Hello everybody!
Guess what I'm back!
After long consideration, I hereby announce the H&D rewrite!
Now I do not know If any of you guys who read the original still here…. But I hope you all enjoy this rewrite. Although I am not sure if I have improved or not…. Sorry if this story is still lacking in some aspects
Prologue
-The Invitation-
It was a beautiful day outside the birds are singing flowers are blooming and the sun is shining as bright as it can as a girl with her messy brown hair and wearing a blue and purple pajama still snoring on her bed
"Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Frisk now I am just your normal everyday girl living with a loving and caring family"
A figure then teleport inside her room and sneak closer to her...
Closer…
And Closer...
Until they are right next to her ear and let out a huge grin
"wake up Kiddo!" they yelled quickly making Frisk stood up from her bed and quietly turn toward the skeletal monster in front of her before falling back to bed putting pillow on her face
"Okay, I may be lying when I said that..."
"Five more minute, Sans" she mutter in annoyance
Sans walk up to the window "aw c'mon kiddo, you can't be in bed all the time… beside all the monster really want to "Sea" you.."
"Ban" she mutter
"Aw c'mon kid, that was one of my best" he said grinning
She then finally put the pillow away and look towards Sans with a tired look "ok then, I'm awake"
"This is one of my caretaker, Sans the Skeleton AKA the Punny skeleton.."
Frisk just give a weak smile at him "okay tell them I will be down there soon," she said
"Better be quick you wouldn't want to make her wait~" sans said teleporting out of the room
Frisk then walked toward her bathroom at the corner of the room and turn on the water
"So I guess this requires explanation so when I was a young girl I fell into a mountain… that is where I met them"
After finishing taking a bath, she walked to her wardrobe in the room and put on a blue t-shirt with purple stripes on it and blue jeans and then she walked out of the room.
"At first, I was scared of them but as the time grew I started to realize that they are not as bad as fairytales usually depicts them"
When she finally was out of her room all she see is darkness around her
"Even though they try to kill me and take my soul, once you get survive that point, you will see that they are the same as us Humans"
"Sans? Toriel? Papyrus?" Frisk called "is anyone here?" she called again
"And in the end… they all love me as if I was their own.."
After walking around in the darkness, she finally found the light switch
"SURPRISE!" a unison of yelling come from behind her
She turn around to see the entire village is there with Confetti's and a banner that spelled 'happy birthday Frisk!"
"Aww you guys…" she said
"Happy birthday my child!"
"This is Toriel, she is the best mother that any children can ask for, she is the one who took care of me when I fell down"
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUMAN!"
"That is papyrus, sans brother... and my best friend."
"Happy birthday dork!"
"That is Undyne, my personal "trainer" and friend. Although her training can be kind of extreme, if you can say"
"Happy birthday Frisk"
"This is Alphys, the royal scientist and my best watching buddy, her love of Anime knows no bound."
"Happy birthday, human"
"This is Asgore or as I like to call him 'Goat dad'. I like spending time with him tending the flowers."
"Happy birthday" a flower said from a flowerpot with a pessimist tone
"And finally this is Flowey, although he likes throwing threats at me about killing everyone you love. I can feel some sadness whenever he speak out those words. I know that he is still in there somewhere. I hope that one day we can turn him back…. I would like to see Asriel again"
"You guys prepare this for me?" Frisk asked with joy
"Sure do, everyone in the village helps too, even little flower here" sans said
"Shut up! I'm just helping since I have nothing else to do!" he retorted
"I'm Shore that you do…."
"STOP WITH THE PUNS!" Flowey yelled
Frisk let out a giggle "thank you, all of you" Frisk said with a smile
"Everything for you dork!" Undyne said grinning "now hurry up I'm starving and that cake is calling me to eat it!" Undyne said
"Even though the human seem reluctantly to accept the monsters but after a few months they seem to accept us into society and even make a special home for us and now humans and monster live together in this town and that's how my life is"
BEHOLD! THE ULTIMATE CAKE!" Papyrus said as a few spider started walking toward her with a huge cake. It was about double her size and more resemble a wedding cake than a birthday cake. The cake have a purple decoration all over it
"I made the cake with Grillby's and Muffet's help. They were so eager to help" Toriel said
"Really?! Thank you Muffet, Grillby"
"Don't sweat it. I'm just glad I could help" Grillby said
"Don't worry about me either, you deserve it!" Muffet said smiling
Undyne was staring at the cake with an intense look "just hurry up and cut it!" Undyne yelled
"HURRY HUMAN, I THINK UNDYNE IS GOING TO EXPLODE ANYTIME SOON!" Papyrus said
Frisk just chuckles and then finally cut the cake with Toriel soon giving the monster their share of the cake
"Oh, yea! and Mettaton send you this present, he is currently on tour so he couldn't come but he said he wish you best of luck" Alphys said giving Frisk a present box
She opens it and found a Mettaton Doll, a Mettaton poster, a mug with the shape of Mettaton face, a shirt with Mettaton face printed on it and a note. She took it and read it
Hey, darling. I am sorry that I cannot come. The manager told me that I still have to go to other concert in order to finish my contract, but fear not because after this tour is over I will come straight home and deliver you the best concert the world can give!
Sincerely,
Mettaton
Frisk just smile, took the entire present out, and put them next to her.
After an hour have pass the other monster already left leaving only Frisk and her best friends before a doorbell interrupts them. "I'll get it," Undyne said still chewing a piece of cake, a few moments letter she come back with a letter "here, for you" she said
Frisk then open the letter and read it:
We at hope peak academy have selected
You as 'the ultimate foreign student' and with great honor we invite you to join us at hope's peak academy
Your arrival is to be expected
Signed,
hope peak headmaster
Jin Kirigiri
"Ultimate Foreign Student? Hope peak academy? Do any of you know what it is?" she asked
"TRY ASKING ALPHYS, HUMAN! MAYBE SHE HAVE A CLUE AS TO WHAT THIS HOPE PEAK ACADEMY THING!"
"hey Undyne where is she?"
"She is cleaning the dishes with Toriel" Asgore said
Frisk stood up and walk to the kitchen with the letter in hand
Kitchen
"Alphys do you know anything about hope peak academy?" frisk asked
"Hmm well yea, a little bit, why you asked?"
"Well you see I got invited to enroll there" frisk said
Alphys stop washing the dish when she heard that and turn to Frisk
"R-r-r-really?!" she ask with anticipation
"Well this letter says so" Frisk said giving the letter to her
"Let me see!" Alphys said. Frisk gave her the letter and she quickly read it before her expression turns into happiness
"Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!" Alphys said seemingly jumping up and down
"What? What is it?" she asked
"Hope peak academy is the best school in the whole world! It is where the best of the best study! They said if you graduate from it you will be set for life" sans explained
"Wow really?" frisk asked
"Come on, we have to tell the others!" Alphys said pulling her away
Alphys soon explained it to Toriel and everyone
"WHAAAAAAAAA?" Undyne said with her mouth gaping
"That's great!" Toriel said
"If I may ask, where is this school at?" Asgore asked
"It said here that it is located in Japan…" Sans said
At that moment Undyne smile turn into a wide grin before pulling Alphys away "U-U-Undyne?"
"Come Alphys we have much to do!" she said pulling her out of the house
"WELL THEN, LET'S HELP YOU PACK! THE TICKET IS SAID TO DEPART TOMMOROW MORNING!" papyrus said
Frisk nodded and walk to her room with Papyrus and Asgore behind her. While Flowey stare at the letter "That's…. Odd.."
The next day
The airport
Everyone was at the airport going to say goodbye to Frisk
"HUMAN PLEASE RETURN SOON!" Papyrus said with tears in his eye socket
"Pap's are you crying?" Sans asked
He let out a few sobs "YES…." Papyrus said
She hugs him "Don't worry I will be back as soon as possible, Paps" Papyrus then started crying down stream of tears as she let go
"Take this with you, my child" Toriel said giving her a box full of butterscotch pie
"Thanks mum!" she said hugging her, which she returns
She walk up to Undyne who crouch down to her "now since you are going to Japan I want you to get a few things for me" she said as she pull out a stack of papers from her bag
Frisk was shocked at how many pages are with it
"Undyne, probably not a good idea having her bought all those things for you" Alphys said
Undyne then let out a sigh of defeat "ok Fine, I just need you to buy one thing for me" she said closing her head on her
"I want you to get me a movie called 'destiny/stay Light: Paradise feels I. Bouquet presage' " she said with seriousness
"Don't we better off wait for the subtitles to come out?" Alphys asked
"NO! I REFUSE TO WAIT ANY LONGER! I MUST HAVE THAT MOVIE NOW!" she yelled
Frisk smiled "of course, I will send it here once I found it there"
Undyne then pat her head "I knew I could count on you, soldier. Don't disappoint me"
"Yes mam!" Frisk said saluting her. She then walk toward Asgore
"I wish you good luck in your studies, Frisk and don't worry I will make sure the flowers are tended in your absence.." he said
Frisk kiss his cheek "thank you, Asgore" she said
She finally went to Flowey who is in Sans hands
"We will miss you kiddo" Sans said
"I'm not. Nope! totally won't!" Flowey said
Sans poke Flowey head "you sure about that?" Sans asked
Flowey sigh, "Fine, I will miss you, Frisk"
She then hugs Flowey "don't worry. We will find a way to turn you back…" she said
"HA! Good luck with that" he said with a hint of sarcastic tone
"Flight to Tokyo is ready please all passenger enter the bridge" a voice in the intercom said
"i guess this is my flight..." frisk said
All of them hug Frisk one last time before she go. It feels like it was forever before she let go, she then walked away with her duffle bag
"Ha frisk you are so gullible" a voice said in frisk head. She turn to the left and saw a familiar figure walking next to her
"I wonder where have you been" Frisk mutter as he enter the bus to the plane with her duffle bag on her back
"Oh I wonder what will we find there!" chara said before laughing maniacally before disappearing
Frisk just ignore her and board her plane, as her plane take-off he could see Toriel and the other waving goodbye at her
"I promise I will be back soon..." frisk mutter as the plane began to leave the ground and make it's flight to Japan
Thank you for reading this rewrite. Did I do well? Let me know
Also congrats if you found the reference I put in there
Another note, this rewrite is a side project so don't get your hopes up for quick chapters as I am really busy IRL
Cya in the next chapter
AN update: AND PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING THAT IS HOLY. DO NOT. I REPEAT DO NOT! SPOIL V3 FOR ME! I HAVEN'T PLAYED IT YET!