulations!"
"Wait, can I even use the sharingan and byakugan" Katsuya nodded.
"Okay, thanks and how come no one told me this"
"Because it's suppose to be a secret sense your dad's dad was accused of hurting lots of children with that kind of power because he thought he was better than everyone else and that he should have been Hokage, don't worry, though, people in the Haruno clan can control it, your grandfather was just weird, no offense"
"None taken and thank you so much for all of the information"
"Your welcome and take some of my chakra, you look exhausted from trying to summon me and a little of my chakra is just enough chakra for you"
"Arigato" Katsuya gave her some of her chakra and now Sakura feels great.
"Thanks, I feel great, I'll see you soon" Katsuya smiled and said by and disappeared.
Sakura couldn't bear all of this info in just one day, she just thought in the forest.
To be continued…
