The Amelien Fiefdom
By: Hyuper Mage
Allo's all, PLEASE REVIEW!!! I personally think that this is really good, so, don't let me down!!
"Why do you think Neal wanted to see you?" Kel asked Dom as they headed for the main entrance of the Caste.
"I don't know, he said it had something to do with family matters," they spotted eal, he was as white as a piece of paper.
"Hello Neal, why are you so pale?" Kel asked Neal, Dom looked at Neals pale face and laughed. Neal looked at them blankly.
"I wouldn't be laughing if I were you Dom, Caroline is coming to the palace from the convent," Dom's sudden change of additude told Kel that this Caroline must have done something bad.
"Whose Caroline?" She asked, both Dom & Neal looked at her as if they need protection.
"Caroline, how can we explain Caroline?" Neal said thoughtfully.
"Let's put it this way kel, she would have joined you, if her parents hadn't have shipped her early to the convent." Dom shuddered at the thought of Caroline, Kel noticed the shutter.
"Is she that bad? Or did she turn out bad?" She asked them, they both shook their heads.
"Well, from the letter I get from her, she's changed at least a little, I mean, what kind of knight would like embriodering?" Neal sat down on a bench, hard. "She has the gift of gab, that's for sure, yet she is very nice, very brave, she would have made a nice opponent for you if she had become a lady knight, hopefully they didn't beat all of her spirit out of her.
"Ones thing for sure, her parents must be extriemly happy she passed early," Dom laughed, "I wonder who we should introduce her to, Owen & her would make a good couple," Neal looked at Dom & they both laughed. Kel ignored their little inside joke.
"What side of the family is she from?" She asked.
"She's my direct cousin, her father married my aunt, my favorite aunt," Dom nodded.
"Caroline of Amelien, how long has it been since I've seen her?" Dom asked himself.
"Gods, it must have been before I became a page, she gave me this," Neal pulled out a bracelet, it had the symbol of the goddess.
"I've never seen that before, what is it?" asked kel, Neal blushed.
"One things for sure, you'll never see it again. It's a protective spell bracelet, she made it herself, good mage she was, before her parents made her go to the convent," Dom straitened up.
"Look, there's her carriage, let's go," Dom said, waling gracefully to the carriage. Kel Had never seen such a house crest. It had a large mountian, with a river that wound around the bottom. At the top it had an eagle flying & a wolf pack walking near the river at the bottom, Neal noticed what she was looking at.
"Like it? Her father came up to, they're really into nature," Dom told them to shush, the door had opened. A man came out, well armed, he looked around him, then spotted Neal and smiled.
"Caroline, you're dear cousin Meathead is here," Neal blushed, but it didn't last long. At first, nothing was coming out, then out came Caroline. Kel thought that Caroline could rival even the queen if she had to. Her long, light brown hair was flowing freely, she wore a simple dress, a dark green that brought out her eyes, and atop her nose, glasses that were so delicate they looked as if they could brake easiliy. When she saw Neal and Dom, A wide smile appeared on her face. Dom & Neal ran up to her, she met them half way, Kel walked behind them, feeling a bit out of place.
"Neal, Dom, By the goddess!! How long has it been?" She cried out with joy, tears ran down her face.
"Long enough, I guess they haven't taken away all of your spirit, you actually ran!" Dom cried out. Caroline laughed, it was a real genuine laugh, not the fake, lady like laugh.
"I wouldn't get too carried away Dom, I may be in a dress, but I've learned a couple of tricks while I was away, and you Neal? No stupid little comment from you, If I remember clearly, you said I would never be skinny." She turned in front of them, showing a perfect figure.
"What did they do to you? Startve you t death?" He cried out, Caroline slapped the back of Neals head hard enough to makje him wince.
"Watch it Meathead, I've still got orbs of you at midwinter," Neal paled.
"No you don't fat cow, I stole them all."
"As much as I don't want to brake up this little family reunion, Lady Caroline, we have to take everything to your new rooms," said Howard, her man servant.
"yes, yes that's right, go on ahead I'll be right there. Neal, Dom, who is that girl hidding behind you guys?:" She asked, dom & neal turned around, they had fogotten about kel.
"Caroline, this is my best friend, and Doms girlfriend, Keladry of Mindelan," Kel walked foward and shook Caroline's hand, she was surprised when Caroline squeezed back, Caroline noticed her startlement.
"If I would have met you at court, I would have been more lady like, but there are no convent hawks here, they absolutly dread the sunlight," Caroline made a hissing sound as if to melt in the sun, that brought out a laugh out of eveyone.
"Well, at least you haven't lost your humor," Dom remarked.
"Yes, but it's not like they didn't try to beat it out of me. Well my little people," She mocked bowed, "I must leave for I only have 3 hours until my intruduction to court, what joy," the look on her face was of pure disqust, she obviously didn't need mcuh time. She walked into the palace, leaving Dom, Neal & Kel shocked.
"Well, I guess they didn't beat all of it out of her after all," Neal remarked to no one in particular. Dom just nodded.
"SHe seems well enough, almost a proper lady, I bet she'll turn into one at the ball tongiht like she used to back home"
"I liked her, she seems nice," Kel said to them, they kind of just stared at her blankly.
"You have no idea how weird she can be," they said in unison.
By: Hyuper Mage
Allo's all, PLEASE REVIEW!!! I personally think that this is really good, so, don't let me down!!
"Why do you think Neal wanted to see you?" Kel asked Dom as they headed for the main entrance of the Caste.
"I don't know, he said it had something to do with family matters," they spotted eal, he was as white as a piece of paper.
"Hello Neal, why are you so pale?" Kel asked Neal, Dom looked at Neals pale face and laughed. Neal looked at them blankly.
"I wouldn't be laughing if I were you Dom, Caroline is coming to the palace from the convent," Dom's sudden change of additude told Kel that this Caroline must have done something bad.
"Whose Caroline?" She asked, both Dom & Neal looked at her as if they need protection.
"Caroline, how can we explain Caroline?" Neal said thoughtfully.
"Let's put it this way kel, she would have joined you, if her parents hadn't have shipped her early to the convent." Dom shuddered at the thought of Caroline, Kel noticed the shutter.
"Is she that bad? Or did she turn out bad?" She asked them, they both shook their heads.
"Well, from the letter I get from her, she's changed at least a little, I mean, what kind of knight would like embriodering?" Neal sat down on a bench, hard. "She has the gift of gab, that's for sure, yet she is very nice, very brave, she would have made a nice opponent for you if she had become a lady knight, hopefully they didn't beat all of her spirit out of her.
"Ones thing for sure, her parents must be extriemly happy she passed early," Dom laughed, "I wonder who we should introduce her to, Owen & her would make a good couple," Neal looked at Dom & they both laughed. Kel ignored their little inside joke.
"What side of the family is she from?" She asked.
"She's my direct cousin, her father married my aunt, my favorite aunt," Dom nodded.
"Caroline of Amelien, how long has it been since I've seen her?" Dom asked himself.
"Gods, it must have been before I became a page, she gave me this," Neal pulled out a bracelet, it had the symbol of the goddess.
"I've never seen that before, what is it?" asked kel, Neal blushed.
"One things for sure, you'll never see it again. It's a protective spell bracelet, she made it herself, good mage she was, before her parents made her go to the convent," Dom straitened up.
"Look, there's her carriage, let's go," Dom said, waling gracefully to the carriage. Kel Had never seen such a house crest. It had a large mountian, with a river that wound around the bottom. At the top it had an eagle flying & a wolf pack walking near the river at the bottom, Neal noticed what she was looking at.
"Like it? Her father came up to, they're really into nature," Dom told them to shush, the door had opened. A man came out, well armed, he looked around him, then spotted Neal and smiled.
"Caroline, you're dear cousin Meathead is here," Neal blushed, but it didn't last long. At first, nothing was coming out, then out came Caroline. Kel thought that Caroline could rival even the queen if she had to. Her long, light brown hair was flowing freely, she wore a simple dress, a dark green that brought out her eyes, and atop her nose, glasses that were so delicate they looked as if they could brake easiliy. When she saw Neal and Dom, A wide smile appeared on her face. Dom & Neal ran up to her, she met them half way, Kel walked behind them, feeling a bit out of place.
"Neal, Dom, By the goddess!! How long has it been?" She cried out with joy, tears ran down her face.
"Long enough, I guess they haven't taken away all of your spirit, you actually ran!" Dom cried out. Caroline laughed, it was a real genuine laugh, not the fake, lady like laugh.
"I wouldn't get too carried away Dom, I may be in a dress, but I've learned a couple of tricks while I was away, and you Neal? No stupid little comment from you, If I remember clearly, you said I would never be skinny." She turned in front of them, showing a perfect figure.
"What did they do to you? Startve you t death?" He cried out, Caroline slapped the back of Neals head hard enough to makje him wince.
"Watch it Meathead, I've still got orbs of you at midwinter," Neal paled.
"No you don't fat cow, I stole them all."
"As much as I don't want to brake up this little family reunion, Lady Caroline, we have to take everything to your new rooms," said Howard, her man servant.
"yes, yes that's right, go on ahead I'll be right there. Neal, Dom, who is that girl hidding behind you guys?:" She asked, dom & neal turned around, they had fogotten about kel.
"Caroline, this is my best friend, and Doms girlfriend, Keladry of Mindelan," Kel walked foward and shook Caroline's hand, she was surprised when Caroline squeezed back, Caroline noticed her startlement.
"If I would have met you at court, I would have been more lady like, but there are no convent hawks here, they absolutly dread the sunlight," Caroline made a hissing sound as if to melt in the sun, that brought out a laugh out of eveyone.
"Well, at least you haven't lost your humor," Dom remarked.
"Yes, but it's not like they didn't try to beat it out of me. Well my little people," She mocked bowed, "I must leave for I only have 3 hours until my intruduction to court, what joy," the look on her face was of pure disqust, she obviously didn't need mcuh time. She walked into the palace, leaving Dom, Neal & Kel shocked.
"Well, I guess they didn't beat all of it out of her after all," Neal remarked to no one in particular. Dom just nodded.
"SHe seems well enough, almost a proper lady, I bet she'll turn into one at the ball tongiht like she used to back home"
"I liked her, she seems nice," Kel said to them, they kind of just stared at her blankly.
"You have no idea how weird she can be," they said in unison.