My Biggest Case Chapter 1

Summary

The Story takes place at the Los Angeles Police Department. Loren is one of the top detectives who takes her job very seriously. Eddie is the other top detective who was just transferred from the NYPD. What will happen when the country's top two detectives will work under the same building? Read and find out!

Chapter 1:

Loren's Pov

I wake up to the sound of my phone ringing on the nightstand. I groan as I look to see that my boss Jake was calling me. Why would Jake be calling me at 7:00 am in the morning on a Saturday? I decide to ignore it and go back to sleep. Rinnnnnnnggg Rinnnnnnnggggg! I turn over to see Jake calling me for a second time.

Loren (annoyed): What do you want Jake?

Jake: Well good morning to you sunshine.

Loren: It would be if you would leave me alone so I can sleep.

Jake: no can do kiddo. I need you down at the station pronto.

Loren: Why do you need me at the station at 7:05 in the freaking morning on a Saturday?

Jake: it's a surprise.

Loren: I hate surprises.

Jake: well you will like this one. Now get dressed and meet me at the station in a half hour.

Loren: got it boss

End call.

After I get off the phone with Jake I get out of bed and get in the shower. Once I get out I put on my black leather pants, a tight fitting gray shirt and my blazer. I walk over to my safe and punch in the code to grab my badge and gun. I put my gun in my holster and walk out the door. I jump into my black Porsche and head down to the station. On the way there I decided to stop by the Aroma Café to grab breakfast. Once I get there I walk in and I immediately fall on the floor.

Man: oh my god I am so sorry are you okay?

Loren: I don't know it's not every day where I get hit in the face with the door.

Man: here let me help you.

The man holds out his hand and I grab it. I immediately feel this weird tingly feeling in my hand and by the look on his face I can tell he felt it too.

Man: I'm Eddie Duran and you are?

Loren: going to be late for work if you don't get out of my way.

Eddie: well someone's a little feisty this morning.

Loren: yeah tell that to the giant bruise that's on my forehead.

Eddie: yeah sorry again about that. Here let me pay for you.

Loren: its fine you don't have to…

Eddie: no I insist what would like?

Loren: I'm going to be late

Eddie: the only way you'll be late is if you don't let me pay for your food.

Loren: fine. Get me a coffee and a bagel.

Eddie: coming right up miss…

Loren: Tate. Loren Tate.

Eddie: well Miss Tate here is your bagel and coffee.

Loren: thank you, but I really got to go before-

Eddie: I know before you are late.

Loren: exactly. Nice meeting you Eddie.

Eddie: see you around Loren.

Loren: I doubt it.

Once I leave Aroma I drive as fast as I can to the Station. I get to the Station and run in hoping not to be late. As I run inside I see my best friend Melissa laughing at me. I glare at her and she laughs even harder.

Mel: hey girl what's up? What happened to your forehead?

Loren: oh some guy wasn't paying attention and hit me in the face with the door at the café.

Mel: was he cute?

Loren: is that seriously all you care about? You know a "Hey Lo are you okay?" what be nice.

Mel (dramatically): Oh Loren my dear however are you feeling? Do you need to see a doctor about this life threatening injury of yours?

Loren: haha very funny. Sometimes I don't even know why Jake pairs us two together because we are total opposites.

Mel: because we are like good cop bad cop.

Loren: oh really which one am I?

Mel: oh definitely bad cop.

Loren: What? I am totally good cop in this situation.

Mel: Loren, I've been your partner for 2 years now and your best friend for 15. Do you honestly think I'm lying?

Loren: okay I may have qualities of the bad cop but I'm more good cop.

Mel: Lo, you almost tackled a guy because you guys disagreed whether the tomato is a fruit or vegetable.

Loren: no matter what that guy said the tomato is a fruit and always will be a fruit.

Jake: Excuse me everyone can I have your attention please? I am here to announce that we have a new detective with us. He was transferred here from New York and one of the best in the country besides of course our very own Detective Tate. (Pointing to Loren) I would like you all make him feel welcome because he is here to stay. Please put your hands together for Detective Eddie Duran.

I almost chocked on my coffee when he said that. As soon as Jake announced his name he walked in through the glass doors of the room.

Eddie: hi everyone my name is Eddie Duran. I have been a part of the NYPD (New York Police Department) for 5 years and when I got the call to join the Las Angeles Police department (LAPD) I knew I couldn't resist. I'm very excited to meet all of you and hopefully get the honor with working with some of you (smirking at Loren).

Was he just smiling at me? I don't think he understands how I roll around here. I already have a partner and that is Melissa Sanders. If he thinks he can just walk up in here like he owns the place he has another thing coming.

Jake: alright everyone back to work we have a busy day today, except for Loren, Melissa, and Ian.

Melissa and I look at each other with questioning looks as we follow Jake to his office along with Ian who was another really good detective but very inexperienced.

Jake: Okay guys I called you in here because I'm switching up your teams.

Loren: What?! But Melissa and I are one of the best teams here and we work really well together?

Mel: Sir with all due respect, I agree with Lo. We've been partners for years and now you all of a sudden decide to break us up?

Jake: I know. I understand but things are different now.

Loren: what's changed?

Jake: well for starters we have a new cop with us.

Loren: so what does that have to do with anything?

Jake: Loren I get that your upset but just listen to me for a sec okay?

I nodded.

Jake: good. Now Detective Sanders, you will be paired with Detective Smith.

Ian (smirking at Mel): I've got no complaints.

That earned a rolling of the eyes from Mel.

Loren: and me?

Jake: you will paired with detective Duran.

Eddie: I can always transfer to a different team if that doesn't work for you Loren.

Loren: no it's fine I can handle you (glaring)

Jake: wait do you two know each other?

Loren: as a matter of fact we do. He's the one who did this to my forehead. (Pointing to my head)

Eddie: for the thousandth time I said I was sorry. I honestly wasn't paying attention when I hit you with the door.

Loren: one thousand and one times wouldn't hurt.

Jake: never mind I don't want to know. You guys are officially a team.

Loren: great

Eddie: you sure complain a lot don't you?

Loren: you sure ask a lot of questions don't you?

Eddie: only for you darling (winking at her).

Loren: okay if we are done here I have a lot of paper work to do.

Jake: yes you are all dismissed.

As I walked out of the office I felt a warm breath on my right ear.

Eddie (whispering): I told you I would be seeing you again.

And with that he walks away. I have a feeling this is going to be interesting.

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