ONE PIECE - Long lost brothers
There once lived a man named Shanks who had two beloved children, young little sweet Luffy and young evil Zolo. Zolo was a pirate hunter and he knew all the roads in town. Luffy still was young and was afraid to go far from the Shanks house because he didnt know the roads in town very much. One day Shanks said, "You will take this ring to Nami in the next town. I will give the ring to you Luffy because you are careful. And you, Zolo will show Luffy the way and dont allow anyone to take the ring from him. Luffy and Zolo promised to do as Shanks told them and headed out. They came to a river but there was no brige in sight. They looked for a boat but couldnt find one. Then Zolo said, "Give me the ring ill take it from here. And besides you cant swim." "No!" replied Luffy. "Shanks trusted me with the ring so im goning to keep it!" "You better give it to me," urged Zolo "It'll be safer with me." Luffy turned his head in and replied no. This mad Zolo very angry. Zolo took out his sword and walked up to Luffy and was ready to take the ring from him by force. "FINE!" said Luffy. "take the ring but if you lose it, its your fault." Luffy was on Zolo's shoulders and they walked across the river but the current was so strong the both fell into the water and moments later they were washed up on the river bank. after a few moments of dead silence Zolo yelled, "Oh no! I've lost the ring in the water." You see? I told you" replied Luffy. "Well i gueese we have no choice but to go home and tell Shanks what you did?" "NO!" Zolo yelled with anger. "Im going to find the ring." Zolo tried very hard to find the ring but couldn't find it. Then Luffy and Zolo headed back home. On the way Zolo was overcome by fear and ran into the woods. "I didnt expect yo back so soon: said Shanks. "Did you give the ring to young Nami?" Luffy shook his head. Where is Zolo?" asked Shanks. "He ran off into the woods because he lost the ring." Luffy said. "Zolo lost the ring!" shouted Shanks. "Didn't I tell you not to give the ring to anyone!" Luffy told Shanks exactly what happend. Shanks was real mad and started to cry. "I must punish Zolo." Shanks summond the Navy and ordered them to hunt down Zolo. "If you bring Zolo back here i'll reward you with gold." said Shanks. No one knows why they must hunt down Zolo but they were promised gold and thats all that cared about at the time. They asked what do Zolo look like. and Shanks replied, "He hads one sword on his back with a green bandanda on his head. Bring his back and ill make him walk the plank as punishment." And so the Navy set out looking for Zolo. Luffy learned his lesson and never wanted to swim agian, and so he ate the gum-gum fruit. So many years later Zolo was caught by the Navy. But the Nay couldn't take Zolo to Shanks because Shanks disappered years ago. So instead they brung him to Captian Lock Jaw and thats when Luffy and Koby saved Zolo from the Navy, but they didnt remember each other because they were kids back then.
THE END
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