Hello Fanfiction! This is my first fanfic, so give me some advice on what I'm doing ,some encouragement and constructive criticism would be appericiated.
I think that you should read some stories from:
Arcane-Boomeus, for the best story, and
Goldeneye101, for the best author.
Enough with the chit-chat, lets get this fanfic started!
It was a bright, sunny morning in the hall of origin, a morning to which a great goddess woke to. Arceus yawned, smiled, and stretched, thinking that it would be a great day.
She couldn't have been more wrong.
A frantic Giratina burst through the door, shouting:
"Arceus, my lady, come quick!"
"What do you want!" yelled an obviously pissed-off Arceus.
"We're under attack!"
"WHAT! HOW COULD WE BE UNDER ATTACK!" screamed an obviously extreamely pissed-off Arceus.
"Just come with me!" Giratina replied, still very frantic.
Oooooh, What could be wrong? Who's attacking? Will I stop asking questions? Who knows! Stay tuned for chappy 2, oh, and here's a little preview:
Arceus got there just as the doors broke down. she just stopped, dead in her tracks, when she saw who was there.
"It's you!"