Tobias' POV

Chapter 1

Never in my life have I been so terrified.

And I know its for a stupid reason; I feel the ring in my pocket and hear a small voice in my head 'Do you really want to do this?' Of course I do, I love herdon't I? But... what if she says no? What if she laughs in my face? don't be stupid shes better then that and you know it.

There's a knock on the door. I open it and see Zeke standing there. "Dude, what's up you look like you might hydro pump,"

"Hydro-what?"

"Hydro pump; it means throw up," I stare blankly at him, Do I look that bad? I think "So are you going to tell me what's up or am I gonna have to guess?" I take a deep breath "Well-" I start

"Okay leave it, Uri told me he saw you walking out the Jewelry Store!"

"WHAT?! Who was he with?" Panic started to overwhelm me, what if he was with Tris?

"Relax, he was on his own, because he's a loner like that," I breath a sigh of relief, she doesn't know.

"So what are you doing in there?" He asks

"Are you thick, isn't it obvious? I'm asking Tris to marry me!" I say loudly, but not too loud wouldn't want anyone else to find out.

"Four, are you sure about this? I mean Tris is a great girl but do you really want to get tied down so young, look at you, you're twenty and Tris is eighteen, you've got your whole life ahead of you," he say quietly

"Yeah, I have my whole life ahead of me but I want to spend it with her,"I reply

"You're not going to change your mind no matter what I say, are you?"

I shake my head "Nope,"

"You're really going through with this?"

I nod "Yep"

"No getting you out of it?"

I shake my head "Nope,"

"So I should just leave?"

I nod "Yep," He leaves; Time to put everything in order.

So... What do you think, its my first fan fiction and I know it short and rubbish and its probably the millionth version of this story but I feel that I should stay safe and stick with what I know before heading out into the depths of my imagination, so feel free to review and PM me with some storylines anything will be much appreciated! Thanks, I'll get the next chapter up ASAP!

~ K