LAW OF THE JUNGLE
by warriorsfanbecky
((AN: This is set before they go to the Lake so it's the old territory! I've been working on this for a really long time and I think its really good so please comment and give sugestions for my next story and next chapters of this one! Thanks! -Becky~~ 3 ))
Chapter 1: It begins
My name is GreyNose. I'm a white she-cat with beautiful hazel-red orbs, grey ears, grey paws, a grey tail and (obviously,) a grey nose. The rest of me is white. I'm a Thunderclan warrior but I know I'll be deputy someday, and someday after that leader. I know I can, I believe in myself. For now, I'm stuck as a warrior. Ugh! Waiting is so hard. Anyway… Today, I can sense, is different than normal. Something will happen today, I know it.
((AN: she can't actually tell the future it's just foreshadowing. My English teacher taught us about forshadowing today lol. Anyway, back to the fic! :3 ))
I saw Firestar prowling around the edges of the camp. He seems a little on edge today… I wonder why? I decided to go ask why. "Firestar," I said, trying not to blush. I have a bit of a crush on him, but don't tell! It's a secret, and I know he loves Sandstorm and not me. He's just sooo hot! I tried not to feel sad about that as I continued. "What's wrong? Did something bad happen?"
"Sort of,' he said, looking nervous and turning his orbs towards the ground. "I saw some twolegs outside of camp today. Near the Shadowclan border. I hope they aren't going to come closer. That would be bad. How wopuld we fight twolegs? Badgers or foxes are one thing, but twolegs? That's really bad." He frowned, then looked up at me, suddenly looking embarassed. "Oh sorry I was rambling. I do that sometimes, haha…"
I hummed. "It's okay leader Firestar. I do that sometimes too!" We're so alike. Why doesn't he like me? What does Spottedlead have that I don't?! I mean Sandstorm? (Sorry I forgot Spottedlead died. That was mean of me.) I think I'm just as good as her. I frowned slightly while humming as I walked away. "I'll keep a lookout for humans," I said over my shoulder with a smirk. I could have sworn he blushed as he turned away.
Not long had passed before I saw my best friend Whitefur. She was looking happy today. "Hi GreyNose," she said hapily, licking my ear but in a friend way because we're not gay! ((AN: I'm not homophobic though! I love yaoi!)) "Do you want to go hunting?" she asked happilly. "Sure!" I said excitedly. I love hunting and espceially when I go with my friends!
We made our way outside the camp, pausing occasionally to scent for twolegs. Barely anything was to be found. Why was there barely anything? It was like everything had ran away. Finally, I spotted a rabbit. "I call that fresh-kill," I said excitedly, staring at it and humming. My orbs were focused on it, I wasn't going to let it go. Maybe if I brought such a big rabbit back to camp Firestar might like me more? I blushed as I hoped about that.
"I don't like that," said Whitefur, shakingly. "That looks very suspicous. It doesn't scent like a normal bunny does. It smells like twoleg."
I looked at Whitefur like she was stupid. "You're being stupid," I said with a frown. "That is clearly a rabbit. What else would it be? It's a rabbit. If you're not gonna catch it then I will." Sticking out my toung at her I ran. She wouldn't stop me from hunting good and impressing Firestar. Fine, if she wanted to get in the way she could but she couldn't get in my way. I was ready. Time to catch a rabbit! I felt the adrenalin going through me as I ran really fast. There was the rabit. Closer- closer- closer! Almost THERE! I unsheathed my claws and leapt but then suddenly I couldn't see. What was happening?! A weird material was covering me. Like brambles, except soft but also sort of rough and actually not like brambles at all except for the fact that I couldn't escape. I couldn't escape! "HELP," I yelled, panickingly. I heard Whitefur yelling but I was panicking too hard to hear what she was saying. I felt myself being lifted up. Then, I finally heard what Whitefur was saying.
"IT'S A TWOLEG AND THEY HAVE A MONSTER!" she finally screamed loud enough for me to hear. No! It couldn't be. How didnt we hear them coming? They must have a sort of monster that is extra quiet. I was so scared! Was I going to die? I wasn't ready to go to Starclan. The only cat there I knew was Spottedlead and I didn't even like her. I wouldn't even see Firestar again! How could we be mates if I was dead?
"NOOO!" I screamed, trying to escape but I felt a twoleg grab me. They stuck something sharp in my side and it really hurt. Slowly, I felt everything going black. Everything went to darkness and I was awake no more.
((AN: so that's the first chapter! :3 did you like? leave a comment! but if you didn't like don't read and no flaming pls. I worked really hard and yeah so pls no flaming. What will happen next chapter? Will GreyNose be dead? No she won't because then the fic will be over lol. But will Whitefur find her? Will she finally get to date her senpai FIRESTAR? Find out in the next LOTJ! -Becky~~ 3 ))