Ok, this story was originally put on the Redwall Abbey Forum. I forgot about it, but recently came across it and decided to continue it here. So here it is!
CHAPTER 1
The ancient halls of Iceblade Castle had long been the home of wolves. It was true that Dramz had once ruled there, but the wolfclans had retaken it after Gulo left. Now, King Fengz (pronounced Fangs) ruled there. He was everything a warrior king should be, be from his huge claws and teeth to his red cloak and black tunic. His weapon was a spear with a long curved blade at the end. His throne room was a huge hall with the cages for prisoners lining the way to the throne. It was made from stone, and covered with dead enemies skins. Yes, Fengz had a huge kingdom and a horde of vermin to serve him, but he wanted more. That was why his most trusted lieutenant, a wolf named Angtar Boneshatter, was sailing with an army to take Mossflower Country. Nothing, he was sure, would dare try to stop him. That just goes to show, he had never heard of the Long Patrol.
Across the Western Seas, at the mountain of Salamandastron, it seemed to be another ordinary day of training and drilling for the famed Long Patrol. Major Mert Swiggleton watched from the window of his bedroom.
"Breakfast as ordered, sah!" Meet turned to see Sergeant Asty Bimtun standing at the door holding a tray laden with breakfast food.
"Good show, sergeant," said Swiggleton,"put it down right there." As the sergeant put the tray down, Swiggleton turned back to the window, this time looking towards the north.
"Looking for him, sah?" asked Bimtun.
"He's been gone for two seasons now," replied Mert," Salamandastron isn't the same without a badgerlord to rule here. When he left, he said he would be back before winter. Well, it's almost winter, and no sign of him for miles around."
"I will tell the scouts to broaden there search," said the sergeant.
"Good, and tell me if they bally well find anything, anything at all. Dismissed, sergeant."
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