Hello. This is my first story, so please go easy on me.
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Death Kiss
Chapter 0: Prologue
When ever I think of death it seems so far away. But what if death was staring you right in the face, waiting to give you the kiss of death? What would you do? Would you tell the person you care about most that you love him? I would but it's too late. My world is disappearing before me.
You know what they say about dying is a lie. Your life doesn't 'flashes before your very eyes'. You just drift more and more into the cold intangible darkness and there you are. That's how you die. For me it was the cold sharp knife striking my stomach and blood gushing out, covering me in it and I lost consciousness. When it got too much I assume I was dead, but I can't find heaven or hell.
Actually it's all black and still I hear voices but they're faint. Correction I hear one voice. That voice. It seems familiar. And than it hits me. It hit me like a ton of bricks. I know that voice! The most important person in the world to me, that's who that voice belongs to. I whisper "I love you." Or at least I think it past my lips. I wonder where I am… I hear him say it back. He can hear me! Or at least I think he heard me. He kept repeating it.
I thought the dead weren't supposed to feel pain. Well I don't know what I'm feeling. It's this burning sensation. It doesn't feel right at all! Maybe I'm not dead after all…
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0_0 - ellinelly
