Hi I'm Neon Toaster and this is my first Harry Potter story.
Please Review it would be great for some feedback
There he was again. With his friends talking happily. And there I was sitting with a book, alone. How I wished I could be friends with the trio, especially Harry, he was so sweet and brave and kind...
My name is Elsa Atkins and I am one of the many students in Gryffindor, also the only invisible student in GryffindorI have no friends in this house, why couldn't I have been put in Slytherin with my friend Arya, she had lots of friends... I'm just an unpopular nobody that no one will ever-
"Excuse me are you saving this seat for anyone." I broke out of my reading trance to look up, I saw him, Harry, the chosen one, my one and only crush.
"U-uh n-no go ahead and take it..." I said quietly and shyly, my face turned a dark pinky red colour.
"Thanks." He said smiling, he picked it up and I watched him walk off, every step was so flawless. He smiled at me! HE SMILED AT ME! I wanted to stand up and happy dance. He's so amazing...
Next Day
I was still, STILL! Replaying that moment back in my head, my cheeks went red every time I thought about it. I must pull my thoughts out of my head though, unfortunately I was late to potions... My least favourite subject with my least favourite teacher.
I ran faster and hugged my books to my chest as I flew down the almost deserted halls. When I got to the class I slowly creeped in, hopefully not being noticed by Professor Snape.
"Miss Blevins." Snape said with a calm tone, I looked up at him, I was waiting for a punishment
"Yes sir?" I replied nervously
"Please take a seat over there, and Mr Potter I see you are late, not much of a surprise" Snape said, my heart stopped and I turned around to see him, he looked out of breath.
"Im terribly sorry I'm late sir I-" Harry started to apologize but Snape stopped him
"Yes, now go and join Elsa." Snape ignored his apology, I turned back round and my heart was beating faster. He sat down next to me and Snape continued to write things down. I was sitting next to Harry potter, THE Harry potter, nothing could be more amazing than this moment.
"Shall we start then..." He asked, but he was also asking for my name, I felt a little sad he didn't know my name, but of course he wouldn't
"My name is Elsa." I said to him quietly
"It's nice to meet you Elsa." He said smiling.
"Are you new here by any chance?" He asked me, I sighed
"No, this is my fifth year." I said
"Sorry... We're both in Gryffindor and I haven't even noticed you. I'm being so rude." He apologized and feeling embarrassed
"It's fine. I'm kind of hard to find, I always have my head down in a fictional book." I said and then he laughed. That laugh... I want to hear it on repeat...
"Mr Potter and Miss Blevins, I see more talking than work here..." Shape said coldly, he then walked off. We both stopped talking and got on with our work.
We both turned out to be great at working together and did a whole lot better than the class, and for once, Snape was impressed. Because we finished before everyone else, we had some time to chat, Harry told me about his two friends Hermione and Ron and I told him about Arya and her funny craziness. And we got along, which was the best part of it all.
The lesson ended and it was me and Harry in the classroom, I dropped my books and Harry being the kind boy he is helped me pick up my belongings.
"Thank you." I said smiling, we walked out and we headed to our separate lessons.
"Elsa, wait, would you like to come and meet Hermione and Ron?" Harry asked me.
"Yes! That would be great!" I said smiling.
I'm so happy! My first friend in Gryffindor turned out to be the person I desired most in this house. I couldn't wait to meet Hermione and Ron, they sounded really nice and kind friends.
Lunch
"Hermione, Ron, this is Elsa." Harry said, I was sat by Harry, we were facing Hermione and Ron.
"Hi." They said simultaneously
"Hello, Harry has told me lots about you both." I said quietly.
"So you're in our house then I never seen you before." Ron said, he had messy ginger hair, I looked back up shyly
"Yeah I'm really quiet..." I said quietly
"You're really shy, it's cute." Ron said smiling, I looked down and blushed. Hermione hit Ron in the arm.
It became easier to talk to them both when Hermione asked me things, she was really formal and kind, I got to know them more and they got to know a lot about me, I think I opened up and finally made some friends. While Hermione was arguing with Ron and Harry was trying to resolve it, I looked over to the Slytherin table, I saw Arya, she was with a load of girls and boys and she was making them laugh. She looked up and waved at me, I smiled and waved back.
"Who's that?" Harry asked
"That's my friend Arya, we met 2 years ago." I said
"She's really nice and funny..." I said smiling, Harry smiled at me, and i looked away blushing.
"Elsa, I'm done with my lunch are you?" Hermione asked me
"Yes." I replied
"Let's go then." She said, we both got up and walked back to the common room
"Okay, so let me take a guess. You have a giant crush on Harry don't you?" Hermione said, straight as we walked in and sat down
"Yes! How did you know?" I asked curiously.
"Well when you talked to him your face wod go a little red and you were staring into his eyes. Not to mention when he smiled at you, you looked down, again blushing." Hermione said.
"Yeah..." I said laughing
"Well, I think that's really sweet and I'm glad we have a new friend." Hermione said smiling.
"Me too." I agreed.
Thank you for reading my first chapter!
~Neon Toaster