This is my first story so I don't expect it to be that good
Chapter :1: training begin
Sabuto was lying down on his bed with his long golden hair over his face exhausted from his training with Kyraa.
Kyraa comes running in nearly breaking the door of its hinges starter ling sabuto and talking very fast' "calm down kyraa talk slowly" "we just made it in to the stream fighting competition sensei shyro pulled a few strings and got us in" kyraa falls to the ground thanking her lucky charm but suddenly stops : there's only one thing were up against yoshimaru and heyonie" "and who are they" shyro walks in through the nearly broken door "oh just orushika's students" "ha ha well we can take them cant we kyraa
" " well I just don't think your ready yet !!!!! hmmmm starting tomorrow we will start training with r new techniques " "fine just let me rest then".
"first thing tomorrow was that just to much to ask of him" "he will be here don't worry"
"here he comes" shouts kyraa with the biggest voice she could find on this cold day
Sabuto walk clumsily up to the two to say "hi haws your morning been" letting out a huge yawn "WERE THE HELL HAVE U BEEN WE HAVE BEEN WATING FOR YOU FOR 15 MINITS AND 43 SECOND UR LATE ARRRRGGGGHHH"
" don't worry about that lets get started ok kyraa strike that tree with your charckra spin" kyraa focus charkra in to her pamls feet and pacific parts around her bodey to form kind of a flame around her and with using the charkra in her feet she spins creating a hurricane "charcra stike"
"now sabuto stop that spin with your sabutos strike"
Sorry that's all I have done plz comment I also need constructive criticism so thanks
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