A little something I wrote in Science last year. I never got around to uploading it...the rookie reflects on the Turks, and her date with Tseng. I think this is a very pretty piece...please review.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry/Angst - Words: 249 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/14/2001 - id: 403059
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Author's Notes: Here's a little poem I wrote in Science one fine day
Author's Notes:
Here's a little poem I wrote in Science one fine day. Elena, reflecting on her fellow Turks and her dinner date with Tseng that was never able to occur. It's kinda sad…but I REALLY like it. I think the rhythm sounds nice. Please review. Oh, and for those who have read "A Walk in the Woods" and are wondering what the fook happened to part 2, well…I've gone through 3 computer crashes and about 4 second halves of part 2. So please, be patient. Thank you.
Tonight We Go
Tonight he goes to danger
His life is again
At stake
Murderous glint in his eyes
Callous to fear
He leads the way—
The fool.
Tonight he goes to work
The same is not the
Norm
Eyes hidden, feelings hidden
His past hidden to me
He plods behind—
The thinker.
Tonight he goes to Temple
The secrets will
Be unlocked
A wound, a whisper
He loves her
Lover passes away—
The angel.
Tonight I go to dinner
We will talk, and
Maybe more
I wait, and wait
The man is not here
A tear is shed—
The mourner.
I reach home, a message
It wasn't me
He couldn't come
There were complications.
My feelings never told…
My body goes cold.
Oh yes. That's an awesome poem. Don't forget to review, kiddies!