First fanfic story ever so judge harshly so I can improve on details and plots! Please tell me where I am going wrong and tell me what you want to happen! I hope I get a lot of helpers and I'd be happy if word was spread about the book. Thank you guys!

Prologue

"Ugh! I give up with you, Alice!" shouted the tutor who was desperately trying to teach the 16 year old girl. Alice was sitting on the branch of a tree with a now grown Dinah which was shaded from the glaring, summer sun by the large, soft, green leaves. Dinah was lay on Alice's lap purring as the girl yawned in a peaceful, light sleep but the slamming of the book by the tutor caused Alice jump out of her sleep and fall to the foot of tree. The screaming of 'Alice!' rang in her ears as everything went black.

And when Alice woke up...something wasn't quite right...

Chapter 1

Alice held her head while sitting up and called out, "Hello? Dinah? Mother? Is anybody here?" At that very moment a pair of very ragged, white rabbit ears appeared up from the grass and twitch at sound of her voice. Suddenly, the rabbit bounded off into the tree and Alice being a very curious person ran after the strange looking creature.

She began to rethink her action when she saw the features of this galloping, white rabbit when she saw the glint of a gold watch, dark blood red patches and stitching and a black surgical eye patch as he
seemed to only have...one button eye? Before Alice could turn back, the trees had closed tightly behind her and the rabbit had disappeared into thin air.

"Oh Alice, what have you done now? We've got ourselves lost and that bunny is gone now..." she mumbled to herself not noticing the trees moving or the presence of another person. She turned around to go
back, only to be tripped up by a tree root and she growled as she looked at her dirty tights and suddenly noticing that her dress from her mother had been ripped from the tree branches while she was running.

A cold, piercing wind blew past Alice, which made her shiver and she thought she had heard an eerie laugh but passed it as her wide imagination. As she clambered through the rough, moss and spider web covered trees, something pulled her back and Alice turned to stone as she felt someone's arms around her ankles and before she knew what was happening, she was pulled into the black abyss of a rabbit hole.

Ooooooooooooo! Scary shizz xD I hope stay with me for the next chapter! Still trying to make it longer but still keeping suspense!