Okay, something dramatically shaped. I always wanted to write something
like that. Please don't see it too serious and don't tell me that it is
rubbish.
For this story I've decided to bring Sun back into the race. (I'll let her be one of the very important characters this time.)
Another An.:(If you find this whole stuff too curious, imagine that this is some kind of parallel universe.)
Warning, I read some Pearl S. Buck. You can see that 1% influence.
Have fun with that chaos of emotion, fear and the whole lot of pseudo- Asian,Yu-ish trash.
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"Can you hear me? Hey, I know you can, come on."
Since Sun was back, she had not talked much and for a whole lot of hours she did not even react on anybody trying to talk to her. Though everybody instead of him gave up attempting, Jack was not willing to give it up. She was through so much, but nobody thought that it would take her so long to get better or that things would become that worse with her. The core of the problem were just long suppressed memories from the first time it happened to her. For this second time it was just an accident that a Goa'Uld took possess of her. The Tok'ra managed to get it back out of her after a luckily very short time. But the memories of the first time were back very strong inside of her mind.
"Jack..."
She had spoken to him quietly but she did.
"Yes."
"I've killed them."
Sun could not forget it, Jack saw. The Jaffa and the other people she had to kill by the time she was Goa'Uld two years ago.
"It's okay. You don't have to worry about it anymore."
Sun started sobbing quietly. Jack took his arm around her by reflex. At normal circumstances Sun would not have appreciated this act but she was so apathetic that she said nothing to it. But then her opinion of it suddenly changed.
"Please leave me alone."
The intervals between talk and rejection slowly went longer. But this was the only progress that could be seen. So Jack left Sun's quarters. Outside the others were waiting for him.
"How did it go?", Sam asked.
"Better, but not much."
"I wish I could try to talk to her", Jonas sighed.
"She won't accept that. Remember what happened the last time", Sam refreshed his memory.
This moment Janet left the elevator. She walked over to the others.
"How's the situation?"
"You can try to get to her, I think."
Sam looked at Janet worried. "Do you have the infection under control?"
"Well, I think so. I still don't know why the scar doesn't stop being that sore. But it isn't so serious if the temperature doesn't get higher than it is now."
"I don't know how it would be if Sun wouldn't even allow to let her infection be treated."
"You are right. I'm asking myself the same."
Janet opened the door to the quarters and went inside slowly. Sam looked at the others and told them that she had to do some research, then she left. Jonas, Jack and Teal'C remained standing in the corridor.
"I still don't understand this all. What happened and what is it that makes her so down?", Jonas asked looking around for an answer. Jack told him what he knew about the happenings.
"Well, nobody is so sure of it. The only thing Sun had told till now is that it was an accident. I'm still wondering how she made it back here. I promise you, when this all is over I'll never let her go anywhere without knowing that everything's save there."
Now Teal'C continued by telling Jonas the whole background to her present situation.
"Two years ago Sun was made a Goa'Uld by Apophis. After some weeks we got her back away from him. After it all her mind was full of bad memories. They were about killings and torture she had to see and do as a helpless host. That time we were at least able to talk about it."
"That's absolutely a bad remembrance. But I still don't understand why she doesn't accept any help from us all and lets just Janet and Jack come close to her."
"She just told me that she does not want to ask seeing her in that bad condition out of you."
"She does not want to see Major Carter or me because of the presence inside us."
"There's a rest of presence inside me as well, that is what I don't understand. Why can I get so close to her? Has anybody an idea?"
Both Jonas and Teal'C shook their head.
This moment Janet left Sun's quarters. She looked up and answered the unspoken question that was on the faces of the three men.
"The infection went a bit better. She is sleeping now."
Jonas suggested Jack and Teal'C to come to the library with him. So the three went there and talked for a time. Then Teal'C went to do his Kel'Noreem. As Jonas had finished the second book and began to read a third one Jack decided to go to his quarters to sleep, what he had not done for over a day. Some hours passed, then the sleep was over for him and he felt the need to look after Sun once again.
The sedation went over to a fitful natural sleep. Sun saw all the happenings once again. It was just a nightmare but it all seemed absolutely real, the pain, the screams - their faces. Sun woke up freezing, with sweat all over her body and her face covered with tears. In the darkness that surrounded her she felt a presence.
"Jack?", She whispered.
"I'm here. It's all right, don't you cry. Everything's okay."
"I'm scared."
"You don't have to be."
Suddenly Sun started shivering all over. Jack helped her to lie down again.
"What's wrong?"
"I don't know."
"I'm calling Fraiser."
Jack left and returned a minute later, Janet arrived thirty seconds after him. Sun was about to loose consciousness now. She stopped shivering and was breathing heavily. Janet knelt down beside her.
"I don't understand this. Her temperature raised up to 106 degrees. The infection went more worse than before. She should be taken to infirmary immediately."
Sun was taken to infirmary. Jack sat beside her bed the whole night through. Janet tried everything that she could to get the infection under control again. But Sun's condition had not improved the next morning. Janet was not willing to give up. But she had no more idea what to do. She did absolutely not like what she had to tell General Hammond and the others.
"Sun's condition has gotten more than worse. I did not get the infection under control, yet and there is not a big chance that I will. I got over to give her antipyretics to keep the temperature on a constant level. I don't know if Sun will make it through."
An hour later Sun woke up for some minutes. Janet immediately was by her side.
"Hey. How do you feel?"
We both know how I feel. So why do you ask? Sun answered telepathically.
"You are causing us a lot of sorrow. I don't know what else I should do with you."
This time Sun spoke to Janet. Her voice was very weak, not more than a whisper.
"Jan, please listen carefully now. I've maybe found a way out. I know Jack won't like it. But there's the possibility that Yu can help me."
"How? Sun, please don't..."
But it was too late Sun went unconscious again.
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"Yu? Is she crazy?" Jack tried hard not to get loud but he actually did.
"Sir, I don't think she is. Do you remember how they are related?"
"Related, Carter? Yes, unfortunately I remember it. I tried to forget about this. But that's not a reason."
"With all due respect, Colonel. What else can we do? Her temperature has reached 107 degrees. She can't suffer it any longer. When there is not a big wonder happening, she has at least one more day."
"So bad?", Jonas asked shocked.
General Hammond looked around. "If this is the last possibility, we should give it a try. And she wants it so. We will send Lord Yu a message."
For this story I've decided to bring Sun back into the race. (I'll let her be one of the very important characters this time.)
Another An.:(If you find this whole stuff too curious, imagine that this is some kind of parallel universe.)
Warning, I read some Pearl S. Buck. You can see that 1% influence.
Have fun with that chaos of emotion, fear and the whole lot of pseudo- Asian,Yu-ish trash.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------
"Can you hear me? Hey, I know you can, come on."
Since Sun was back, she had not talked much and for a whole lot of hours she did not even react on anybody trying to talk to her. Though everybody instead of him gave up attempting, Jack was not willing to give it up. She was through so much, but nobody thought that it would take her so long to get better or that things would become that worse with her. The core of the problem were just long suppressed memories from the first time it happened to her. For this second time it was just an accident that a Goa'Uld took possess of her. The Tok'ra managed to get it back out of her after a luckily very short time. But the memories of the first time were back very strong inside of her mind.
"Jack..."
She had spoken to him quietly but she did.
"Yes."
"I've killed them."
Sun could not forget it, Jack saw. The Jaffa and the other people she had to kill by the time she was Goa'Uld two years ago.
"It's okay. You don't have to worry about it anymore."
Sun started sobbing quietly. Jack took his arm around her by reflex. At normal circumstances Sun would not have appreciated this act but she was so apathetic that she said nothing to it. But then her opinion of it suddenly changed.
"Please leave me alone."
The intervals between talk and rejection slowly went longer. But this was the only progress that could be seen. So Jack left Sun's quarters. Outside the others were waiting for him.
"How did it go?", Sam asked.
"Better, but not much."
"I wish I could try to talk to her", Jonas sighed.
"She won't accept that. Remember what happened the last time", Sam refreshed his memory.
This moment Janet left the elevator. She walked over to the others.
"How's the situation?"
"You can try to get to her, I think."
Sam looked at Janet worried. "Do you have the infection under control?"
"Well, I think so. I still don't know why the scar doesn't stop being that sore. But it isn't so serious if the temperature doesn't get higher than it is now."
"I don't know how it would be if Sun wouldn't even allow to let her infection be treated."
"You are right. I'm asking myself the same."
Janet opened the door to the quarters and went inside slowly. Sam looked at the others and told them that she had to do some research, then she left. Jonas, Jack and Teal'C remained standing in the corridor.
"I still don't understand this all. What happened and what is it that makes her so down?", Jonas asked looking around for an answer. Jack told him what he knew about the happenings.
"Well, nobody is so sure of it. The only thing Sun had told till now is that it was an accident. I'm still wondering how she made it back here. I promise you, when this all is over I'll never let her go anywhere without knowing that everything's save there."
Now Teal'C continued by telling Jonas the whole background to her present situation.
"Two years ago Sun was made a Goa'Uld by Apophis. After some weeks we got her back away from him. After it all her mind was full of bad memories. They were about killings and torture she had to see and do as a helpless host. That time we were at least able to talk about it."
"That's absolutely a bad remembrance. But I still don't understand why she doesn't accept any help from us all and lets just Janet and Jack come close to her."
"She just told me that she does not want to ask seeing her in that bad condition out of you."
"She does not want to see Major Carter or me because of the presence inside us."
"There's a rest of presence inside me as well, that is what I don't understand. Why can I get so close to her? Has anybody an idea?"
Both Jonas and Teal'C shook their head.
This moment Janet left Sun's quarters. She looked up and answered the unspoken question that was on the faces of the three men.
"The infection went a bit better. She is sleeping now."
Jonas suggested Jack and Teal'C to come to the library with him. So the three went there and talked for a time. Then Teal'C went to do his Kel'Noreem. As Jonas had finished the second book and began to read a third one Jack decided to go to his quarters to sleep, what he had not done for over a day. Some hours passed, then the sleep was over for him and he felt the need to look after Sun once again.
The sedation went over to a fitful natural sleep. Sun saw all the happenings once again. It was just a nightmare but it all seemed absolutely real, the pain, the screams - their faces. Sun woke up freezing, with sweat all over her body and her face covered with tears. In the darkness that surrounded her she felt a presence.
"Jack?", She whispered.
"I'm here. It's all right, don't you cry. Everything's okay."
"I'm scared."
"You don't have to be."
Suddenly Sun started shivering all over. Jack helped her to lie down again.
"What's wrong?"
"I don't know."
"I'm calling Fraiser."
Jack left and returned a minute later, Janet arrived thirty seconds after him. Sun was about to loose consciousness now. She stopped shivering and was breathing heavily. Janet knelt down beside her.
"I don't understand this. Her temperature raised up to 106 degrees. The infection went more worse than before. She should be taken to infirmary immediately."
Sun was taken to infirmary. Jack sat beside her bed the whole night through. Janet tried everything that she could to get the infection under control again. But Sun's condition had not improved the next morning. Janet was not willing to give up. But she had no more idea what to do. She did absolutely not like what she had to tell General Hammond and the others.
"Sun's condition has gotten more than worse. I did not get the infection under control, yet and there is not a big chance that I will. I got over to give her antipyretics to keep the temperature on a constant level. I don't know if Sun will make it through."
An hour later Sun woke up for some minutes. Janet immediately was by her side.
"Hey. How do you feel?"
We both know how I feel. So why do you ask? Sun answered telepathically.
"You are causing us a lot of sorrow. I don't know what else I should do with you."
This time Sun spoke to Janet. Her voice was very weak, not more than a whisper.
"Jan, please listen carefully now. I've maybe found a way out. I know Jack won't like it. But there's the possibility that Yu can help me."
"How? Sun, please don't..."
But it was too late Sun went unconscious again.
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"Yu? Is she crazy?" Jack tried hard not to get loud but he actually did.
"Sir, I don't think she is. Do you remember how they are related?"
"Related, Carter? Yes, unfortunately I remember it. I tried to forget about this. But that's not a reason."
"With all due respect, Colonel. What else can we do? Her temperature has reached 107 degrees. She can't suffer it any longer. When there is not a big wonder happening, she has at least one more day."
"So bad?", Jonas asked shocked.
General Hammond looked around. "If this is the last possibility, we should give it a try. And she wants it so. We will send Lord Yu a message."