ok, hey everybody, this is my new story fish out of water, i had 8 chapters up, but i deleted the story and went through and revised everything to try and make it easier to read. I dont own anything haha, constructive criticism and reviews are welcome but i will not tolerate flames, On the origional story (the one that i had to delete) some left a nasty anonomous review, there username was titled " YOU SUCK" and it was something along the lines of " you fucking suck i refuse to read this because your stupid and cant spell, go to school this is horrible, for this you fucking suck dick bitch" i was very offended by that review, people dont put up stories to have their heads chopped off, any more reviews like that and im gonna send them a nasty pm back. anywhoooo enjoy the story, and thank you to the person who left a nice review, you inspired me to fix the story to have more people read it :) *huggles*

Kagome sat on her rocky perch staring at the moon. Oh how she loved to come out here at night, and tonight was even more special it was her 16nth birthday her coming of age. Her long glittering and beautiful white tail flipped happily in front of her while she sat. Making little patterns on the surface of the warm ocean water. She was truly a vision in the moonlight. Her tail was long and she had back braking curves on her slender pail body. A string of white pearls and crystals adorned the bottom of her tail. Her top consisted of tow snowy white shimmer shells with water pearl and two small crystals in the center. On her arm was a silver cuff with a tear drop diamond and around her neck a pear, shell and crystal choker was fitted tightly. Her long onyx hair hung down to her but and it had tons of miniature braids running through it adorned with pearls, shells and crystals. She hair pooled freely behind her shining like a beacon in the moonlight. Her belly ring glittering in the stars. Her bangles jingled ever so slightly as she ran her finger tips over a water lily that she wanted for her new headband. Kagome had the voice of an angel; she could out sing any mermaid any day. She began to sing for herself and her sea friends to hear. Her blue eyes looking towards the sky.

There's a rainbow wind, blowing so gently

It extends on the coast on the far horizon

When the sun came up I heard a faint melody

It's a song full of the memories of out bygone days

Birds fill the air

Flying above

Soaring high to the eastern sky

So let's fly away like them to a place that beautiful

Apparent as the line where the seven seas meet

Far beyond the struggle of these story seas

A place where I can show you my love

Once we are there I shall be born again

Even if the darkness will fall upon us

In this place that we call home

We only need to sing from the sea

Once I hear it, I will not forget

17 year old Inuyasha sat in the shadows watching and waiting. He was on his boat and everything was perfectly planned. He had been watching her for so long. Listening to her voice, hearing her peals of excited laughter. And gazing at her immense beauty. He wanted her for his own. And he was going to have her. His inu ears twitched excitedly when she began to sing again. Oh how he loved her songs. His favorite was the one about the jeweled star, oh she was amazing. He pulled the boat closer and closer to the rock. He pulled up right behind her and tossed the net.

Kagome yelled out in surprise. She was being hoisted out of the water into some fishing boat by the automatic net reel. She thrashed around wildly trying to free herself.

" Let me go you bastards" she shouted

"sorry wench, not happening" smirked inuyasha.

She was dumped out of the net right onto the deck of the boat and her arms were quickly tied.

"Who are you and what do you want from me? Money, power? I'm not human I can't give that to you" pleaded kagome.

"Names inuyasha, and I don't want anything from you, I just want you to be mine." He said

he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder. She thrashed around wildly trying to escape and even ended up hitting him in the back of the head with her tail a few times.

"Stop struggling bitch!" muttered inuyasha.

He pulled out a small needle and injected it into her arm. She went still. He carried her bridal style the rest of the way to his house on the beach.

Kagome woke up with a massive headache but she was surprisingly warm and comfy. The sand beneath her was soft and she would hear fish swimming around.

"It was all just a bad dream" she thought to herself.

She sat up and looked around. She was in unfamiliar waters. She began to weave in and out of the coral trying to find a familiar rock or shell. She became more and more frantic swimming quicker and quicker through the water until BANG. She slammed into something hard and clear.

"What the hell is this?" She said.

"It's called glass sweetheart and it's the key ingredient in large fish tanks." Said inuyasha.

"Inuyasha what is the meaning of this I demand you release me this instant" kagome spat.

"Sorry wench but your mine now, you're not going anywhere. Unless of course you want to spend your days on land with me, don't play dumb I know u sprout legs when you're dry." Laughed inuyasha.

"This could be my chance to escape" she thought. "Ok inuyasha ill do it, I'll stay on land with you" she whispered, tears falling from her eyes. She was quite the convincing actress.

Inuyasha couldn't believe his ears; she had just agreed to live with him on land? Well that was easy. He'd have to keep an eye on this one, what if she was up to something?

"Well it's good that you're coming around, glad you see your place as my property. Nobody else will have you now" he said.

He walked over to the tank she was in and climbed a latter up to the top. She swam to the surface and held out her arms. Inuyasha grabbed her around the waist and pulled her into his arms. He brought her down the ladder and over to his bedroom where he laid her onto the bed.

"This closet over here is for you. There's a bathroom down the hall and ill be in the kitchen making some ramen , get dressed and then meet me in the kitchen and don't even think of trying anything funny." Said inuyasha.

Suddenly she cried out, her tail was enveloped in light and suddenly it split into two legs. She slowly got up and gingerly slid onto the floor, she fell flat on her new but.

"Wow this is gonna take some getting used to" she mumbled.

She got up and made her way to the bathroom slowly but carefully she eventually got the hang of walking as she made her way over to the mirror.

"Ugh these vile legs, in hideous, my tail was so much prettier. And my bangles and choker are gone, ugh damn water magic jewelry." She mumbled angrily.

She made her way over to the umm what was it called, oh right the closet, and opened the doors. She'd seen human clothes before and even human under wrappings but she'd never worn them before. She pulled out a white strapless dress, it reminded her of her tail, it was tight on top and loose flowing and layered from the hips down made out of flowy chiffon and adorned with small crystals on the top of the dress and scattered through the bottom flowing layers. She found a pair of crystal and pearl even some silver bottomless sandals (there like a toe ring attached to a bracelet that goes around Ur ankle Google em lol) she fiddled absently with her braids and played with the crystals and pearls adorning her hair. The it hit her , she could use the subjugation magic her mom taught her, all she had to do was make a bracelet out of some of her pearls, she can always get new ones, then string them into a bracelet and enchant them with a little bit of her magic, easy as pie. She got to work threading the beads onto a few strands of her hair, the hair was crucial for the magic to work,

"whoever came up with the whole magic needs a piece of you to work thing was just a lameass" kagome chuckled to her.

Finally it was finished, a pearl crystal and shell bracelet for the stupid puppy. She wobbled her way down the hallways still shakey on her human legs. She made her way into the kitchen to find inuyasha eating some kind of noodle; hmm I think he called it ramen. Inuyasha's jaw hit the floor. She was a vision in white. He couldn't even comprehend her beauty as a human. Her long slender legs, her skin shimmering like all mermaids.

"Do you w-want something to eat?" he asked?

Kagome sauntered up to inuyasha and wrapped her arms around him.

" hey there inuyasha, I just wanted to say I'm sorry for snapping at you earlier, I was just scared, but now, I kind of like having legs, if I can't go anywhere I might as well enjoy myself here with you." She chirped.

"Score one for kagome lil puppy doesn't suspect a thing" she thought.

"Wow kagome, u have no idea how happy you've made me, I thought you'd hate me, but u were so beautiful I just had to have you for mine." Sighed inuyasha.

He pulled her closer and gently sniffed her hair, growling softly.

"Aww he's so sweet, I kind of feel bad for what I'm about to do to his sexy ass, wait no not sexy that bastard kidnapper is anything but sexy" she told herself in her mind.

"Oh inuyasha I have a little present for you, it's a mermaid bracelet, it's kind of like a promise ring if you would".said Kagome

She slipped it onto his wrist and grinned like the cat that just ate the canary she only had one shot at this then the magic would ware off. Inuyasha looked up to see kagome grinning like a madwoman

, "oi wench watts with the face?" asked inuyasha.

Kagome turned around to face the door,

" I inuyasha silly puppy, do you really think I would degrade myself so much to give in to the bastard who kidnapped me? That's a mermaid subjugation bracelet made with my magic and pearls. See you never bastard" she yelled "SIT BOY" she cried.