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The blonde little boy takes off away from the newly appointed chaser. He climbs up the slide and looks down at him from the wooden bridge; they glare at each other both expecting one another to strike first.
"That's not fair I'm always it!"
The pudgy redheaded boy lets himself fall to the ground; he lands on his backside and rests his head on his hands.
"That's because you're younger than me!"
The blonde boy says, he crosses his arms and grins almost as if he thought himself better, which he did.
"Only by a year!"
The pudgy kid looks up and takes in account that the sky is a light shade of bluish gray, he wonders if his weekend is going too ruined by rain. He gets up and goes over to the swings by the gate, he crosses the green pasture and bends down to pick a piece of the grass.
A bright light emerges from nowhere blinding the two boys, simultaneously a strong gust of wind blows past them bringing along pieces of mulch. The blonde boy hides behind a wall the light reminds him of when he sees his bigger brother play his war games and someone throws a flash bomb, he peeks over it and looks for his pudgy friend. He sees that he's running for the gate, he looks back to the middle of the playground and sees two grownups standing side by side. The blonde kid runs towards the slide and quickly runs off to join his friend.
"KES WE HAVE REACHED THE DESTINATION!"
"CORRECT SUPREME LEADER WILL BE PLEASED!" "FOLLOW LED WE MUST CONTINUE."
The black dalek starts moving forward towards the gate, he stops when he realizes that his partner wasn't moving with him. He turns around and looks at Led.
"KES HUMAN CHILDREN HAVE SEEN US… SHOULD WE EX-TER-MINATE?"
"NEGATIVE PERCEPTION FILTERS HAVE DISUISED US; WE LOOK LIKE NORMAL ADULT HUMANS."
"I FEEL DIRTY KES."
"AGREED."
The two daleks leave the park; they pass by a yellow home and notice the two boys tugging the hand of what they can only assume is a parent towards the direction of the park. Led looks up and sees the clouds, he thinks of the different atmosphere that this planet has, he remembers that dark clouds mean precipitation, usually rain. They pass by the many houses at a steady pace, he wonders if in the future will the daleks be able to move faster. The pair move around they pass by people who are completely oblivious to them, finally after a while they reach the cities down-town. Soon all the houses and green pastures are replaced by buildings and concrete floors, Kes and he both stop to look at a big fountain with a species of fish spewing out water.
"SSPPEEEEEWW." Led says randomly spinning in a complete circle receiving a glance from his partner.
They pass by buildings of all sorts, they see clothing stores, antique shops, restaurants, and even a strip club. The two looked at the windows as they passed by, Kes wasn't sure how he should feel about all of it, he knew that he was created by the supreme leader to infiltrate earth and learn more about the species the doctor had taken a strong liking too. He knew that Led and he were different from the others; they were 'special' as the other would like to call them. He knew that the others didn't feel the way they did, and that they would never understand what he felt inside him, so as he passed by the windows he couldn't help but feel a small admiration for all the strange things this species had done, all the weird objects and designs that they had created. His thoughts were interrupted by a loud noise, he turned his eye stalk and saw what he learned to be a 'car', he learned that the metallic boxes helped transport humans from place to place, he also learned that many cars killed people by hitting them almost like it had done to him.
"DESTINATION REACHED." Kes said ignoring the honks that the car continued to blare.
Led who had kept fairly quiet for the trip looked around, he wasn't really sure where he was, he saw a couple humans sitting down outside of the building putting strange objects to their lips.
"SHALL WE ENTER?" he asked.
"CORRECT."
The white dalek opened his secret compartment and extended out his mechanical hand, he griped the door handle and opens the door for his partner to pass through. The white dalek waits for Kes to enter; he turns his eyestalk toward his partner and watches as Kes starts moving forward.
"Welcome to Starbucks what would like?" the cashier says with a forced smile, Kes can tell, her frustrations are clear. Sometimes he wishes his face could reflect his feelings, but now is not the time for such thoughts so he pushes the dark feelings away.
"KES WHAT ARE WE DOING."
Led starts to regret not paying more attention to the when the instructions were given.
"HUMAN STUDIES STATE THAT HUMANS DRINK A LOT OF COFFEE, WE MUST UNDERSTAND… WE MUST BLEND IN." "JOKE MADE! GET IT BLEND?"
"KES I HAVE NO HUMAN CURRENCY."
"YOU HAVE FAILED TO LAUGH; YOU WILL NOT MAKE A GOOD HUMAN."
Kes turns away and looks at the cashier; he tells her that they would like two iced coffees, one mocha and one caramel. He looks at her punch in the order and waits for what he knows will happen next, her asking for payment. He opens his secret compartment and extends out his hand already gripping what he knows to be a ten dollar bill.
"Your change will be four dollars and seventy-eight cents." She extends her hand to give him the change.
Kes looks at her hand, firmly clutching the money, then down to his two grippers he calls hands, he hadn't planned for this, he knows that the end result would not be well. She would probably feel the metal, instead of what human skin feels like.
"KEEP THE CHANGE."
He turns around and heads over to the designated area for picking up ones purchases, as he waits for it he wonders if they can even drink this. A different girl hands them the drinks, smiles and bids them a good day. They exit the coffee shop and head over to the trash can on the street corner, they look at each other, Led is waiting for Kes to go first. Kes looks down at the drink and slowly pull his gripper hand back in, he watches it creep back in, inch by inch till the two panels slide shut. He hears Leds hand retracting as well, when he hears his partners panels close he turns to him.
"HOW DO YOU FEEL?"
"I FEEL NOTHING KES."
"NIETHER DO I."
"WE HAVE EX-TER-MINATED OUR FIRST COFFEE!"
Kes feels a sudden sharp tingle run down his tentacles, he worries but the feeling is gone almost as quickly as it came, so he ignores it.
"LETS GO LED, WE MUST FIND A HOTEL."
"AGREED, LETS GET ONE WITH BUNK BEDS."
Kes starts walking down the sidewalk, when he hears a scream and something breaking. He turns his eyestalk towards the direction of the noise and he sees that it came from inside the coffee shop. He knows why too, now they're all looking at him, he sees his reflection on the mirror and it's not good. It's not good at all.