Saving
Private Sandy
Hey,
it's Goddess Holly and I re-did, re-titled, and re-finished my
wonderful first fanfic! :D It's back and better than EVA! So please
review or I'll send a box of wild, ravenous monkeys to your houses!
Thank-Q! ;D Let's start the FIC!!
Disclaimer: I don't own Hamtaro or any related items, except Taya, Kiri, and Twink. So don't suuuuuue meeeeeee!!!!!
[....]: Me.
Italics: People/Hamsters thinking.
...: Actions.
Chapter
1: Hamtaro's Bad Feeling:
"Oopaa!"
cried Hamtaro, jumping onto his whiz wheel."Bada, bada, bada!"
Hamtaro was having so much fun when he tripped, spun around in the wheel, then flew into the air and-BANG!!Hamtaro hit the top of his cage and fell to the floor with another loud bang. [Tee hee!]
"Oh, Hamtaro! Are you alright?!" Laura cried
"Kushi, kushi." Hamtaro rubbed his head in pain and embarrassment.
"Oh Hamtaro, you silly hamster! Well, good-bye I'm off to school! Be good and don't get into trouble!" Laura called over her shoulder.
"Don't worry Laura, I will!" [Pfh, yeah right!]
"Kushi, kushi! Today's going to be a bad day, I can really feel it. Ouch!" Hamtaro said.
"Well I'd better hurry, the ham-hams are probably already there!" Hamtaro thought while opening his cage door.
Down through the drainpipe he went.
"Oopaa!" yelled Hamtaro while flying through the air.
PLOP! Hamtaro landed perfectly on top of Brandy's head. [I give it a 10! :D]
"Good morning Brandy!" Hamtaro said cheerfully
"YYAAWWNN!!" Brandy yawned loudly.
"You're hopeless Brandy!" Hamtaro said sadly.
Just then Hamtaro spotted Oxnard and Bijou running towards him.
"Bonjour Hamtaro!" Bijou said blushing slightly.
"Hi Bijou!" Hamtaro said noticing her blush and blushing himself.
"Emergency! Emergency! EMERGENCY!!" Oxnard cried
"What's the matter Oxy? Did you lose you special seed again?" Hamtaro asked
"No seed, emergency at clubhouse Bijou and Hamtaro gasped Boss sent me to get you guys, Sandy in trouble!" [gasps too]
"What! Sandy iz in trouble!" Bijou cried.
"We'd better go then!" Hamtaro said
"Right! Let's go!" Oxnard said
"Oopaa!" they cried "Bada, bada, bada!"
[Go Hamtaro, Oxy, and Bijou go!! ]
Chapter 2: Maxwell's Tears:
Hamtaro, Oxnard and Bijou walked into the clubhouse. There they saw the other Ham-Hams surrounding someone. When they moved closer and through the crowd they saw a crying Maxwell being comforted by several hams."Maxwell, why are you in tears?" Hamtaro asked.
"Something happened to Sandy, Maxwell was just about to tell us what happened and where Sandy is." Dexter said.
"Go ahead Maxwell, tell us." Panda said encouragingly.
"W-W-Well, m-me and S-Sandy were walking w-w-when S-Sandy said, 'Maxwell d- don't you think t-this is like s-so romantic?' and I-I said 'Yeah.' T-T-Then I said 'Sandy, let's go sit on that r-r-rock' a-and s-s-she said 'W-W-Why?' a-a-and I-I-I s-s-said 'Oh j-j-just because I-I-I w-w-want t-t-to k- k-kiss you!'" Maxwell broke out in more sobs. [Aaaaaaw!]
Stan, who was standing in the corner looking very scared, suddenly looked surprised and angry.
"Like you gonna kiss my sister?"Stan asked shocked.
Stan knew Maxwell and Sandy were 'together' but he didn't know they kissed!
Through his sobs, Maxwell turned a very interesting shade of red. [Poor Maxy.]
"That is like so totally uncool!" he said
"Stan! Leave him alone he's not done yet!" Boss yelled "What happened next Max.? Where's Sandy?"
[Yeah Maxwell, tell 'em what happened next!]
Chapter 3, Cat Attack:After Maxwell had calmed down a little, he continued with his story.
"W-W-Well sniffle we were...u-um...well...ah-"
"KISSING MAYBE?!" Stan interrupted fiercely.
"STAN!!" the ham-hams yelled.
"U-U-Um...well...yeah." Maxwell said blushing like crazy
"Ahem, we were sitting on t-the r-rock and w-w-we were ah...w-w-well you k-know...w- when...o-o-oh it w-w-was h-h-horrible!" he said starting to break up again.
"Ah-ha...?" the ham-hams said impatiently.
"Get on with it...zuzuzu...will ya." Snoozer said sleepily.
"I-I-I'm so s-s-sorry! Y-Y-You would b-be crying if y-y-your g-g- girlfriend w-w-was a-a-attacked t-t-the h-h-hamnapped b-b-by a c-c-cat!" he said through more sobs.
"A CAT!!" the ham-hams cried in panic.
"ATTACKED!" Bijou cried
"HAMNAPPED!" Pashmina cried
"Ookwee!" Penelope said through tears.
Suddenly Stan looked like he would have a nervous break-down! He just started muttering 'S-S-Sandy.... C-C-Cat...'
"Stan, are you all right?" Pashmina asked.
Stan mumbled something that she didn't here.
"What did you say?" she asked
"We need to save her!" he said
"We need to save my sis!" he said with a certain gleam in his eyes that Pashmina couldn't help admiring.
"Maxwell!" Stan called.
He walked over to where Maxwell was being comforted by Cappy, Panda, Oxnard, Bijou, Hamtaro and Boss.
"Maxwell, like what happened after the cat grabbed her?" he asked.
"O-O-Oh it w-w-was h-h-horrible!" Maxwell sobbed
"Just say it dude!" Stan yelled.
"O-O-Okay, okay...w-w-well..."
[Go Maxwell go! Yeah! You can do IT!! Short chapters, no?]
Chapter 4, Maxwell's Horrifying Flashback!:A/N: This is Maxwell telling his flashback. Please do not read this chapter if you start to severely sob at really sad moments. But read anyway if you want to take a chance. Thanks.
P.S.: I warned ya! Mwah ha ha ha!!
FLASHBACK...
Maxwell and Sandy are sitting on a rock kissing each other lightly, when all of a sudden Sandy broke away from Maxwell and 'hiffed' the air.
"Maxwell do you, like, smell something weird?" Sandy asked
"I only smell your beautiful fur." I said Stan rolls his eyes
Sandy blushed like crazy.
"Hiff-hiff, Maxy I'm serious I really do, like, smell something stra-"
"MEOW!!"
A large cat jumped up, grabbed Sandy, knocking me off the rock.
"Ouchichi! Kushi, kushi."
Just then I heard her.
"LIKE HELP!! Get back you totally uncool cat!"
Sandy was hitting the cat with her ribbon.
"SANDY!!" I screamed.
I ran over and threw my book at the cat. It hit it right in the nose!
"Meow!" the cat cried in pain.
"Sandy hurry!" I called.
"Like, here I com-" she tripped on a large rock. [Large to a hamster that is!]
"OOWW!"
I ran over and looked at her leg. It looked broken. I looked up at her and felt my stomach drop. She was very pale, [I have no idea how a hamster can look pale.] she was muddy, [It had rained the day before.] she had blood on her fur from scratches, she had tears running down her face, and her leg faced a weird angle. She was the most pitiful creature I ever saw.
She collapsed.
I held her.[sniffle sniffle]
"M-M-Maxy.......g-g-get...my b-b-bro...." she passed out from pain and shock.
"Sandy?! SANDY!"
I picked her up and started running towards the clubhouse. Just the cat jumped in front of me.
"I don't have time for you!" I yelled at the cat.
"Meeeeooow..."
The cat pounced on me, knocking Sandy out of my arms.
"SANDY!!" I screamed.
The cat ran over, picked Sandy up in it's mouth and ran towards 'Big Cat Alley'.
"NNOOOOOOOOOOOO!!"
I just sat there, stunned.
Then I remembered what Sandy had asked me, so I ran to the clubhouse to get Stan.
[sniffle Sandy, no. Please sniffle keep reading, for Sandy's sake!]
