so! hello my first ever attempt at righting! so this will be fun, or at least I hope it will well I hope you enjoy it! thank you!

also I got to tell you I don't own harry potter if I did I would have harry and Hermione at least or something I mean why ginny, I mean come on!

alright it starts out with harry, fang, and Malfoy in the forbidden forest. also these are thoughts , and these are other languages or shared thoughts. ok I'm done. TO THE STORY! AWAY!


"hey Malfoy do you see that up there?" said harry. "what! where potter." " right there. how's this I will go check it out and you go get hagrid and the others" suggested harry.

"fine potter." he said with a little fear in his voice. he then got up and stealthily ran away as fast as he could with fang close behind him.

harry then crawled to where the things he saw where. when he got there he saw a unicorn and a black shadowy figure lurking over the struggling unicorn, and did the stupidest thing in his short life. he pulled his wand out of the pocket of his cloak and picked up a big rock and hurled the rock as hard as he could at the shadowy thing. the thing turned slowly toured him and slowly started moving toured him.

when it had turned around harry could feel the dark magic role of this thing in waves, it was like he was felling air born hate, and when he looked where his eyes should have been all he could see was a black cloth stained silvery from the unicorn blood.

it was almost to him when he heard running like hooves.

maybe another unicorn.

and just as he finished his thought a brown horse jumped over him and stood between him and the thing then he saw it wasn't a horse it was a centaur.

woah.

as the centaur leveled his bow at the thing it moved back and more running was heard but it sounded less like hooves and more like feet.

"it must be your friends harry potter." said the centaur.

at those words the dark thing ran off almost as fast as Malfoy. the centaur turned and looked at harry. " hello mister potter my name is Firenze its a pleasure to meet you."

"hello sir. sorry but what was that thing?!" said harry in a concerned/anxious voice.

"can you not guess mister potter." Firenze said in a way that was not a question. "who else would drink the blood of a unicorn? do you even know the properties of its blood?"

"yes I do, the lengthening of a life, but at a cost to the soul of the drinker sir. by the way call me harry." he said in an off handed voice as his eyes took on a far away look in his eye.

Firenze had a taken aback look on his face. "why do they all do that" harry said as his eyes snapped back into focus as he saw the look on Firenze's face.

and again he looked taken aback. "mister potter-" "harry" he said firmly with a fire in his eye. "alright harry its just that with magical creatures wizards tend to be less than the best manners if you under stand mister- harry."

"I see." he said with another weird look. "by the way that was Voldemort wasn't it sir"

"yes it was harry." he said with a weird look of his own. "do you think that the unicorn will be ok." harry asked "I think so harry she and her baby will be fine."

"baby?!" he asked/demanded in a surprised voice. "yes baby." he told harry in amused.

"woah I didn't know she was pregnant she doesn't look like it" harry said. "no she doesn't yet does she?"

"well should we do something to help her." he said. "no harry she will be fine in a day or two maybe more at most a week." Firenze said in an almost smug voice.

"oh, ok, thank you Firenze, it was nice to meet you."

he once more looked taken aback. "thank me for what mister potter." he asked in a slightly shocked voice.

"for saving me of course, and I told you to call me harry" he said.

"sorry harry, thank you for the most polite conversation with a human ever. but I believe I should be leaving I'll take care of the unicorn."

as he said that the unicorn stood up and looked at Firenze and it looked to harry that they were having a silent conversation.

"harry, the unicorn wants to talk to you, tell her you give her permission to enter your mind if you wish to speak to her."

"oh." he said "that was what you were doing."

"yes it was harry." Firenze said

"alright then" harry said as he stole himself to the presence that almost as soon as he said the words."

"hello harry my name is arlen thank you for saving my baby boy and I. we or at least I owe you a life debt. and I name you unicorn friend. I will visit you in a few days to repay my debt and my child will not owe you anything.

"hello miss arlen its nice to meet you mam. what do you mean a life debt? I didn't do anything to save you I just did something stupid cause I didn't want something so beautiful to die."

"of course you did! you saved my life and their is no way to get rid of a life debt unless I save your life or I give you something as valuable or more so."

"there must be some other way."

he was almost begging her.

"one but it involves my death and maybe my child

her voice was very upset and a little angry.

"well then what would you give me then cause I will not let you or your baby die without a fight."

harry said with a fire in his voice and in his eyes.

"I will visit you in four or five weeks harry. stay safe. or at least stay alive."

"I can only promise to stay alive cause trouble has put a big target on my back. so i'll see you soon arlen. goodbye."

"goodbye harry."

"good bye Firenze see you later." harry said.

"good bye harry, i'll take care of arlen, and I will tell hagrid what happened, but I will emit some of the story, like the life debt among other things." Firenze said

"thank you Firenze see you soon maybe." harry said.

"alright, but let me at least walk you up to hagrid." Firenze said.

"alright sure thank you, but what about arlen." harry asked.

"I will be alright I will wait here for Firenze." "you sure?"

harry asked "yes I'm sure."

"alright then, Firenze lets go." harry said as he sighed in defeat. they started moving off toured were the now much closer and louder foot steps of his friends. about 45 seconds after they left arlen, harry's friends came through the bushes and saw harry and Firenze and they all stopped with hagrid a little slack jawed.

"arry you alrite." hagrid asked. with a little menace towerd Firenze. "Firenze." hagrid said with a slight nod of greeting to him. "yeah hagrid I'm fine Firenze here saved my life." harry said.

"oh" hagrid said with relief and a little confusion. "what is the look for hagrid?" harry asked. "harry." Hermione said. "you do know that usually when a wizard and a centaur cross paths anywhere one of them dies. or both."

"yeah Hermione I know" harry said without any surprise. "then why didn't you run!" ron and Hermione said at the same time. "because he jumped in front of thing trying to kill me!"

"oh." they both said. harry snorts. "yeah 'oh'." then Firenze says. " hagrid lets talk I will tell you what brave harry here did to save not one but two lives." everyone looked at harry weird. "what?!" "who did you save harry."

"not who." Firenze said. "but what." and again everyone looked at harry funnily. "and I say again, WHAT." harry said/shouted. "nothing, nothing." they said in a dejected voice.

as hagrid and Firenze walked out of ear shot so Firenze could explain what had happened Malfoy said "what potter cant even go on detention with out getting attention probably you'll leek it to the prophet or something am I right potter." and he topped it off with a sneer.

"no one will no what happened if I can help it. and it WILL NOT be in any paper unless you tell them Malfoy." harry said a little angrily.

hagrid came back without Firenze and said. "alright lets ge back to the castle." "hagrid." Hermione said "where is Firenze?"

"OH e ad to go hom." hagrid said


(back at the castle.)


"hello mister potter, the headmaster wishes to speak with you in his office, about what happened in the woods." the professor/deputy headmistress said in a tense voice. "of course professor, I will be right up." harry replied.

(five minutes later.)

harry was walking to the headmasters office when he remembered he had forgotten to ask if the password had been changed. "oh well nothing I can do about it now."

as harry continued to the gargoyle he was thinking and hoping that it would let him through. he didn't even notice he had been standing in front of the gargoyle for about three minutes until the gargoyle said. "excuse me are you just going to stand there or are you going to come in."

"I'm guessing that the password isn't the same is it?" harry asked. "nope."

"oh." harry said with a sigh of defeat. "don't worry kid you've got an appointment so you can go on in." "oh thank you umm, do you have a name, or what?" harry asked.

the gargoyle looked slightly surprised. "nope, no name, no one has asked me that question in almost 2000 years, not even the headmaster." he exclaimed. "really?" harry scoffed. "well that's just not right I mean, that's just disrespectful!"

"oh yeah, I no they treat me like a thing!" he exclaimed again. "well your going to be late see you in a few minutes then, I will let you go up now." he said as he moved out of the away.

"ok, see you in a few, then." harry said as he was walking past.

harry walked up the stairs, to the headmasters office door.

he was about to nock when he heard an. "enter." from inside.


sorry about that but I have been working on this for about three days killing myself to finish this, and I've learned that a cliff hanger is always good.

any way I hope you'll come back to read more it'll be done in a few days if I kill myself again, so, see you later maybe?

just so you know I haven't even gotten to the good part yet. I hope you all think it gets better like I hope it will.