The Lost and Destroyed one

Intro

I DONT OWN THESE CHARACTERS OR THE SHOW YOUNG JUSTICE BUT MY CHARACTER OR ANY FUTURE CHARACTERS I MIGHT ADD TO IT TO FILL YOU UP WITH ADVENTURES AND MAYBE A TON OF DRAMA...So without further delay my intro to the story ENJOY! :-)

I was 7 years old when my mother and father were murdered right before my eyes. At the time my parents were murdered before me I could not move or scream for I was frozen in fear the worst part was I could not move my eyes so I sat there as I watch that horrible, disgusting man that we helped/saved kill my only family I had. As I was staring at my lifeless parents stay unmoving on the floor hoping that they would get off the floor and say got you but I knew that they were truly gone, as I was looking at them while in thought I didn't notice that he was coming towards me when he was right next to me he used his knife and hit my right eyeball with it. Once he got my eye I somehow got my voice back because I screamed bloody murder which got many of the men from down the street with bats and guns coming my way the man that killed my parents cursed at me hit me and took off running into the night. On this day September 7, 2007 I lost my parents, my right eye and my right to be happy for I survived with 1 eye missing and a bruise while my parents ended up dead and because that man got away as well as the fact that many kids family's get killed a lot I decided I would fight crime and save peoples happiness, my names Violet Rose but when I stop crime as a supper hero I am called Willow and this is my story from the beginning to the end of my life.

so how did I do did ya like it or was it bad if ya liked it would ya tell me what you liked about it so I don't feel like an idiot...please this is my first one so... tell me