My First Fear

This is a short story about Tobias's fear of heights. Tell me if you love it or hate. Please review.

Tris always ask me how I got my first fear I never answer her even though I trust her. It brings back too many painful memories. The story begins at a dauntless's birthday. I am not sure whose it was. I had to go because it is selfish to not go celebrate someone's birth. The party was at a bungee jumping place. The girl invited everyone to bungee jump. It was really fun until everyone left except my father and me.

''Tobias this is for your own good.'' He says like always. Next thing I know I was flying in into the fake waterfall. I got hit in the head so hard I was unconscious, but before that I choked on the water for ten minutes. Then when Marcus was done he brought me home. He beat me and afterwards threw me into the closet. I shudder while telling Tris that. She wraps me into a warm hug that turns into a kiss. Then we go asleep. I feel good for finally telling this to Tris.

Like always divergent should be real I would love that. Okay. Like always Ashley out.