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Dear Diary,

Today is July 7, 2008.I am sixteen years old.And my life has changed drastically in the last decade. Six years ago, I went out for a ride on my colt Blackie. I had a terrible accident and was in the hospital for months.After that my dad was frightened to bring me back home.So, I was sent to live with my aunt Sue in San Francisco.It was supposed to only be a few weeks, but eventually, weeks turned in to months, which turned into a year, which turned into two years.When I was twelve, I returned home to my family ranch in Nevada. My horse skills were not as good as they were, but with the help of my best friends Jake,his brothers, Jen, my dad, my grandma, and the ranch hands, my skills returned. Oh, and I forgot one other thing.I now have a step mother, and a new half brother. And like you hear in fairy tales, step mothers are never good, and they are always evil,This did not apply to Bryanna. She was beautiful, smart, good with animals, and loved my dad as much as a human could love someone.Sure they got into some spats, mostly about the mustangs. Bryanna was pro mustangs, and my dad, was, well, not.He, like most hard working cowboys, thought they were a waste. Another thing about my new step mom was, she didn't have any ugly daughters like they have in fairy tales.

Well, so i thought.But let me tell you everything starting back to last year.July seventh,2007...

It was a great day. Sophomore year was over, Jake was coming home from college, and tomorrow, I was headed off to a dude ranch.My dads old friend needed some help.This summer was really busy. And he needed some extra people that knew horses well.And the good thing was i got to bring along five of my best friends:Jake, Jen, Ryan (who was dating Jen), Quinn, and of course, Ace.We would be gone all summer.And when we got there, we would all share a cabin, with no other adults.I could tell this summer would be a good one.

I was packing my things for tomorrow.I still had a lot to do.Luckily, Jen was coming over to help. Everyone was going to spend the night tonight. the boys would have the floor of the living room,And Jen and I would be sleeping on the couches. Our flight was at 4 in the morning, so our parents thought it would be easier this way. Ryan was on his way with Jen.They have now been going out for 8 months. Jake and Quinn were coming once they finished their duties at Three Ponies, their family ranch.

I was halfway through packing when I heard cars in the drive way.I ran down the stairs and outside. The second Jake got out of the car, I ran up to him and jumped on him,giving him a huge hug.He wrapped his arms around me, against his will because if he hadn't, i would have fallen, and brought him down with me.

"Aww,look at the love birds."

Jake put me down and turned toward his brother to hit him.

When he swung his arm, Quinn ducked, and just hit air.Quinn was always teasing his little brother, saying that we were going out.When in fact, we were just friends.

Jen laughed.She gave me a hug and then Quinn and Ryan did too. I was happy to see them.Jake,Ryan.And Quinn were in college, I could only see them on hollidays.Darrell was going to come, but couldn't get of work for that long.

"Lets all go inside, and help me finish packing."everyone all grumbled.They knew I probably still had a lot to do.

When they walked into my room,they all gasped.There was clothes everywhere.On my floor,my bed, my desk, hanging from door.It look like a disaster zone.

"It is a talent to get your room this dirty."Jen said.

"Well, i don't know what to pack."

Jen looked at my open suitcase. the clothes were all just shoved in.

Jen stared at me.She walk over to my stereo,turned on some music, and got to work.

Jake and Quinn started to fold all the clothes, Jen was folding the things i packed, and Ryan was sorting all the things Jake and Quinn folded. I smiled at how fast everyone helped me.In an hour and a half, my room was spotless, My suitcase was packed,nicely, and the five of us were laying on the floor,listening to music and catching up on every thing that's happened since last time we were together.

"DINNER"my Gram called.

All of us jumped up and sprinted to the kitchen.Hard work gets people hungry.

A few hours later, everyone was in the living room sleeping.Except me.I was laying on the coach wide awake.So i decided to go visit Ace.

I sat up,and was careful not to step on the boys. I quietly walked to the the barn, and realized the light was already on.I walked inside and found Quinn with His horse Chip.

"Hey"I whispered.

He turned around and smiled.

"Couldn't sleep?" he asked

"No,you?"

"Nope, have you heard my brother snore" he laughed.

"Yeah, it is pretty loud."I walked over to were he was standing.

Chip sniffed my face and blew horse snot all over me.

Quinn of course thought it was hysterical.

I did not.

"Are you done laughing?" i asked as wiped it off my face.

He smiled and wiped some off my chin.At that moment, he put his hand behind my necked and kissed me.

He took a step back, and smiled.

"night" he said and walked out of the barn.

Once he was back in the house, I jumped up in the air and gave a small scream of joy,my first kiss!

Well??I know i haven't been on this site in months, so my writing is kinda bad, but review and tell me if you like the idea so far.I am going to TRY to update my other stories, but a may not, and just try to stick to one at a time.I have not decided yet.

-horselvr101