This is my first fanfic please enjoy and wright a review to let me know what I can do better.
Simon and Theodore walked in the front door laughing about the movie they'd just seen at movie night over at the chipetts house."Man I love that Will Ferrell."Theodore said as they walked in." Alvin's car is in the drive way I wonder why hes home early from his date with Brittany." Simon said as they walked up the stairs."They probably got in to a fight as always."Theodore smirked as he spoke. "Alvin were are you?" Called Simon,he called again as they neared the top of the stairs. "Maybe hes in bed already?" Theodore said to his brother.
When Simon and Theodore walked in to the room the lights were off. They herd a sound coming from the corner of the room "Alvin is that you?" Simon asked as he walked closer to the sound concern forming on his face. "Alvin?" Theodore asked as he turned on the light. Alvin was siting with his back to the wall in the corner of there room with his head in his hands crying."Alvin whats wrong?" Simon asked as he ran to his brothers side kneeling next to him."Are you OK?" Theodore asked. Alvin shook his head. "Whats wrong?" Simon asked. " I did something very bad." Alvin said with a very shaky tone. " Alvin you do bad stuff all the time its sorta what your known for." Theodore said as he put a hand on his brothers shoulder "Not like this." Alvin said looking at the ground. "What did you do Alvin?" Simon asked with a soft tone. " I..I.. I hurt Brittany." Shock over took the brothers "How?" They both asked in unison "Start from the beginning." Simon said. "I'll try." Alvin said
(Earlier that night)
"I'm having such a good time Alvin I don't want this night to ever end." Brittany said. "Me either." Alvin said holding her hand under the table smiling at her. "Your bill sir will that be cash or credit?" The waiter said as he handed Alvin the small peace of paper."Cash."Alvin said. Alvin handed the waiter some bills and stood up putting out his hand to help Brittany up from her seat."Thank you." She said smiling blushing slightly. As they were walking out to the car Brittany shivered Alvin put his jacket around her shoulders smiling at her and she smiled back. Alvin held the car door open for Brittany "Your being very sweet tonight." She said as she sat down in her seat putting her seat belt on as Alvin closed her door and walked around to the driver side of the car and got in." I just want this to be one of the best nights of your life." He smiled as he spoke "And its not over yet." "Oh really." She said as they pulled out of the parking lot. "What have you got planned?" She asked. " I figured wed go up to the ridge and star gaze for a wile." He answered ."Oh Alvin that sounds very romantic." She said blushing slightly. "That's the plan." He said as he drove toward the outskirts of town. As they neared the top of the ridge Brittany's heart skipped a beat she wasn't sure she was ready for this. The car stopped and Alvin smiled at her he unbuckled his seat belt and got out and walked around the car and opened her door for her as she got out he put his arm around her shoulder."One sec." He said as he walked over to the trunk opened it and pulled out a blanket and walked back over to her smiling he lead her by the hand the spot with the best view and laid out the blanket."This is such a lovely view." Brittany said as she cuddled up to Alvin." I agree." He said looking down at her she giggled. He leaned down and lightly pressed his lips to hers he ran his hand thru her hair as she warped her arms around him he slowly ran his hand down her back and stopped on her hip." I love you Brittany Miller. He said before pressing his lips to hers again. He slowly moved his hand up her thigh she started to pull away from him." Whats wrong?" He asked not moving his hand. "Alvin I don't think I'm ready for this yet." She said as she started to pull away but he kept his other hand on her back not lettering her move."Alvin let me go please." She looked up at him with pleading eyes but he kept her in his arms and started moving his hand farther up her skirt."It will be fine trust me." He said with a tone that scared her. "Alvin stop please don't do this!" He didn't stop and she started to cry suddenly he stopped and let her go and pulled his hand back." What am I doing." He thought to him self . "Take me home now Alvin." She yelled at him he simply nodded and stood up and got in the car. As soon as she was in the car he started it and begin to drive.
(Present time)
Simon and Theodore traded worried looks."How can I fix this? How can I take back what I did?" Alvin asked.
