Ok, so this is my first story. Plz review and tell me if it stinks or if it is good. It would help me with my other story

DISCLAIMER: I own all my characters, but I do not own characters made by Erin Hunter

Torn in Two

The little cat stood in the middle of the forest, the wind making the leaf-bare trees rattle spookily.

There! A flash of orange fur. The little cat tried to call out, but his voice didn't work in his dream. The scene began to fade, but the piercing green eyes remained…

So? How is it? I'll have the 1st chapter up in a couple days!