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Divergent High School Magic Story Chapter :1

Tris POV

I wake up groaning as the sun shines through the thin layer of curtain.

I look at my alarm clock wondering what time it is.

The clock reads: 9:00

"HOLY CRAP! " I'm late first day of school?!

Mom, dad, Angela and Caleb came in my room.

"Honey what's wrong?" mom says looking confused.

Caleb clearly annoyed mutters " Twiissy! Sunday!"

Clearly, I had just made a mistake on the date and screamed it out loud making everybody confused. I smile and shyly said "Oh…"

Yesterday, everybody who got a letter is demanded to be moved here instantly. It's a magic high school in a new city. It's a city where only families with kids that got the letter have to moved here instantly and attend the high school, elementary school or middle school.

I took a shower and pulled out black skinny jeans with a black tank top under my pink crop tees I were pink Converse sneakers with my hair down and a black headband.

Walking out, I bumped into none other than Angela. My life twin. Angela has a generous and caring personality. Just like me. But on the inside, we both are just little kids having a happy life like a 6 year old before middle school. I say this since the beginning of middle school, I and Angela always get bullied by a group of gangs cause 3 things:

We have perfect bodies.

Great grades.

And because we are really nice.

The word nice other than to my family does not exist in my dictionary anymore. Just last night before we moved, me and Angela made a deal about being tough around others to not show that we are not weak since we both hate pity and pathetic looks. Since this is a new place, I doubt anybody will know the 2 of us.

Caleb is nearly the age of 2. So less to say about him. Caleb is caring, talkative, loud, and yes, a big fat tattletaler. But despite these negative personality, he is so cute and me and Angela absolutely love him!;)

Since today is just a day of boring, I had decided to visit some people and say hi to them so you know, could let me and Angela socialize with them more.

"Hey Angie," I said excitedly. I know we had this deal but I just couldn't help it, it's always better being nice.

"Sup?"

"Nothing, I just wanted to ask neighbors to play so we could socialize more. Ya know..." Ever since we got bullied, people always leave me and Angela alone. I know, very anti-socialize.

"Sure... lettme grab my bag first" Angela always have this habitat of bags so we could put stuff and by stuff i mean nearly everything in the bag just 'in case'.

We also have this thing about wearing either a whole day all tomboy looking, hobo, rich, cute, casual, cool, and unnoticeable. Today we decided to dress casual. Angela is wearing sweatpants with a see-through sweatshirt, showing her sports bra.
Page Break, Give me a BREAK from writing...

I knock the door on my right side. Out came a girl with black medium length hair and tanned. She is striking beautiful. She looks at me confused and I said "Hello! Since we just move here I decided to meet people." She smiles and says "The names Christina, Lets go together! I wanted to shop but I guess changing to afterwards won't hurt. What's your name?" I said with a grin "My names Beatrice call me Tris and my sister." I wait for Angela to talk but i know she's to shy to say much. Sighing, I turn around and glare at her. She instantly speaks.

"Hi Chris, my name is Angela.. wanna come hang out?" She smiles shyly and I smiled. Glaring at each other always help us do something.

"Hi Tris, Angie. I agree we should have off and meet new people, let's go!" She nearly ripped our arms off.

I knock the door next to the left side of my house. Out came a boy with 3 others. Christina explained as I stared at the boys. A boy with brown hair and green eyes stares at me. He has a smirk along with the other boys. "I'm Zeke and this is Will, Uriah my brother, and Jack." He points with his finger on their heads. I realized they have been staring at us 3 girls. Probably because we got the bodies. I need to distract them before perverts starts doing something. I said "c u later, were also meeting others," They nod and smirk, walking back in. But just as they were about to close the door, Jack says "We have a party tonight, come play true and dare" and smirks even wider if that is possible. I mean don't they turn into smiles!? Creeps... I wonder what that was…

I ask Christina what they said during I daydreamed and she stared at me in disbelief. "How could u forget what those boys said to us!" Christina said.

Angela piped up, "ikr, those boys just can't flirt without thinking dirty"

I fake gag and continued walking.
Page Break because I need a break and massage.

We met Marlene, Lynn, and Shauna. They all look pretty nice except for Lynn being bald.

It ends today so hope u enjoy. PLZ review and give opinions!