Hello reader. This story is the first in my series and is actually the second version of this story to be on this site.
I recently decided to run over the entire thing and make sure to correct any mistake that I saw, whether it be continuity, grammatical or otherwise. This is in the hopes that I can draw in some more fans as well.
I hope that some of my previous fans are reading this updated version although it isn't necessary. The plot is in no way changed.
For any new fans, I am currently writing my 5th Instalment alongside editing the entire series. This is a series that could go up to as many as 10 stories. So there's a big commitment here. I joke of course. You only have to commit if you like the story and then you will become one of my DBAGs! (Obviously it's just Dragon Ball AG completely abbreviated.)
So, to give some info on this story…
It takes place 7 years after the final episode of Dragon Ball Z. Goku has left to train Uub and the rest of the Z-fighters move on with their lives. Some even disappeared and contact is severed. (Mainly because I don't want too many characters. There are a lot of OC villains.)
The story focuses on two main characters: Noca (My OC) and Pan. There will be romance developing between the two as the whole series progresses, but I am not a romance writer. Marvel Films and the Dragon Ball series itself heavily influence my writing, so the action is the priority.
It will follow Noca's life from pre-teen until he is in his late 20s/early 30s.
In this story it is split between Noca and Pan until they eventually meet, in which case their story will begin to progress together.
Yes – Noca is a Saiyan
No – He is not based on me…granted he used to be, but I have since made him completely different from me in a lot of ways. If I had these abilities I'd be a villain for sure, so I based the big bad villain that appears later in the series around me lol. I say he used to be based on me because I started planning this story when I was 12. I am now 19.
Thanks to the help of a few reviewers I would like to point a couple of things out.
- If there are gaps in Noca's ancestry, it will be answered in a prequel story.
- If Pan seems emotional, I wrote this story to be originally based after GT, I changed this and didn't change Pan's personality. I just felt it worked.
- If Noca seems too strong at some points in this story, it will be revealed later. It's part of the overall plot of this story.
I think that should clarify everything.
So sorry for the long author's note and I hope you enjoy this story and reviews are always welcome. Just nothing negative please, either keep it to yourself or don't read on.
This may well be the only author's note throughout the entire re-uploading of this story, unless I need to clarify anything.
Format
"Bold" = Speech e.g. "Hi, I'm Noca." He Said.
"Bold Italics" = Thoughts e.g. "Darn It!" He thought.
Underlined Italics = Dream Sequence.
"Underlined Italics" = Speech within Dream Sequence.
Prologue – Age 791
This new journey begins years after the last ended.
It is currently Age 791 and 17 years ago a great man known to (almost) everyone as Goku and his Z-Fighters managed to defeat the impossible evil of Kid Buu. After Kid Buu was defeated Goku hoped that he would be able to have another chance to fight him again, but as a good person.
Goku's hopes came true and 10 years later he met Uub, the newly reincarnated Kid Buu. Goku enjoyed a great fight against the young boy, but the fight itself just presented another chance for Goku to keep himself busy.
The great warrior decided that he would take it upon himself to take Uub back to his village and train him to be his eventual successor.
The only problem with Goku leaving was that he would be leaving his family once again.
Out of all the friends and family that would be left behind, the most upset was his 4-year-old granddaughter, Pan.
7 years later and Pan is still trying to deal with her grandfather leaving, but that isn't what our story focusses on yet. The main focus on this story is the arrival of another person capable of being the successor to Goku and one day protecting the Earth and all of its people. So, let us move onto the next part of our story about a young boy named Noca.
Noca's story is an average one. Nothing interesting happened in the first 12 years of his life, but when something did, it changed his life forever.
It was a sad event that almost destroyed Noca's life, but he tried his hardest not to let it get to him.
Noca's village was attacked. Houses were damaged. Crops were destroyed. The village was left in ruin. Fires took to the skies and things never seemed worse. There was only one recorded death though. Noca lost someone dear to him and it was the worst event of his short life.
Shortly after Noca was born, his father left. Yes that sounds awfully Cliché, but this is what happened. Noca's father was a human, like the majority of the people that inhabit planet Earth. Noca's mother was named Emna. She wasn't ordinary. She was different than the majority of people that inhabit planet Earth. She was a Saiyan/ Human Hybrid. Emna's father was called Cilu and he was a full blooded Saiyan.
Cilu arrived on Earth shortly after a mysterious alien had attempted to attack and kill Cilu's father, Kayu, who just so happened to be a Saiyan Elite.
Cilu did have a Saiyan wife and even a young son named Vernege.
Kayu had discovered the mysterious enemy when on a mission on a strange planet and the enemy unleashed a deadly attack upon Kayu. The Saiyan Elite narrowly managed to stall the enemy and returned to Planet Vegeta.
This wasn't the best of ideas as the alien recovered and followed Kayu back to the Saiyan home world. The king was instantly alerted to the existence of the enemy and he instructed his Elite troops to prepare for any strange enemies who may attack the planet.
Kayu had intentions to leave the planet based on something that the alien had told him, but Cilu didn't know anything about the alien and his father wouldn't tell him.
When Kayu sensed the imminent arrival of the alien he instructed his child and his family to leave the planet quickly and make sure they get away safe. Kayu flew out to meet the alien on a nearby moon and fight with him.
When on the moon Kayu's family were preparing to leave and make sure they followed the orders that Kayu had set them. The alien wasn't going to let them escape easily and he temporarily stopped the fight with Kayu and brought their spaceship down on Planet Vegeta's moon.
When the ship was brought down Cilu fell further than his wife and son and unfortunately witnessed the alien shoot a powerful energy blast at them, presumably killing them. Kayu was angered and swiftly attacked the alien and managed to get to Cilu and get him off the planet.
He did this by knocking him out and helping him into one of the Saiyan escape pods. Cilu was left to float through space as his father continued to fight for his life against the alien.
The people of planet Vegeta witnessed Kayu transform into something that they could only assume was a Super Saiyan. King Vegeta let the battle progress and only knew it was over when he witnessed the smallest of planet Vegeta's moons explode. It was a disappointment to know that Kayu had killed himself in the process of taking down this mysterious enemy, but the Saiyans would all remember him as the most recent Super Saiyan.
The King's son, Vegeta had looked up to Kayu as his idol almost throughout his entire life. Kayu was one of the top soldiers in the Elite Squadron and this was a great role to have within the Saiyan army. Vegeta not only lost an idol that day, but one of his great friends, Cilu.
When Cilu arrived on Earth he crash landed high up in the southern range mountains. All the technology that he arrived with was damaged beyond any repair.
This meant that Cilu had no way to get in contact with his people, but that didn't matter to him. What mattered was whether or not his family had survived, but without the ability to contact anyone, he would be stranded on the planet for the rest of his life and live with the pain of guilt for his family's presumed death.
Cilu was 24 when he arrived on the planet. He was 28 when he finally came to terms with what had happened.
In those 4 years he managed to find an old village that was being run by a criminal organisation and they used the people as their slaves to grow their crops. Cilu didn't agree with this, especially after having seen his father and the rest of his race work for Frieza and the Planet Trade Organisation.
He decided to attack the organisation and he eventually drove them away from the village. The people of the village praised Cilu and branded him a hero. They then invited him to stay with them.
Cilu accepted and he took residence in the village and soon grew accustomed to the values of the Earth.
When Cilu was 29 the village elder died and the people asked if Cilu would take over. Cilu didn't want the responsibility but eventually decided that he would help change the village for the better. He did just that and it managed to get the attention of a young woman named Daisy.
She became attracted to Cilu and this is partially the reasoning behind the Saiyan managing to get over the loss of his family. The two of them became very close and eventually married and had a child. Emna was born when Cilu was 33 and Daisy was 27 and she was also named after Cilu's grandmother.
Shortly after this, Cilu asked the people if he was allowed to rename the village. They agreed and the village become known as the Kayu Village in respect and memory of Cilu's father.
Tragedy somehow found its way to Cilu once again though and one day when she had to leave the village, Daisy went missing, never to be seen again.
This would have destroyed Cilu had Emna not still been with him. Cilu raised Emna on his own until she was 16 when he died suddenly.
Emna was distraught, but a local man that had been close with Cilu took her in. His name was Sala and he went on to become the new Elder of the village.
Emna eventually met a local boy. The two became best friends and eventually had a child although they never married.
Now this is where Noca comes into it. Noca was born on the 18th October Age 778 when Emna was 28-years-old.
When his father saw Noca for the first time, many questions sprinted through his head. Noca was born different to how humans are born. He had a tail. This was enough to cause Emna to tell his father her back-story.
The story was far too much for him to handle and he instantly learned to hate Saiyans. He disappeared after that and Emna brought up their son on her own.
Now I'm sure I've covered everything that's important for now. Noca's story begins minutes before the surprise attack on his village takes place.
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