Characters:
Minzel: Minnie Mouse as Rapunzel
Mother Daisy: Daisy Duck as Mother Gothel
Mick Rider: Mickey Mouse as Flynn Rider/Eugene Rider
The King and Queen: Minnie's parents
Figaro: Minnie's pet cat as Pascal
Donald and Goofy: The Stabbington brothers
The pub men will be different characters from the Mickey Mouse shows or they're just random characters.
Mollie: A random horse character that will replace Maximus
Minzel (Tangled Version)
Chapter 1: A Magical Flower Is Born
Long ago, there was a kingdom far away. Over time the kingdom grew and grew, so they elected a king and queen. One day, the queen fell very ill and was in time to have a child as well. So the guards quickly went on a search for anything magical to save the queen's life.
Out on a ledge near the kingdom, there was a magical golden flower, and right beside the golden flower was an old woman who lived centuries by singing a song to it. The flower will turn her back to a young, beautiful woman. When she was done, she heard the royal guards nearby, so she covered it with a fake bush cover, but when she got up she knocked it over by accident. The guards arrived right after she hid in the bushes at the top of the hill. The guards cheered in delight now that they have something to cure the queen. The old woman stared evilly at the guards as they took the magic flower away. She disappeared back into the woods waiting for revenge.
Back at the castle, the castle nurses fed the queen the golden flower as a liquid type of soup. When she drank it, not only did she get better but a beautiful baby mouse princess was born. She had golden locks, green eyes, and light seem to glow from her. To celebrate the birth of the princess, the whole kingdom releasded floating, bright lanterns into the night sky and each and every lantern had the princess's symbol on it; a sun. Everything went wonderfully and peacefully, until when night came.
At night, the old woman came back for revenge. The royal family was all peacefully sleeping, until she came. The old woman took the child and ran off into the night. No one has seen the princess since, for 18 years. During that time, Mother Daisy raised the child in a high tower far in the forest where she can keep the child from danger and anyone taking her back. Mother Daisy wanted her all to herself because the child has magical hair that can heal or make anyone young as long as they sing a song. Mother Daisy decided to keep the child safe and named her Minzel.
Every time Minzel's birthday would come up, she would get up and look at the floating lanterns in the sky. Minzel thought that maybe someday, she can see them in person and get out of this tower. As time went on, Minzel's hair just kept on getting longer and longer and she kept on wondering why she can't leave the tower, but someday she will.
18 years later:
Minzel got up with a big smile and burst into a song as she went down and do the chores. She did baking, sweeping, making candles, painting, doing ballet, sowing, doing chess with her pet, and reading books. The day flew by fast and she heard her mother call her.
"Minzel," Mother Daisy called from the bottom of the tower.
Minzel got to the window and called down to her, "Coming mother."
Minzel went over to her pet first. Her pet is Figaro, a cat.
"Today is the day to tell her about "it."
Figaro nodded and licked her hand. Minzel then went over to the window and threw down her really long hair and Mother Daisy used it as a pulley. Minzel pulled her up and Mother Daisy arrived in the tower.
"I still don't know how you do this everyday without collasping," Mother Daisy said.
"Oh, it's nothing," Minzel said.
"Minzel, can you go get a chair for me? I'm exhausted and need you to sing a song for me, ok darling," Mother Daisy said as she exasperated with her hand to her forehead.
"Oh, yes mother," Minzel said as she went to go a chair.
Minzel set it near the fire and when her mother sat down, Minzel quickly rushed to sing the song so she can tell her mother about what she wants for her birthday.
"Slow down Minzel," Mother Daisy said.
Minzel ran to her side, "So mother, in a couple of days it will be my birthday! How exciting is that!."
"Hmm, and you're saying..."
"What I would like to do for once in a lifetime, is to see the floating lights in the night sky,"Minzel said.
"Ahh, you mean the stars," Mother Daisy said.
"No, these aren't like stars. They come out on my birthday, only on my birthday, and..." Minzel looks out the window, "I can't help get the feeling they're meant for me."
Mother Daisy thought for a moment and then Minzel went up to her.
"Please, just this once," Minzel pleaded with the sad face.
"Really Minzel, and I have to say no. You know why?" Mother Daisy said as she went over to the kitchen.
"Yes I know why but just this once and I'll never leave this tower, ever," Minzel pleaded still.
"Minzel, as much as I want to make you happy, I just can't trust a delicate flower such as you to ever go out into the dangerous world. That's just crazy talk there," Mother Daisy said.
Minzel's face fell and she looked to the ground. Mother Daisy noticed her face and went over to her.
She lifted Minzel's chin so she can look at her, "Trust me, mother knows best. There's all kinds of things out there that can endanger you. Poison Ivy, quicksand, plaques, cannibals, ruffians, bandits, and men with pointy teeth. If you go out there, you'll regret it. Mother, knows best."
Mother Daisy backed away a little bit.
"Minzel," said Mother Daisy with a stern look.
"Yes."
"You must never leave this tower, okay," Mother Daisy said.
"Yes mother," Minzel said with sadness.
"Oh, I love you," Mother Daisy said as she gave Minzel a hug.
"I love you too mother," Minzel said as she returned the hug.
(Pretend Love! So evil)
They both pulled away.
"Now, let's talk about this later, okay," Mother Daisy said as she petted Minzel's head and went into the kitchen.
Minzel stared after her.
"Someday, you'll understand mother," Minzel thought in her mind and then went back to her kitty.
(Sequel chapter coming.)