Hey this is my first piece, so looking forward to some criticism! This a fan fiction piece on Inheritance and this is the first chapter, I'm still writing the rest. Let me know what you think! I hope you enjoy!
Disclaimer: I do not own the Eragon series
Blizzard
Chapter 1
Eragon had a feeling that something was about to go terribly wrong. He was right. Nasuada called upon Eragon to ask him to find out what happened all of the Varden's soldiers, and Eragon did not wish to tell her. They had deserted and joined Galbatorix. Eragon knew that when so many soldiers left, the war may already be lost. Eragon was trying to think of ways that he could get more soldiers, when he walked into his tent to see a women who he had never seen before.
She was, in every sense of the word, beautiful. Her hair was an amazing golden blonde. She wore a dress so fair that all sewers in Alagaesia would envy her. Her face was so perfectly shaped, it was amazing to think she was human, possibly an elf. But the biggest thing that caught Eragon's attention was her eyes. They were bluer than the ocean but much more beautiful, yet they held a sadness and an immense rage. Though Eragon knew to go after a woman who wasn't immortal like himself wasn't wise, this woman could have his heart in a second.
"Hello Eragon, my name is Silver. I can help and I will help, but first I need to see if you are worthy." said the woman.
"Why? What would a woman like you want to do with a war, and how could you help? You are but one maiden." Eragon asked, "Who are you?"
She smiled, as if Eragon's questions made her laugh, and said, "I am Silver. My pack and I think it's time that Galbatorix's rule comes to an end. I am the leader of my pack, we are large in numbers and more fierce and powerful than all the men here. Believe me Eragon, my pack is life or death for you. But first you will be tested by sword, mind, and magic. Prepare yourself, Eragon, I am going to test you myself, Meet me on the training field at sundown." Then Silver left Eragon's tent with a very sophisticated smile.
Eragon be careful, she smells of blood and seems to be as tough as a wolf, Saphira said with her thoughts, Make sure you pass that test, I would like her to stick around.
Eragon smiled, if Saphira thought she should stick around, she had to be pretty tough. He walked outside and flew with Saphira until sundown, a great joy for Eragon. Then they landed close to the training field and Eragon went over to start a couple of tests that would soon change his life.