Disclaimer: I don't own Xiaolin Showdown, never will. Sniff.
Hey. So ,uh this is my first fan fic and I'd appreciate feedback… but you know, whatever. So this first part is like a story thing, but then it sorta changes into interactive plot… Oh you'll get it. Maybe. If any one reads this.
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Kidnapping Them
Dojo crawls round the halls of the Xiaolin temple. He shouts for the young monks. Then he shouts for Master Fung. No one answers, nothing stirs. He moves quicker. He knows there is someone, something watching him. He hears the wisp of fabric moving fast through the air and a laugh the would make a maniac jealous. The a sharp pain in the back of his head, and then darkness
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Chase sits on his throne contemplating ways to kill that annoying Jack Spicer. He starts. There is someone there. "I know your there. State your business with me." he says. He hears a laugh filled with insanity. Then he feels a sharp stab of a needle and falls to the floor unconscious.
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Dojo wakes up in a strange, cushioned room where, upon looking around, he sees the young monks, Jack Spicer, Wuya, Katnappe and an unconscious Chase Young. "What's going on?" he says
" We don't know Dojo, we all heard a crazy laugh and woke up here." says Kimiko. A bright flash, and a figure in a Gothic maid dress appears.
" Hello. I'm Chochero Minx. I'm the Princess of the Dreamscape. You are all here to be my toys." She blinks at them in a most disconcerting way. " You look like you'll be lots of fun."
" 'scuse me, miss, but we ain't toys. We're people, begging your pardons , Princess" Says Clay.
" A man with manners! How lovely! You'll be in a dream for sure" She winks " but not first, I think. So who should be first? Hmm……." The limp body of Chase suddenly regains life. He sits up groggily. " Ha! You! You'll do!" says Chochero Minx, pointing at Chase. " Now, A Dream or a nightmare? Maybe I'll ask them. The ones that watch what we do. Yes , that's what I'll do. I'll be back with the answer next time. Oh, this will be so much fun!"
She disappear in a flash of smoke, leaving the occupants of the room dazed and confused, till Jack breaks the silence by saying " ungg" and collapsing to the floor. The others start shouting their complaints, pleas and random obscenities at the walls.
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Yeah, I know it's a bit short but it's a prelude so , yeah. Them would be you by then way. So what do you think for Chase Young? Dream or nightmare? And do you have any plot ideas for Chase's dreamscape that you particularly want?
Oh, and I don't have a Beta reader so I'd appreciate if you pointed out any grammar mistakes. Thanks for reading my first chapter of my first fan fic.