This is a new version of the first chapter I MADE SOME IMPROVEMENTS
A LONG TIME AGO IN A GALAXY FAR AWAY LUKE SKYWALKER HAS BECAME A MAN WITH A WIFE AND A BOY. THIS BOY WAS NAMED ANAKIN OBI WON SKYWALKER AND HAS AN UNBELIEVABLE POWER IN THE FORCE. YET YOUNG ANAKIN ALSO HAS A POWER. A POWER THAT IS NOT OF THE FORCE AND A POWER HE CANNOT CONTROL. AT THE SAME TIME IN A DISTANT PLANET A YOUNG GIRL HAS DISCOVER THE DEATH OF HER PARENTS AND IN ANGER SHE RELISE'S A POWER SIMILAR THAT OF YOUNG ANAKIN. IS THERE POWERS A DARK POWER OF THE FORCE OUR IS IT EVOLUTION.
STAR WARS EVOLUTION
CHAPTER 1
BEEP BEEP BEEP. Anakin reached over his bed to his nightstand to turn off his alarm. He sat up and stretched, he got out of bed scratching his butt and yawning. He walked over to his bed and reached for his green IPod player turned it on, then he reached for his dookie green IPod (which sat on top of his player) and turned it on shuffle. Twista and Mariah Carey "So Lonely" started playing. Anakin smiled at his one favorite song and cranked it up on full blast. He looked in the mirror at his Carmel colored skin that he got from his mother he also had her hazel eyes nose and lips. But besides those he looked a lot like his father. He him-self had his light brown nearly blonde fro was way out of shape, he smiled and saw his filthy braces with blue and gold rubber bands he shook his head in disgust and walked to his bathroom. He stepped in to the room and turned on the lights and squinted at the bright light that was ten times brighter because of the bright orange walls. He stepped into his shower and turned it on as hot as it could go and began washing his-self. While in the shower he began singing the hook to his song loud (and his singing wasn't the best but it wasn't bad it was average).
Anakin stepped out of the bathroom with his towel rapped around his waste and toothbrush in mouth. He brushed his teeth then backtracked into the restroom spitting out the tooth paste and rising out his mouth with mouth-wash. He went back to his mirror as soon as another rapper from the same planet in the outer rim (he doesn't know what its called are were it is). That artist went by the name "Kanye West" and his song "Stronger" started. Anakin of course sung the song word from word. "N-n-now dat don't kill me can only make me stronga I you to hurry up now cuz I cant wait much longa I know I gotz to be right now cuz I cant get much wronga man I been waitin all night now datz how long I've been on yeah."
The door opened and one of the Jedi teachers came in. "Turn dat down An-. "
"WHAT THE HELL MAN GET OUT IN NOT DRESSED." Anakin yelled out at his master he knew he messed up for using his language but the Jedi were so arrogant especially Song. He was one of the first of the Jedi to graduate from the new order.
Oh yeah I haven't explained the new order have I. Well we all know how Anakin1 traded the republic and he caused the Sith to fall too. Well after the fact there were no more Jedi except Luke well that's what was thought. Well after the news was let out a secret organization came out of hiding they called them self's The New Jedi Republic. They were all Jedi that were taught by the original Jedi and so on ad so fourth. But the T.N.J.R. had different philosophy then the old republic. They believe the Jedi had the right to love and they don't believe in separating the children from family's, cause it causes pain and depression that can lead to hate which can lead to the dark side. Also the allow love but its not recommended.
Anakin opened his underwear drawer and pulled out some green briefs not boxers (he has a thing for briefs don't ask). He slipped them on, and went to the dirty clothes pile and picked up his favorite pair Republic Rebel jeans The navy blue ones with the Sith Republic emblem with a light saber go in though it sniffed em he figured they didn't smell that bad and threw them on. Then he went in to his closet(as soon as he opeed the door Lupe Fiasco's I Gotcha started playing) He sung with that too. "They Call Me Lupe I'll Be Your New Day They Wanna Smell Like Me They Want My Bouquet But They Cant They They Accented Like The UK Turn That Ude Lupe To Pepe Le Peu Spray Flagrantly Fragrant And They Can't Escape It My Perfume Pursued Them Anywhere That They Went You Don't Want A Loan Leave My Cologne Alone It's A Little Too Strong For You To Be Putting On Trust Me I Say This Justly I Went From Musty To Musky And You all Can't Mush Me I Warned You all Cornballs I Hush Puppies".
So he stepped into his closet singing and pick out his green North Pole Shirt and he slipped that on, grabbed his youngling robe off the hanger, sat it on his bed picked up his deodorant stick threw it on went in his bathroom got his Burberry cologne put two sprays on the shirt slipped on his robes put on four spray's. Went to his bathroom and put his Burberry cologne back. Grabbed his cellset and phone off its charger turned off his IPod player grabbed his IPod and head phones slipped them on, grabbed his hover board. "Light off" the lights went off. He left his dorm locked his door and jumped off heading to his best friends house singing Lupe Fiasco's Kick Push.