This is a little idea that occurred to me today when I was procrastinating
instead of doing my maths homework! Anyway, I hope to upload the first
chapter within a few days when I sort it out fully . this is just a teaser
trailer!
[OS] = off-screen. * = description of scene -- -- = captions on screen
* * *
Over a black background - the following words appear:
-- They thought it was over . --
*Skinner setting the explosives .
Mina pinning Dorian to the wall .
Nemo and Hyde fighting .
Quatermain fighting M .
Sawyer shooting M .
M falling . *
-- They couldn't have been more wrong --
*We see Huck Finn, falling to the ground in slow motion, clutching his chest . The Phantom laughing . The laughter echoes, as if down a long corridor .
Sawyer wakes up in bed, sweating and panting .
He bursts into the dining chamber of the Nautilus, but it is empty .
He runs through the corridors of the Nautilus, calling "Skinner! Mina! Jekyll! . Anyone?" His cries echo down the corridors .
"Tom?" [OS] *It is a girl's voice . *
He turns slowly . a face he has never forgotten .
[The following occur in rapid sensation]
TOM: I thought you never wanted to see me again.
GIRL: I was wrong .
*Tom starts to walk away *
GIRL: He's not dead!
*Mina confronts Sawyer in his room*
MINA: [to Sawyer] What have you done? What have you brought amoung us?
TOM: [yelling] I don't know!
-- Figures from his past --
*Faces flash by - Quartermain, Huck Finn, Dorian, the Phantom . *
-- Will determine his future . --
*Tom is lead blindfolded and bound through several corridors. His captors push open two double doors and light sears forth, blinding us *
-- And his demons --
*Tom running through the corridors of the Nautilus, blood coming from a head wound . *
-- Will come to light . --
*Tom is outside in the rain . He stares up at the sky in pain and horror .
An anguished scream breaks forth from his lips . *
-- To save his love --
*Tom embraces the girl
TOM: I will never let them take you . *
[FADE TO] *Tom is walking slowly through a library, holding his Colt pistols at the ready .
He hears a scream . He runs . *
-- He must do the unthinkable --
*Tom is in a cavern, kneeling by the water. Figures stand around him, cloaked and bearing torches -
TOM: Make me one of you . *
-- In The Depths Of The Night - Coming Soon --
* * *
If anyone really likes this - by some chance - let me know and I will send you an email when I put up the story itself!
Please let me know what you think!
[OS] = off-screen. * = description of scene -- -- = captions on screen
* * *
Over a black background - the following words appear:
-- They thought it was over . --
*Skinner setting the explosives .
Mina pinning Dorian to the wall .
Nemo and Hyde fighting .
Quatermain fighting M .
Sawyer shooting M .
M falling . *
-- They couldn't have been more wrong --
*We see Huck Finn, falling to the ground in slow motion, clutching his chest . The Phantom laughing . The laughter echoes, as if down a long corridor .
Sawyer wakes up in bed, sweating and panting .
He bursts into the dining chamber of the Nautilus, but it is empty .
He runs through the corridors of the Nautilus, calling "Skinner! Mina! Jekyll! . Anyone?" His cries echo down the corridors .
"Tom?" [OS] *It is a girl's voice . *
He turns slowly . a face he has never forgotten .
[The following occur in rapid sensation]
TOM: I thought you never wanted to see me again.
GIRL: I was wrong .
*Tom starts to walk away *
GIRL: He's not dead!
*Mina confronts Sawyer in his room*
MINA: [to Sawyer] What have you done? What have you brought amoung us?
TOM: [yelling] I don't know!
-- Figures from his past --
*Faces flash by - Quartermain, Huck Finn, Dorian, the Phantom . *
-- Will determine his future . --
*Tom is lead blindfolded and bound through several corridors. His captors push open two double doors and light sears forth, blinding us *
-- And his demons --
*Tom running through the corridors of the Nautilus, blood coming from a head wound . *
-- Will come to light . --
*Tom is outside in the rain . He stares up at the sky in pain and horror .
An anguished scream breaks forth from his lips . *
-- To save his love --
*Tom embraces the girl
TOM: I will never let them take you . *
[FADE TO] *Tom is walking slowly through a library, holding his Colt pistols at the ready .
He hears a scream . He runs . *
-- He must do the unthinkable --
*Tom is in a cavern, kneeling by the water. Figures stand around him, cloaked and bearing torches -
TOM: Make me one of you . *
-- In The Depths Of The Night - Coming Soon --
* * *
If anyone really likes this - by some chance - let me know and I will send you an email when I put up the story itself!
Please let me know what you think!