AN: This is a challenge issued by Kage Bijuu (if you want details PM him) and I hope you enjoy it.

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"Talking"

thinking'

"Kyuubi talking/Jutsu/ Demonic voice/ summon"

"Kyuubi thinking/Jutsu/Summon thinking

TUAOA: Finding Paradise

Ch 1: Fallen Paradise

Konoha, the once proud village was reduced to burning pills of debris. Bodies of civilians and shinobi were scattered across the blazing land. Only one person stood in the middle of this carnage. Naruto Uzumaki, a twenty year old who defected from Konoha when he was thirteen. He gathered enough forces over the years to invade Konoha and destroy it. He did and now he stood in the remains of the village staring at the headstone of someone who made his life worth living. He vowed eternal revenge for this person and finally accomplished it today. Hinata Hyuga was his world and the only person he ever loved. Her headstone was a place where Naruto could reflect and remember his horriable past.

10 Years Ago

10 year old, Naruto Uzumaki was worried. He hadn't seen his best friend Hinata all day which was very rare because they were almost always together. They had been friends since they started the academy and always hung out with each other. Hinata didn't show up for class which was very odd because she always showed up for class, so at lunch Naruto started questioning her cousin, Neji.

"Hey Neji, do you know where Hinata-chan is?" Naruto asked with a worried expression on his face.

"She has been charged with clan treason by giving clan information to people outside of the clan. She is being punished now. That weakling is finally getting what she deserves !" Neji said with a very smug look on his face.

Normally Naruto would yell at or fight someone who would insult his Hinata-chan, but he had a bad feeling about what Neji said and ran off towards the Hyuga compound. He didn't want to lose her because she was the only friend he had and the person who saw the real Naruto. She didn't see the demon-boy or the blond prankster, but rather the sad little boy who only wanted love. Everyday Naruto was put trough a gauntlet of mental and sometimes physical torture and Hinata was there for him. She gave him a shoulder to cry on and for once in his life, Naruto felt truly happy and loved.

Naruto arrived at the Compound and heard the sound of screaming coming from the courtyard. Naruto peeked through a hole in the wall and saw something that made his blood boil. Hinata was lying on the ground naked from the waist up, but what was bad about it was her body was covered in scars, cuts, bruises, and small burns. Her face was swollen and bruised from their strikes and the constant flow of tears flowing down her face. Her legs were bent at odd angles meaning that they were clearly broken. The Cage Bird Seal was flashing on her forehead. The Hyuga Elders stood near her and laughed at the girls pain and gave her orders.

"Child, come here!" The first Hyuga Elder said with a evil grin on his face. The broken girl lifted herself up with arms and crawled towards the evil man. When she reached the mans feet, the evil Elder kicked her in the face and spoke.

"Stupid child, you didn't get here fast enough!" The first Hyuga Elder said again. With each blow Hinata cried out in pain and Naruto's anger grew. Red aura flowed around him and anger blinded him. He jumped over the wall and growled at the Hyuga Elders.

"D-Demon !" the second Hyuga Elder said while backing away. Naruto ignored the scared Elders and rushed to Hinata's side. He grabbed her up and ran as fast as he can toward the Hospital. The Elders calmed down and laughed as guards rushed outside to protect them.

" It won't be long until the seal achivates and that weakling dies. Then we will rule the Hyuga clan." Hyuga Elder number 3 said with a evil laugh.

Naruto finally arrived at the hospital with Hinata, but it was no use. He called out to doctors and nurse that passed by and begged them to help Hinata. They all ignored him and continued on like they weren't even there. Naruto began to cry because he knew it was his fault that no one would help Hinata. He then felt a warm hand on his cheek which wiped away the tears. Hinata spoke in a weak voice.

"I glad this is real and not another genjutsu. It couldn't be a dream because I haven't slept in days. I knew you would rescue me." Hinata said with a weak smile on her face.

"Hinata-chan, I'm sorry. I...I didn't protect you." Naruto said as he was crying tears of sorrow.

"It's not your fault, Naruto-kun. Before I was convicted of treason, I had a dream. We lived far away from the village and lived in a cabin by a huge lake. It was so beautiful and peaceful. There was no pain, hate, or corruption ; Only love and peace." Hinata said as her hands fell off his face.

"It sounds *sob* like a great place." Naruto said still crying as he hold Hinata hands.

"Yes,...it ...was...paradise." Hinata said with a smile on her face as her eye close shut for one last time. Hinata's seal flashes and fades away. Her hand goes limp. Her breath stops. Hinata Hyuga died in Naruto's arm in the lobby of Konoha hospital. Two people really died on that day because Naruto's heart died and he was changed forever.

A Few Days Later

Naruto stood on top of the Hokage monument looking down on the village that was his personal hell. Hinata's funeral was today. Naruto, Iruka, and the Third Hokage were the only ones that showed up at the service. The Hyuga clan said that they didn't want to honor traitors with their presence. Naruto hasn't talked to anyone since that day. Naruto stayed behind after the funeral and stared at Hinata's headstone. After he stayed there for the whole day, he went to the Hokage monument.

Naruto looked down at the large drop from the top of the mountain. He closed his eyes and jumped off. Wind blew around him as he grew closer to the ground. He finally hit the ground with a loud sickening crunch. Naruto felt intense pain and then he felt nothing.

Darkness surrounded him. He was floating in a infinite void of darkness, when he heard beautiful singing. He saw a great light and he quickly floated towards it. He reached the light and was teleport to a new location. He was now standing in a meadow of flowers near a beautiful lake. There was a log cabin by the shore that was close to the meadow. Naruto saw a figure sitting in front of the cabin. The singing was coming from the figure. Naruto got closer to the figure and was shocked by her beauty. Hinata sat there with a glowing aura, flowing white gowns, and two angel wings. She smiled at him and spoke.

"Hello, Naruto-kun. Come with me. It's the paradise we always wanted to live in. There is no pain or loneliness, only love and warmth." Hinata said as she open her arms to Naruto. Naruto's eyes teared up. He was finally here; the place where he dreamed of. He was truly happy. He tried to run into Hinata's waiting arms, but found himself frozen. The beautiful landscape began to turn back into darkness. Paradise has fallen. Naruto screamed into the void.

"No stop ! Please, don't take me back there. I don't want to be alone again !" Naruto cried. Naruto's eyes closed and he was returned to his unrestful slumber. He opened his eyes to see the lights of the hospital flickering with a soft hum. Two doctors were talking to each other while in his room. One of them spoke.

"I can't believe Hokage-sama wanted to revive that stupid brat. It was a waste of time and resources." Doctor number 1 said.

"Yes, I agree. He would have been better off dead." Doctor number 2 said. Naruto began crying silently, with every tear he wanted to die more. Every time he finds the smallest shred of happiness, Konoha finds a way to take it from him. Laying in that hospital bed, Naruto vowed revenge. He would make Konoha pay for the sins they committed.

Present

Naruto had achieve his ultimate goal. He killed Danzo, the Hokage (Jiraiya and Tsunade joined Naruto, more on that later on). He made the Hyuga clan bow down to him by killing those bastard Elders and Hiashi. He made them suffer like they made Hinata suffer. The village stood no chance. Naruto had nothing now. He continued to look at his beloved's headstone and spoke in a sad voice.

"I will join you soon, Hinata-chan." Naruto said with a sad smile on his face. With those words, Naruto activated the explosive notes attached to his body. He ignited the tags and erupted in a huge fireball. He died with a smile of his face.

When Naruto opened his eyes again, he was back at that lake with the cabin on the shore. He looked toward the meadow and saw his angel. Hinata had grown and was a full grown adult. She still had that glowing aura, flowing white gowns, and the two angel wings. She turned and spoke.

"It's good to see you again Naruto-kun." Hinata said with a smile on her face.

"Hinata-chan, I've missed you so much." Naruto said with smile on his face.

"Naruto-kun, spread you wings and fly with me." Hinata said as she hold out her hand to him. Naruto relaxed and spread his angel wings. Hinata gasped when his wings were revealed. His wings were like Hinata's, but they were pure black. Hinata began crying as she spoke with a shocked voice.

"Naruto-kun, what did you do ?" Hinata asked as she cried tear of sorrow as she know what those wings means.

"What's wrong." Naruto asked confuse

"I can explain." A female voice said as it echo throughout the area.

A ball of light appeared in front of the two and transformed into a beautiful women wearing a pure white kimono. She had long silver hair and glowing blue eyes. Hinata bowed to the woman who appeared. Hinata spoke.

"Hello, Kami-sama." Hinata said as she bowed to the women.

"You may rise my child." Kami said as she smiled at Hinata.

"Thank you, Kami-sama." Hinata said.

"Why are you surprised, Naruto ?" Kami asked Naruto.

"I want to know why Hinata is scared of me!" Naruto asked as he face Kami-sama.

"No child, she is not scared of you, but scared for you." Kami said as she shake her head.

"What do you mean." Naruto asked with a raised eyebrow.

"Naaruto-kun, your wings are...black." Hinata said with tears coming down her eyes.

"What does that mean." Naruto asked honesty confused.

"It means that you have done something horribly wrong while you were alive and will be sent down to hell to be judged by my sister, Yami. That means you will be separated from Hinata for all eternity." Kami said with a sad look on her face.

"What did I do to deserve such punishment?!" Naruto asked with a angry look on his facee

"You destroyed Konoha and sparked another shinobi war which lead to the total destruction of the Shinobi nations. Thousands dead, all because of your actions." Kami said with a frown on her face. Naruto falls to his knees in shock. Hinata embraces him as he cries from the pain of knowing that he was the spark that destroyed many countries and thousands of people. Kami gave a saddened look at the couple and spoke.

"You thought you actions were ridding the world of evil, but you destroyed good along with it. Your actions can't be avenged, but you can reverse the actions you caused." Kami-sama said with a soft voice.

"How." Naruto said in a weak voice

"I can reverse time to back when you both were children, so you can prevent these events from happening, but you must do something for me." Kami-sama said with a smile on her face.

"And what do you expect of us, Kami-sama?" Hinata asked.

"Hinata, you are such a pure soul. I would like you to become one of my elite angels, a archangel. You will be granted with a fraction of my power and you are to use it only for good. If you use your powers correctly then you can become a goddess, such as myself. Do you accept this gift that I bestowed upon you ?" Kami said with a smile on her face as she looked at Hinata.

"Yes, Kami-sama." Hinata said

"Naruto, I can tell that you have a good heart, but I can't allow you to become a archangel because you are supposed to be judged by my sister. I don't know if she will agree to help us or not, but I can't risk her getting involved. Not to mention that we aren't on good terms right now, so I will send you to someone who deals with the good and evil. I will send you there, but when you leave that place time will be reset to the day you met Hinata. Are there any questions ?" Kami said as she looked at Naruto.

"Will we remember our past lives and what happens here ?" Naruto asked a bit concerned.

"Yes, but don't tell anyone about the events that happened in the past or here because it could have a effect on the timeline. It's time to go, Naruto. You may say your goodbyes to Hinata." Kami-sama said.

"Hinata-chan, I want you to know that I love you. I always have." Naruto said as he hugged Hinata.

"I love you too, Naruto-kun." Hinata said as she looked into Naruto eye. The couple leaned into a passionate kiss. They poured their very being into the kiss. After a full three minutes of kissing the couple broke apart with a heated blush on their faces. Kami smiled at the two lovebirds as she spoke.

"Good luck, Naruto. Shinigami-san is stubborn, but he is kind deep down." Kami said with a smile on her face.

"Wait, What !" Naruto said in shock. Naruto fades way towards the Shinigami which leaves Hinata alone with Kami.

"Well Hinata, it's time to begin your training." Kami said

"Right!" Hinata said as she nodded her head as she was determine. Hinata trains herself to become a archangel while Naruto meets the Shinigami.

Naruto

Naruto now finds himself in darkness again. Slowly floating in the black void, until a voice rang out.

"Well, your here early. Kami-san said that she would send you here in a while not now ! Man, she can really be a slave driver sometimes." a male voice said

Suddenly a man appeared. He had black hair that was half way down his forehead and a pair of sunglasses. He wore dark pants and a black trench coat with the symbol for death on the back of it. The Shinigami spoke.

"So, I'm supposed to give you a fraction of my power. What can a puny mortal do with the power of death !" Shinigami said as he take off his sunglasses.

"I can only kill, but I will only kill to right the wrongs I've made." Naruto said with a serious look on his face.

"Good answer kid ! Alright, here's the power." Shinigami said with a smirk. A ball of light comes from the Shinigami's hand and goes into Naruto. The Shinigami smiled and spoke to Naruto.

"Good, now call out you weapon !" Shinigami said as he looked at Naruto.

"Come to me, Soul Reaver !" Naruto called out. A scythe appeared in Naruto's hand. The scythe was silver and looked to be made up of different bones from a human (imagine Dante's scythe from Dante's Inferno. Which I don't own in any way).

"How do I use this." Naruto asked

"Don't worry your body will adapt to using a scythe. This scythe absorbs souls from those you kill. Those souls will be sent to heaven or hell according to their actions while living. This scythe is able to change forms when enough souls are collected and will transform into a even more powerful scythe with special abilities. " The Shinigami explained to Naruto.

"Sounds cool." Naruto said as he was very impressed.

"Good, no questions. Alright it's time for you to go back in time now. " The Shinigami asked

"Thanks, I'm ready." Naruto said as he nodded his head at the Shinigami.

"I'll keep in touch kid." Shinigami said. Naruto faded away and began traveling across the time stream. He was thinking during that time.

"I'll fix everything, Hinata-chan. Even if I have to die a thousand times to do it. I will never be apart from you again." Naruto said with a determine look on his face.

Kage Bijuu Author Note: Here it I fix the story up and now it not going to have play style writing but a regular story type writing. Giratina Zero and I will do are best with this story I adopted from my buddy DarkElite24.

I adopted this story from DarkElite24 and I hope all of you enjoy it.